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Reviewer: bettametta Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/13 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Well written. I liked this shorty. :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/12 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1

this was a good story!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/08/12 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

awesome is all i could say

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

The beginning bit was truly beautiful. I love the sincerity and purity of their love, it really is wonderful. The sex scene was well written too; it was great how you kept the love there without it just turning into mindless smut. And then the ending was back to being beautiful. I loved it.

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/10 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was really sweet. I loved everything about it. Danke.

Reviewer: babalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww, that was so sweet, I loved it!

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/09 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awwww!!! Sweet. Love the love, babe.

Reviewer: Mizuky Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/09 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very well written, you showed so many emotions that was overwelming to read it. I really like it, thank you for sharing your talent

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 01:11 am Title: Chapter 1

WoW!!! So beautiful and hot..I have no word's........
Great job~~~

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/09 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1

that was really beautiful story. so much love. i really liked it :)

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