Date: 09/27/10 11:55 am Title: Chapter 11
awhhh,, i LOVED it so much. apart from Tom im so angry at him GRRR! :'@
Date: 12/29/09 03:29 am Title: Chapter 11
omjesus.!! this was an amazing story.!! yes.! yes.! continue it.!! but put it in more detail ya.?
Date: 04/27/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! hm.. One of my faves!!
Seriously I looooovee it when Tom rapes a girl.. It's one of my biggest fantasies.. even dreams.. to get raped by the dude..
It is simply amazing! You should write more Het fics with Tom/OFC or more raping stuff!!! ..
Hm.. WAIT! Is there gonna be a sequel??? :O :O
Date: 12/08/08 11:35 am Title: Chapter 11
omg I love it. It's like one of my fave stories.
Author's Response: aww, thank yhuu ^_^rnrnxx
Date: 10/08/08 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 11
yep, I want more, maybe it turns out to be twins?
Author's Response: okiies.rnmore will be soon, i HOPE.!rnlolrnHmm, maybe. no-one knows yettrnrnx
Date: 10/08/08 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good story but you do know that you cant do a pregnancy test that soon after sex right? You need to be about a month in before you can do one, not meaning to be picky just thought i should point it out :)
Author's Response: yeahh, i know lolrnThankss, but it would have taken a few more chapters...&& i wanted to cut that one off soon..rnrnxx
Date: 10/04/08 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
nice story
Author's Response: Thanksss :D
Date: 09/28/08 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
Maybe you should have a story where its either in Bill's POV or Tom's POV with Sophii's at the same time.
Author's Response: Hmm, okaiirnrnWell thankss xx
Date: 09/28/08 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, big mistake, i think something juicy is coming up!
Author's Response: Lolrnrnthanks for reading :D
Date: 09/28/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Uh-Oh, wonder what Bill and Tom and Sophii are gonna do now?
Author's Response: TeeheernrnThanks for reading, xx
Date: 09/28/08 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow. I know Tom isn't like that in real life (you know; rape) but what a jerk!
Author's Response: Yeahh.rni wanted him to be...different in this storyyrnhope it worked :)
Date: 09/28/08 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oooh. Drama.
Author's Response: mee likess drama :DrnI hope it workedd.!!
Date: 09/28/08 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
Heeyyy! Girlfriend! Lol! I like it.
Author's Response: Yaaaay.!!rn =DrnThank Youuu.!!
Date: 09/28/08 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG! I wsh I was Sophii!
Author's Response: Sameee xxrnrnthanks for readingg !
Date: 09/15/08 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 11
that was sooooooo good you should continue
Author's Response: Thank You, :)rnI will start the sequel soon-ishrnWhen I have finished a couple of my other ficss (Y)
Date: 07/12/08 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 11
it was good. i can't wait to read the sequel. tell me what ideas you already have and i can see if can help, if you'd like.
Author's Response: thanks, well i have a few ideas and have been given some by people who have read this:rn-She loses the baby because of something tom doesrn-the person who rang her, wasnt her mum, but maybe some ex gf of bill'srnrnDont really know what else, any more ideas?? would be much appreciated!rn
Date: 06/20/08 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
Wow, you are a really good writer!
Loved this story!
Author's Response: Thanks, I try my best! =DrnI liked writing this one!!rnglad you enjoyed it!!
Date: 05/09/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
hotness thank you im tired of seeing the wierd stories
Author's Response: hehe, thanksrnI like compliments, they keep me happy, which usually keeps me writing aswell!! =D
Date: 04/17/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
i take back wat i said in my other comment.
i would be raping him back;)
Author's Response: Hehe..... =]
Date: 04/17/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 11
That was amazing! Please do write another one! I loved reading this one! You could put anything in it! Maybe afew twists! Bill and Tom have a fight? She looses the baby because Tom does something? that LEADS to a fight between Bill and Tom... ooooooh the possibilities! Lol!! Pleaseeeee write a sequal! I loveddd it!! =D
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you!!rnand omg!!! wonderful ideas.....I might use some of them in it!! I will write a sequel...dnt panic!!! =Drnxxx