Date: 06/23/12 12:23 am Title: First Frame
I really really like this! I mean I can picture everything.
A few peeves I have though is that first, Sophia is not addressed from her name but just by her hair color.
Second she was called young girl. I know she's young, but I kept picturing a nine year old.
Otherwise I really enjoyed the concept :)
Date: 03/29/12 08:38 am Title: Third Frame
Updates please??? Please don't make Bill too old! :( Love your write up!
Sorry, hon. I'm really lacking time to write. cross your fingers for my muse to return, and ask the universe to give me some more time for me to write. :P I'd really like to update soon, I just don't know how soon it will happen.rn
Bill's about 14 or 15 years older. That's in my mind, though. That's up to you, really. It will never really be stated specifically how old Bill is, so it's really up to your imagination. :Prn
And last but nopt least, thank you for linking this. :)
Date: 11/26/11 11:20 am Title: First Frame
just respect!!!!seriously you should try write a novel....i cant stop reading your story!
Thank you so much, hon! I wish to some day have enough time, inspiration and will to write a novel, some day. :) Glad you like the story.
Date: 11/24/11 07:27 pm Title: Roll Film
Congratulations! You should be writing screenplays!!! Like for real! You touched me so much! thank you
Wow! Thank you so very much. That's so sweet! :3 I don't think I cound ever write something like that, though. Nevertheless, I'm still so very flattered. :)
Date: 05/17/11 08:40 pm Title: Third Frame
yay an update, I have forgotten how much older Bill is then her though :/
Bill's about 14 or 15 years older. That's in my mind, though. That's up to you, really. It will never really be stated specifically how old Bill is, so it's really up tu your imagination. :P
Date: 03/06/11 09:30 pm Title: Third Frame
You HAVE to finish this. Please?
Author's Response: Oh, I AM going to finish this :) I never said I wouldn't finish it. I just lack inspiration way too often. Blame my muse. But, don't worry, hon. I will finish it! ;)