Date: 05/15/18 08:58 am Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
this was a really really good story!
but sad as well!
u should of did a sequel to this!
Date: 01/07/16 04:22 am Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
So beautiful! I just loved the way you wrote it. I'm so happy right now. :)
Date: 07/30/14 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
It was such a beautiful story!
Date: 09/02/12 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
O.O I loved this story... I think its one of my fav ffs of all time... thank you very much for writing it. So touching. Omg. Just perfect.
Date: 08/20/12 01:58 am Title: Chapter 1: Death and the afterlife.
I actually haven't read your story yet...but the review is beautiful. just that alone had me tearing up!
Date: 06/11/12 10:40 am Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
I totally love this story is one of the most beautiful ones that I have read *-* it definitely will go to my favorites... I can't describe how it made me feel when I was reading it :3
Date: 04/15/12 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 7: An offer you couldn't refuse
The lyrics Bill sends Tom in envelope 1 are gorgeous! I have to ask- did you write them? If you did then I think you're amazingly talented. I'd love to hear them as a proper song sometime.
Oh, and the story is lovely so far- the plot is like nothing I've read before (and I've read hundreds of fics on this site). The only issue is really the description- it lacks detail in some areas but sometimes that's a good thing since too much can be overkill and it leaves something to the imagination. But other than that everything is spelt right and in the proper tenses and it really seems to flow. Considering you say you're a lyricist you have a real knack for stories- my first few seemed like a childs writing compared to this. And I'm sorry for typing so much- I love to give thorough reviews since authors spend so much time and effort on writing for us readers. :)
Date: 11/23/11 09:39 am Title: Chapter 10:In loving memory-2
OH MY GOD!!!!! I'm crying, but trying really hard to be quiet about it because my parents are in the next room and I don't want to make a fool out of myself. But oh my God!!!! That was so beautiful and sweet and then so tragic and now I'm a mess. I love the poems and lyrics that you include in the story, they're absolutely wonderful.
Date: 11/23/11 09:22 am Title: Chapter 9: In loving memory.
Oh my gosh this is beautiful!!! I love this story so far. I almost started crying at the fight scene. But I just have to make one little grammatical correction. 'I drug you into this' the past tense of drag is dragged, not drug. I've noticed that heaps of authors do that on this site, I don't know why. Anyways, onward!
Date: 08/23/11 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
I have to say, this is one of the most touching stories I have had the pleasure to read. If I had to pick one word to describe it, I would definitely say "haunting." For so long while reading it, it felt bittersweet; the two don't even get a particularly perfect ending, but they get one that works for them. Thank you for writing this and making my day that much brighter. (:
Date: 08/16/11 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
It was a really sad, melancholic and beautiful story, much deeper than one could expect. I liked how you pictured all emotions here. You have very original style of writing, I really hope to read more from you!
Is it weird that I like the first couple much more than the twins? Of course they were great to read about as well
but those first Bill and Tom were so perfect! It was so tragic and unfair that they had to die (though life is rarely fair),
I wouldn't mind if you would keep them alive, but then, what would this story be about? Anyway, thank you so much for writing it!
Date: 08/15/11 11:41 am Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
I really like this story! it's written so different , like any other story from this site!!
I don't know which pair of Bills and Toms I prefer- first was so touching and heartbreaking, both so vivid and in love >.< it was so unfair that those first had to die to make possible existing of this second pair >.< second was sweet too of course, both so troubled because they were twins and in love. whole story so sad and beautiful...you did really good job!
Date: 08/14/11 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 8: For I have gone to find you
does Tom really didn't know why was Bill crying?? @@ he must be a really simple man...
Date: 08/14/11 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 4:Tom, just let go.
ummm, anal sex without any sort of preparation? Bill would be terrible hurt after this X.x
Date: 08/14/11 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 3: Memory of His Irresistible Charm
as for now I love it, it's soo good!
Bill with such long hair would look so beautiful, you had great idea!
but punk rocker musician and dancers? @@ very strange mix...
Date: 06/22/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
Still so amazing, even the second time around!
Date: 04/26/11 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 34: Eternity
Ahhhhhhhh I can't believe that's the end!!! I so did not want that to end. It was beautiful and sad and everything in between and that end... Oh my heart.
Date: 04/26/11 07:55 am Title: Chapter 27: The Rhythm
I am bawling. That was so beautiful *cries*
Date: 04/26/11 07:43 am Title: Chapter 26: Boys will be boys.
Intense. And my imagination is pretty good, don't worry ;-)
Date: 04/26/11 06:43 am Title: Chapter 20: Attempted resistance
The poor tortured boys :-( I'm really feeling for them.