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Date: 11/06/15 08:04 am Title: prologue

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Reviewer: Sing-It-For-deaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/13 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hi, just stared reading this and I'm really liking it so far.:)

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/13 11:36 am Title: yes, he left. now what?

Please more! Loved it!

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/20/11 12:01 am Title: yes, he left. now what?

OMG you can't just leave me hanging!!!! Continue this! I want to know what happens when they go on tour!

Author's Response:

i'm so sorry!! i really want to continue this, but a lot has been going on in my life lately (i recently got married and gave birth to the most beautifull little girl on earth <3) i really will try to write a litt in the near future!! (let's hope i didn't lose my muse!)

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:52 pm Title: plans in the making and relatives

I love irish accents! hehe of course I'm OBSESSED with anything irish or scottish. lol

Anyway, this is a good chapter, although I am quite annoyed at Tom for being so shallow. lol I can wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

yeah, tom is pretty shallow.. and i know it's evil of my to say, but at times, i feel like he is so in real life, so the only right thing to do is to bring it into fiction, right? to make it more realistic? well.. to me anyhow :P

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:38 pm Title: a new song and a dream meeting a slight reality

WHOA. Okay I was expecting a lot of things, but this was definatly not one of them!

I'm completely stunned!

Author's Response:

yaaay!! :D thank you!! ^^ you are totally awesome for reviewing to every single chapter! :D

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:21 pm Title: Nightmares have Consequences

Whoa, the dreams are horrible! If I had those dreams I would be really disturbed as well.... Okay that would be a lie. I would actually love to have sex with the tokio boys.... but still lol

Author's Response:

hehehe, well, having sex is one thing, being raped is another ;) i'd probably quit and run away, no matter what the contracts said..

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 11:05 pm Title: Gustav's influence

Wow, I usually don't think of Gustav being the mean one. Still, I have the strongest urge to go over to him in the stoy and slap the snot out of him. And Tom for that matter. I hate people who don't do what they know is right just because they're afraid of what other people might think. ugh. lol

Great chapter btw!

Author's Response:

the boys keep saying gustav is hte bitchy one of hte band, and people keep portraying him as the sweet and innocent one, SOMEONE had to listen to the boys, right?

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 10:55 pm Title: recording

Well, for your information your writing does certainly not suck. Actually it's amazing! I love Charlie, he's a great character, I'm excited to see what happens next!

Author's Response:

hihi ^^ yay for you!! :D thanks for liking my writing :)

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

I think Charlie is somehow related to the twins..... Idk where I got that from but I'm sticking to it! lol

Author's Response:

hahah!! to be honest, i'm not quite decided on where i'm going with charlies character in the end, i've got three possible options open to be that i've got all planned out, let's see which one wins in the end!!!

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 10:33 pm Title: reactions

Whoa, sure I knew that the band was going to be pissed, but I didn't know they were ging to be so cold to Charlie. Especially since it's not his fault. poor kid :(

Author's Response:

the guys didn't have a norman childhood / youth, in my mind, that sort of thing results in them being immature at some accounts, this being one of them ;)

Reviewer: Blinky Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/19/11 09:19 pm Title: prologue

Wow, yeah I woldn't be happy if someone new just waltz into my band. Not that I'm even in a band, but you get what I mean. lol

Author's Response:

hahah :P yeah, i get what you mean!! ;) and thanks again for reviewing to every single chapter!! i swear i'll try to get to writing a few moe chapters in the near future ;)

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:24 pm Title: yes, he left. now what?

OMG! u have to come back and continue this! it's soooooo good!

Author's Response:

thank uuuuuuu *hugs tight* this made my day, i wake up, check my mail and i've got so many lovely reviews!! =D =D and i'm not saying i'll never continue, but lately i haven't been able to write anything... =( but i want to some day continue this, so i hope that day will be soon ^^ i miss charlie! =0

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:11 pm Title: plans in the making and relatives

omg, and the story gets juicier and juicier lmao

Author's Response:

haha =D yes it does x)

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 06:02 pm Title: a new song and a dream meeting a slight reality

omg! Wow this chapter was quite a surprise! I love this story!

Author's Response:

teehee ^^ thank u (A)

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:51 pm Title: Nightmares have Consequences

That dreams are rather disturbing. Poor Charlie.

As for Gustav, I positively hate him!

Author's Response:

yeah, poor charlie, but working so closely with the Gs and bill, with the way they're acting, and confusing little tom, that'd fuck with any1's subcontience, right? and well.. they've always discribed gusti as the bitch, right?

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:39 pm Title: Gustav's influence

Omg! The almost rape scene scared me a bit! I'm soooo glad it was just a dream.

Author's Response:

yay ^^ it worked =P haha xD

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:19 pm Title: recording

I like this chapter! I like how Charlie's straight forward. It really makes him into an interesting character. I hope Bill will develope a liking to him!

Author's Response:

mhm ^^ i like charlie, i kinda miss writing him =0 and we'll see about bill =P we all know he has a hard time letting go of his diva-ness =P

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

Omg Tom is soooo weird! Than again I already knew that :P I'm excited to see how the recording will go.

Author's Response:

yes, tom is weird =P in my eyes, he's always been, and always will be =P

Reviewer: Skin_Deep Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/10 05:04 pm Title: reactions

I like how Tom is really trying to reach out. I just wish the others were as nice as him.

Poor charlie I can't imagine how horrible it would be to be thrown into somewhere you weren't wanted.

Author's Response:

yeah ^^ i thought it was about time sm1 wrote tom as the gd guy, instead of it always being gustav or bill..

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