Date: 09/05/10 09:55 am Title: Back To The Beginning
This story really deserves more attention. You've got the First-person POVs NAILED, with fully-developed characters and a great plot. (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you think so! That's made my day all happy fuzzy now. :3
Date: 07/08/10 05:26 pm Title: Back To The Beginning
oh, this was so awsome :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 03/28/10 06:49 pm Title: Back To The Beginning
Okay, the first thing I thought when I finished this fic was 'Holy crap'. It was just amazing in every single way, and honestly, I'm SHOCKED this doesn't have more readers and reviews. This definitely deserves to be featured. Everything about it was perfect! I do hope you decide to make a sequel that hopefully deals with Tom dealing with the aftershock of everything that happened? =D Thanks for the great story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot to me that you think that. I'll try for a sequel when I can think of a plot; the story line is eluding me for the moment...
Date: 02/15/10 04:09 pm Title: Back To The Beginning
aaw, thanks for the shout out! i knew this would be a great fic :D so happy that bill was alive, tho i kinda had the feeling that he wasn't dead. im looking out for your new fic's in the future:D
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you again for reviewing. :) Who would seriously want to kill off such a pretty face? I mean just look at him. *points to Bill* He's very pretty.
Date: 01/25/10 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
So yeah, just finished reading, never saw it coming, but it was AWESOME.
:D
Author's Response: Glad you thought so :) thanks for reviewing
Date: 01/24/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 8
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:
Author's Response: Sowwy. :(
Date: 01/22/10 11:20 am Title: Chapter 6
wow. i cant wait for the next chapter! this gotta be one of my new favorite fic's ;) im kinda hoping that Bill didn't really die tho... i have made this own scene in my head that later in this fic Tom is going to find Bill somewhere and they will kill David and Natalie together x) im a sucker for happy endings.. but even if Bill is dead i will still keep reading this :D excellent work!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, everyone is a sucker for happy endings, I do the same with star wars. In my head Padame is alive Anakin is good and they have many beautiful babies.
Date: 01/22/10 08:21 am Title: Chapter 6
Ugh, Georg. :(
I loved the twins hotel stay scene, it was so sweet and loving and ~normal~. I wonder how much Bill regretted not telling Tom any of this.
Author's Response: I know. I'm such a bitch to them. And Bill never regretted it, because when he came away from this messed up world he worked in Tom would be there and what's more is Tom was safe. He would do anything to give Tom a normal happy peaceful life. He stretched himself to think trying to keep it up methinks.
Date: 01/21/10 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just read all this today and I am stunned that only a select few have reviewed! I LOVE these kind of stories and the fact that it's mixed with both past and future to parallel each other, even better!
I feel so horrible for Tom, but he's being very brave and taking this head on rather than chicken out just to make Bill proud!
However, this end is maybe the edge that shall push him into taking this very serious.
Natalie can very well call herself a dead woman walking, because this Kaulitz will not rest until his brother/lover is avenged.
But I hope the more chapters, the closer we'll get to figuring out why she did what she did and how Bill, who was one of the best, was fooled and taken out.
Have it on my favorites! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review! I think there are certain things that drive us harder than other, the loss of someone you care about is one of them.rnrnAnd yes, dear old Natalie, there seems to be a lot of zombies in the spy game aren't there? All will be clafified later, kind of. *evil laughter*
Date: 01/20/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
very interesting story! spy Bill is awesome....definitely looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so, next chapter will be up some time tomorrow.
Date: 01/20/10 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwwwwww CUUUTE
Maor G's please *___*
Author's Response: Don't worry I'm not done with them yet!