Date: 03/04/10 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is just what my day needed :) Magnificent!
Date: 12/31/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* that's lovely. All that hard jaged broken past softens under understanding, love and patience.
Date: 12/18/09 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
first time i read this, and have to say, it's pretty much perfect ^__^
Date: 10/28/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was so beautiful. Sexy but still so devastatingly loving. Yes yes, I know I've said the same about all your stories in this series, but it's true. It feels a little different, more blue than your usual stuff, but I personally love it. Even on your worst moments, there's still that one thing that gives you strength and makes you complete.
Date: 10/26/09 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing! every time i see something new from you i know its gonna be a good read... cant wait for the others parts !
Date: 10/26/09 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm late in as usual but I'd like to say how much I enjoyed this anyway. It was hot and thoughtful at the same time. I love how Bill's mind switched from sex to food in a heartbeat. I can picture him do just that. :)
Date: 10/24/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just...wow. That was just hot and gorgeous.
Date: 10/24/09 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
this whole universe is amazing. I intended to review the previous two installments, but they left me so devastated and raw that my mind went blank. This part was especially painful, because when Tom was wondering about how he was surprised when Bill didn't want to be on top the first time they were together, we already knew why, Bill explained it in 'Lies', and so this explanation means that nothing in the power relations between the two should be taken at face value. especially not the way Tom sees them. Bill's reasons for surrendering Tom are both selfish and selfless: he needs to let go and 'recharge' and he knows Tom needs to feel in control. but what is beautiful about it is that this way both of them get what they want, they can be what the other needs. But the fact remains fact: Tom has no real power on his own.
I hope I got it right.
And something I especially liked in this:
'Bill's...beautiful, strong heart' it's the ultimate description of Bill and I thank you for it. I brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: You got it exactly right, thank you for the thoughtful review. :)
Date: 10/24/09 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohdjhgjddhghrrr my god baby
Date: 10/24/09 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so sexy and so sweet all at once. I loved reading it. I just... I loved everything about it.
Date: 10/24/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, hot and simply beautiful. I love this series, I really do.
Date: 10/24/09 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh. *______* So amazing. Even better with you writing the mohawk. Amazing. It wasnt even the sex, but the words around it that made this so utterly devastating. But in a good way, a very good way. *___* I'm gonna go be starry eyed somewhere else...Lol, again, amazing.
Date: 10/24/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmm, this was so nice first thing in the morning, sexy and sweet too. I really love this series. :)
Date: 10/24/09 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
Date: 10/24/09 11:07 am Title: Chapter 1
awww I loved it a sickly sweet type of love and its amazing. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Date: 10/24/09 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
i'm really happy to hear that you're trying to write more because i'm really happy to read more from you :) seriously, i could never be bored with what you write. each and every one of your stories is different from the other and it has its very own vibe and intensity to it while mantaining its unmistakable beauty. i loved this.
much love, chiara
Date: 10/24/09 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I love seeing your writing. This was so hot and wonderful unfff.
Date: 10/24/09 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so delighted you've gotten into this groove. The last two lines of this are beautiful.