Date: 05/07/13 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love this story.... Why did you stop writing?....
Date: 09/30/12 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm waiting for new chapter (:
Date: 06/26/12 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 7
omg, you have to write the rest of this story it's awesome !!!!
Date: 03/11/12 07:10 am Title: Chapter 7
:C Write more soon?
Date: 03/05/12 02:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Pleeeeeeeasssseeee add more!!! :) And any POV would work, I think.
Date: 01/22/12 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
im really excited to see what you do with the next chapter, please update soon? (: this is awesome!
Date: 01/21/12 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
i adore this! so sweet! but Bill hurting breaks my heart.
Date: 01/21/12 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
love it already!!!
Date: 01/07/12 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 7
Noooooo, its not supposed to stoppp ga freaking out here.. you misplaced the next button Noooo! aha just kidding, this story is awesome
Date: 01/05/12 12:26 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my god! Why? Why did I have to start reading this! This is a fantastic story & i'm crossing my fingers that u haven't completely abandoned this. U r seriously a talented writer & sure know how to attract readers. Excellent job on this. I love it!
Date: 01/04/12 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm seriously loving this.
Date: 01/04/12 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I definately smell potential. It's too bad this hasn't been updated in a while. This is really good so far.
Date: 12/22/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
This is really good! I sure hope you plan to continue. I am really interested to see what happens with these two.
Date: 12/22/11 02:53 am Title: Chapter 7
when r u going to update i really wanna know what happens next please update soon its been a year.
Date: 12/02/11 07:12 am Title: Chapter 7
this is a really good story!
i cant wait tell u post the rest!
Date: 11/05/11 08:31 am Title: Chapter 7
Please don't leave this story hanging like this. Keep the chapters coming, I really want to know what happens next! :)
Date: 10/14/11 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1
where are you ? plz update
Date: 08/21/11 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Melissa, I love your little story ^^. It`s so cute and realistic and cute and whoaa. It`s about twincest. Well, they aren`t twins here, but only the through of Bill and Tom doing...stuff, make me so proud that I`m human and know to read. And see.
I have no problem with the normal view. It doesn`t have to be Bill`s *^* as long as it exist
Date: 06/30/11 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
awesome story, too bad you haven't update for so long, I don't think you plan on to finish this story?