Date: 05/31/12 10:08 am Title: Chapter 3: Homecoming
It's good to finally see a story that is silly, but not stupid.
The first two chapter were great. At first I was like 'wtf', then I lol'd.
The third chapter was a bit too mushy. The huggy nicey-nice thing can really ruin a good story (dont ask me why).
Reviews that make you laugh? Umm... A woman gets on a bus with her baby. The bus driver says: ''Ugh, that's the ugliest baby I've ever seen!'' The woman walks to the rear of the bus and sits down, fuming. She says to a man next to her: ''The driver just insulted me!'' The man says: ''You go up there and tell him off. Go on, I'll hold your monkey for you.''
Anyway, update soon or I'll rape your carpet.
Date: 03/26/12 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 3: Homecoming
More please? ^-^
Question: when is Tom going to fuck Bill? :)
Date: 10/15/10 06:41 am Title: Chapter 3: Homecoming
ZOMG! I love this story! *Sings Hey You by TH* Want some skittles? I NEVER share with anyone, but you are an awesome writer so, here *Hand you bag of Skittles.* :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! ~hugs Skittles~ I'll be updating this soon, I promise.
Date: 08/27/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3: Homecoming
You better have a good fucking excuse for taking so long to write this next one! Now that I FINALLY find a fic that is funny, it takes like five years to write (obviously). But.. This story is fucking sacred ;)
Author's Response: You are so sweet! I actually have a mostly good reason for not updating, my love. I was in the hospital for a few months. Ulcers suck big time... I started this story right before my last birthday, so it's been almost a year, but I can promise that I'll pick up the pace and update just for you.. ~hugs tight~ You are beautiful..