Date: 07/07/11 04:47 pm Title: They call it obsession - the epilogue
I spent a long time thinking about what to say about this, and I'm still not sure if I'm getting the words in the right order. This is haunting in it's depth and in the way you've laid out the danger and complexity of their relationship. The physical sensations it evoked - the fear and grief and need - will linger for a long time. You've very good at writing about what goes on behind the scenes in sex and relationships.
Author's Response: Thank you. This was my first ever fic, so it is so big compliment to hear that I could capture even a glimpse o
Date: 05/16/11 11:41 pm Title: Reunion - a prologue
I like the imagery of the white zipper scar. I like the quite intensity of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! This was not much - my first fic ever - so it vwas definitely exactly like that, but I'm glad that I managed to write at least some tension to it. :)
Date: 07/12/10 01:19 am Title: Reunion - a prologue
I hope you reconsider and write more edge material like this. It came across very well and not over-done like so many bdsm fics do. I truly liked it ;)
Author's Response: Then I guess I have to reconcider :). If I ever get inspired to write something like this, I hope you'll find it as good one, too. Thank you again! :)
Date: 06/25/10 09:31 pm Title: They call it obsession - the epilogue
Very well written and morbidly fascinating. Certainly knocks 'vanilla' bdsm and 'cest off their paradigm!
Author's Response: Oh thank you! This was originally wrote to a whole other thing, but I re-wrote and adjusted this into TH-world, so I can't even blame the boys. I'm not sure if I'd write something like this anymore, but at that time (a year ago) this just needed to be written. I'm glad that you liked it!
Date: 06/08/10 04:45 am Title: They call it obsession - the epilogue
wow this was great, i can't help but want more. thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading and reviewing! More of this won't be coming, but maybe something else again some day :)
Date: 06/03/10 12:39 pm Title: They call it obsession - the epilogue
Damn. Wow. Well done...
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for reading, too! :)
Date: 06/02/10 05:32 pm Title: They call it obsession - the epilogue
Wow. That ended quickly sort of, but I adored the ending.
They call it an obsession...
Then I'm not 'they'. (:
I loved it.. and, there was so much pain and love throughout that epilouge. Beautiful.
And it also made me think... I always read Tom's blog but I always think "Is this really Tom?" then I deciede why wouldn't it be? He made an accouncment... confused.
It is the offical site I mean... but.. eh.
But lovel ic. :D
Author's Response: Yep, I agree that I could have done the ending differently. I originally eneded it with the 4th chapter and left the ending open, but then I decided to write a short epilogue there. I think I would have done it a bit differently if I would have written it now and not almost a year ago. I'm a big friend of conpsiracy theories, so I always do these little things with my fics. I don't know why I've got so "obsessed" with the truth behind the polished cover of Tokio Hotel... And who knows what's going on with Tom's blog anyway? Thank you so much for reading and leaving these wonderful reviews! :)
Date: 05/31/10 11:20 pm Title: Climax
Omg...
I swear to you, I can't breathe now.
That was so beautiful. I know there's an epilogue coming up, but wow..
All that emotion, and the beauty of Tom and the beauty of the entire fiction. Usually I'm not the biggest fan of 1st pov, but to get in Bill's head with and all that.. wow..
I loved the significance of the knife, and how it's love. How each other's pain is a turn on :P but still so lovely...
Bill being the sick one.. and Tom being distant. Wow. You're amazing.
I loved it.. all.
I loved the pain, the love, the tears, the blood.. it all.
Tom and the black headed girl was a nice twist, and Bill's reactions to it.
Amazing.
Lovely fiction.
I think this needs an award...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy that I didn't manage to completely ruin my attempts to get inside his head and the love (because for them it's all about love) still stayed there. It just lived it's own life and I wanted to make them dive deeper and deeper as I did also myself. A huge thanks goes to the inspiration and the home of the atmosphere; Cage's song I never knew you. I'm so happy that you liked it and the epilogue is also now posted to the site. :)
Date: 05/25/10 03:37 am Title: Act of affection
this is great, i can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you! There will be couple of chapters :)
Date: 05/25/10 02:12 am Title: Scars of our own
i can see why bill scared himself there. but i can also see why tom was so pissed that he left.
Author's Response: I guess their relationship is nothing but healthy, but for them it's...everything. With every twist of it.
Date: 05/23/10 08:16 pm Title: Act of affection
niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice. keep it going!
Author's Response: Oooh, it will... for couple of chapters anyway :).
Date: 05/23/10 07:08 pm Title: Act of affection
Holy SHIT. This is so damn demented, but I love it. You make their relationship very interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel so distant of this right now, because of a year between writing and reposting, so I would do so many things differently, but I guess I still like the sickness of their relationship. I'm glad to hear that you found it interesting.
Date: 05/23/10 05:23 pm Title: Act of affection
That satisfied my kink craving for today. Delicious
Author's Response: That's good to know :D. Thank you!
Date: 05/16/10 10:07 pm Title: Scars of our own
I adore your twin dynamic and it's always a pleasure to see updates from you. Love this!
Author's Response: Thank you. Personally this is something I grww out already, but I wanted to post this as a repost anywaus, because the original one was bothering me. I'm glad that you like this one :)
Date: 05/16/10 09:25 pm Title: Scars of our own
Glad to see this back.
Author's Response: Glad to see YOU back on reviewing :)
Date: 02/13/10 08:35 pm Title: Reunion - a prologue
Ah...im so confused, so you need to update to help me understand, ja?
Author's Response: Oh, I guess I have to :). At this point I'm not able to post this, because I don't have a beta-reader for this story, and I can't tell when I am able to do so. I have the whole story written, though, so it's all about getting this beta'ed :(.
Date: 01/18/10 05:48 pm Title: Reunion - a prologue
wow. very well written. keep up the good work, i'm looking forward to more of this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I try my best. This was just one of the fics, which got a bit out of hands eventually :D
Date: 01/18/10 02:25 pm Title: Reunion - a prologue
Really interesting so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/18/10 12:19 pm Title: Reunion - a prologue
OuO This is cool.
*kookie fer u* It's different. I can relate to it. I'm pulled in (:
Author's Response: Thank you for review and cookies :). I hope the rest of the chapters will keep you in, too.
Date: 01/18/10 04:12 am Title: Reunion - a prologue
Nice. Looking for more.
Author's Response: And more you will have :). Thanks for reviewing!