Date: 09/26/11 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
i like it its very suductive
Date: 08/31/10 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, that was intense! I really liked it ^___^
Author's Response: *flutterclaps* Yay. Intense is my middle name. no, not really, but my middle names (yes, 2 of them -.-) suck balls so.... xD
Date: 04/12/10 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Was Bill the "hunter," I have a feeling that it was him. I'm kinda confused about the "wound" part. Yet, through my confusion I still love it! That song is so haunting..it a mysteriously good way.
Author's Response: They were both vampires. It was just a really good play of dom/sub between Bill and Tom. xD I'm glad you love it, and that you like the song too ^_^
Date: 02/15/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. This was amazing. I know the song, and I could hear it in my head as I read this...it was really great. I love the style and the imagery you manage to create with the words you use. Keep writing! You're talented for sure :)
Author's Response: Awwww YAY, I'm glad you think it's amazing. I had only heard that song, maybe days before, and somehow this fic came out, and it was so much fun writing it, and messing around with the imagery, especially since I always tell myself to work on my imagery. xD
Date: 02/15/10 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1
So I didn't listen to the song, cuz I can't at the moment, but this was an interestingv little ficlet.
When I got to the end I actually had to do a double-take to read that it was a vampire fic, lol, cuz at first I wondered if that was a really bloody first time or something. Rofl. Silly me.
No, but really, I liked it. Very seductive. ;)
Author's Response: lol, that's cool ^^ i'm still glad that you liked the story even without the song LOL, and yea, it's a vampire fic. vampireBill has been nudging me to write him for some time. xD
Date: 02/14/10 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG :]
I Fuckin Love It .
ALOT .
Favoriting This .
I Love The Song && This .
Sequal ?
Author's Response: *grins* Yay, I'm happy that you love it and glad that you're fav'ing this ^_^ and I could have a sequel, but only if I find a song that fits a sequel lol.
Date: 02/14/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this! The song goes perfectly with it, it set the mood really well.
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. I enjoyed writing it, especially since it was an excuse for me to play the song over and over xD
Date: 02/14/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. O_O
Awesome! I got goosebumps. D:
hehe.
Author's Response: Lol, GOOD, that's a good thing right? xD
Date: 02/14/10 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually read vampire-fics, because they are difficult to me to relate, but it didn't bother me here... quite opposite! I liked the seductive nature in this little ficlet and you made this fit perfectly to the song (which I like too). It was actually sexual without being sexual if you know what I mean? You didn't take this to openly swexual acts almost at all, just the phase before it, the seductive part and then pain... and pleasure. Regardless of a vampire-theme, I liked this :)
Author's Response: See, I do the whole Buffy/Angel universe, so I kinda like vampires. rarely do I like vamp fics on here. a couple of them are AMAZING, and then like 450248 of them are O.o what? xD But I'm glad the fact that they were vampires didn't bother you. it was (to me) what made it so sleek and sexy, but either way, as long as you like it, i'm content xD
Date: 02/14/10 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you do, and my little ficlet adores you too xD
Date: 02/14/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
mmmmmmm, vampire awesomeness. perfect little one-off just like it is, lets your mind go joyriding from there on out.
-volare-
Author's Response: lol, yepyep. it just came to me, but I'm happy you enhoyed it ^_^
Date: 02/14/10 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy begeez...Bill could most deff draw me in with his seductive vibe's!!! He could make me do whatever...he would be the perfect Master and I would gladly be his prey!
So much in such a short story-awesome job!
Author's Response: Lolol, I know, I know. If he was my Sire/Master/anything I'd be all TAKE ME NOW xD
Date: 02/14/10 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
woah... the song just brings it all together XD
Author's Response: Awww, wicked! I'm glad, i've been listening to that song on repeat for 2-3 days now. it's become the most listened to song on my playlist. higher than my TH songs even xD
Date: 02/13/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, i really envy Tom here.
I would bear my neck and every other part of my body he wanted without question. Sadly, I would be the perfect slave in his game, doing everything my Master wanted from me just to please him.
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.
I know what kind of dreams I'll be having tonight, because this scene (and others) shall now play in my head.
AND THAT SONG, OMG!
Sensual enough for what this was.
The theme of the Predator after his prey, patiently waiting for his turn.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH
BB, you satisfy me in ways you will never know. Thank you for thinking of this and dedicating it to me, but really, it's all yours and your spectacular mind.
Author's Response: Awww, bb, don't envy him. I'll bite you anywhere you want ^^ LOL. But unf, like I said before I wrote this for you: THIS SONG MAKES ME WANNA HUMP BILL. AND THEN FUCK HIM SENSELESS LIKE THE SENILE BITCH HE IS! xD well i added the fuck him senseless part, but you get it. xD I love you, and dude, if I hadn't been so determined to show you the feeling this song gives me, this fic would've been stuck in the confines of my mind for AGES. so thank you bb ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have to say, it's kind of hard reading and listening to music at the same time, but I managed and I'm glad I did!!
I hadn't expected someone to make a story with this song, ^^
It was really REALLY good.
Author's Response: Lol, really? I'm used to having some sort of background music. Even when I'm just thinking. But I'm a strangling, and in the end I'm still happy that you still managed and that you liked it! I had actually heard the song on So You Think You Can Dance, but then I heard it was also in twilight and was like O.O wut? cause i don't like the movies LOL. buttttttttt.....the song is wicked, so I'm glad i had a chance to write it in the end. ^_^ thanks ofor reviewing ^_^
Author's Response: Lol, really? I'm used to having some sort of background music. Even when I'm just thinking. But I'm a strangling, and in the end I'm still happy that you still managed and that you liked it! I had actually heard the song on So You Think You Can Dance, but then I heard it was also in twilight and was like O.O wut? cause i don't like the movies LOL. buttttttttt.....the song is wicked, so I'm glad i had a chance to write it in the end. ^_^ thanks ofor reviewing ^_^
Date: 02/13/10 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm guessing vampires? It was good but it would have been better if it was longer, it was kind of like a tease :P
Author's Response: Yea, pretty much. Did I not put the vampire tag? *checks* And I really wasn't meant to be long lol. I kinda just listened to the song and let it flow and that's what I got. I don't argue with the flow. it gives me amazing stuff sometimes LOL. Thanks for reviewing through! I didn't think I was gonna get any xD