Date: 04/02/23 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway…
Typically I flat out REFUSE to read anything that isn't completed unless it is an author I trust (which currently at the moment on this site would be the Shaddix and Starling duo)... but as I have read HUNDREDSSSS of fics I thought since I am dwindling down on my 'tracked list' I would give some compelling-sounding unfinished works a shot, and just completely have the mindset fixed that I will not get an ending --- so this fic ended up being one of those. In the time that has passed since you wrote this vs today, the movie "Alita: Battle Angel" was released and damn it was so easy to imagine Bill-bot for Alita lol. I really enjoyed what we got of this fic and if you read this - well the ending I would predict is that Bill apologizes to Tom, Tom takes him back, Andy comes around and helps them, and through maybe some other random bullshit Tom and Bill escape danger and end up somewhere to live together peacefully. =)
Date: 07/13/16 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 28
Please please continue this story!
Date: 02/28/15 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 28
Buuuh, buuuuh...why? Or atleast wheres the next one? I think this story had just managed to haunt me every once in a while over the years, like i think about this HA-UGE cliffy youve been leaving us with...maybe their new tour can spark some inspiration?Oh the torture!
Date: 02/24/14 11:37 am Title: Chapter 28
Oh my god, this cliffhanger ABSOLUTELY KILLS ME. I've been reading your story for the past three days and it's been occupying my mind constantly and now there's just NOTHING MORE???? This is way too good and intriguing and wonderful to stop, I can't believe it.
Date: 12/03/12 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 28
Frustration, for months on end. This chapter has left me in a state of complete frustration every time i log onto this site (Which is often). I think im going to go cry myself in a corner, cause Bill makes me sad. But im confused on one part, What ARE Jaceks plans for him? Thats the part that confuses the fuck out of me because of course im like "No, you're staying with Tom cause Toms a sexy beast and you're meant for eachother", but then im like "But wait, what did Jacek want for him?". And then i realize that its 2 in the morning and im still pondering what i want to happen.
Oh Please Darling, Im make you a cake and put a cherry on top and ship it to you if that gives you motivation. I will, and ill make it whatever flavor you like :3
Well i wish your Hiatus good luck on its journey, sending all my love your way, cause you're just amazing for writing this absolutely fantastic story. And boy o boy you dont understand how excited i ill be when i see chapter 29 posted.
Oh and if you want to make a story about Jacek and Bills love life, I would totally read that, just saying
Date: 05/19/12 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 28
omg can you like please please update!!!!???
This is *so* good! I am in love with this! God, I just want him to go back to Tom and then they can live happily ever after xD
Date: 04/12/12 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update this story.
It's so good.
Date: 04/12/12 10:53 am Title: Chapter 28
What! You can't just stop it here! :-(
Date: 02/19/12 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 15
i do not know why, but Andreas in this chapter seemed to me resembling very much Dennis Rodman in the Fifth Element movie. )) Just the same mannerism and the manner of speaking. Especially him clapping the hands. ))) but it was hilarious! ))
Date: 08/07/11 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 28
Wow! This is quite brilliant, sir [?? Maybe I'm just confused, but you said your wife's name was Jen, and...yeah ^feels awkward^]! I really enjoy this futuristic sci-fi universe you've created. When I first read your description of your Humanoids, I was reminded of persocoms from the anime Chobits :D But yours are much more realistic. Kind of like a cross between Chobits and I, Robot [the book version is so fucking scary. Don't read it at night!]. But anyhow, I love your universe, as I said, and I would enjoy it very much if you wrote more! Please update soon! :]
---Sennen
Date: 08/07/11 12:44 am Title: Chapter 28
I've read a number of fics that involved a robotic, cyborg or android-type character here but none so successful as this one. I really hope you continue, I love the cyberpunk genre and your ability to capture and paint a whole world here is amazing me.
Date: 07/26/11 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I saved this to my phone to read while on a trip. I didn't check if it was completed or not, I assumed it was, 28 chapters is a bit. But while I was reading I was always wondering how you were going to wrap it up with so few chapters left. And then I got to the end and freaked out.
How could she end it like that!?
I rushed online to see if it was, in fact, completed. Fortunately, there's more to come.
Well, this little world you've created is quite fascinating. The details in the training session Bill had were pretty cool. :)
Date: 07/20/11 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 28
now that you left me on this cliff, im gonna go jump off so i can turn into an angel and read what your gonna write as soon as you write it ;)
Date: 07/20/11 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 21
im just a tad dumb therefore im totally confuzed about what belvedere vodka Prada have to do with him being a humanoid...please enlighten me, im super confuzed! and as for the story, its amazing!
Date: 07/17/11 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 28
oh come on stupid Bill!You know you want him!Just go back to K!!!
Date: 07/06/11 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow, Bill is dangerous! I like it, he should be like this all the time! xD No, it wouldn´t suit the story, but I just like it.
Date: 07/06/11 04:17 am Title: Chapter 28
ooh, great updates. Thank you so much!
Date: 06/27/11 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 28
Good damn it (appoligies for the bad language xD), it took me two weeks (okay, two days of reading ^^') to get back on track ~.~ I loved it!!! Bill, stop being the stupid human you are and think a bit more mechanic aka logic! ;P I really can't wait for more!!
xx Chi ^^
Ps-may take me some time again to RR, but my schedule is only a tad hectic noadays, only a tad x3
Date: 06/27/11 06:46 am Title: Chapter 28
This is wonderful <3 I love it so much!
I'll be waiting for more :3