Date: 08/11/11 08:24 pm Title: "What happens in room 483, stays in room 483"
Omg, I feel so bad for Bill at the end. He must be so heartbroken!!! :( Mean Tomi left him.
Awwww. But I also understand why, so I guess it was an interesting plot twist, and even though Bill is sad, I still liked the ending.
The whole fic was a good read, fun, and it kept my attention. Well done! :)
I just gotta say that it needs another proofreading cuz sometimes the word choice is a bit off, and sometimes the grammar is weird... But it was still very readable and enjoyable. So thanks for writing and keep going! :) I'd love to read a sequel to this.
Date: 04/19/11 12:51 am Title: "What happens in room 483, stays in room 483"
Ouch ouch ouch!!! That hurt! *cries*
Author's Response: Aww *gives cookie to stop the tears*rnDon't cry! Though I'm glad my story was good enough to make you cry - it's a compliment, really (;