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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/23 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/10 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

im finding it hard to go to sleep right now knowing that ill definitively have dreams about this *drools*

Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/29/10 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

OMG!! ITS AMAZINg,BRILIANT...and just perfect!soo soo hot! (i think i need a shower to calm myself down) your amazing for writing this and thanks for sharing with us..

i LOVE it soo much that im gonna re-read it again..looking forward to the next story

ps- love the banner

Reviewer: TouchoftheWind Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

Awesome

Author's Response: <33333

Reviewer: TokioHotelfanSam Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/09 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

I love it! The spanking, Bill in Tom's shirt, slutty!Bill and this sentence “You wanna cuddle, well we can cuddle with my cock buried within you.” Hothothot!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked all of that...those where my fav. parts to write <3

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/26/09 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

Dear sweet, merciful, Buddha.
You are my absolute FUCKING god.
God, can I propose to you because that, THAT, FUCKING THAT!........*faints*

*shuddering breath*

My god, MY GOD! I can't like AHH.
Ok, I will list what I love and try to keep my brain from dripping out of my ear.

#1. Tom's frustration. Mmm, god, so hot. I love how he was TAUNTED by Bill until he couldn't take it and dominated him.

#2. Tom dominating Bill. Is there anything hotter? Check number 3.

#3. RIMMING! PIERCINGS! TATTOOS! SPANKINGS! Ahhhhhhh. I could do without the actual sex if I could just read a story with rimming and spanking but....you did everything....*sobs* EVERYTHING!

You're amazing in every way, god, perfect. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for writing this!

Author's Response: lol. hahaha *grins stupidly and blushes( I'm really glad that you liked this fic THAT much. From the taunting to the rimming to the spankings and everything inbetween ^_^ I enjoyed writing it, and now I'm enjoying responding to this review ^_^

Reviewer: shimmery Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

Always love a hot teasing bill who drives tomi crazy.

Author's Response: lol. *nodnod* i think it's 100x hotter when Tom teases Bill though *nodnod*

Reviewer: spreadxthexiubesc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/31/09 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

holy hotness! *passes out*

Author's Response: *fans you* lol

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/09 03:00 am Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

wow. brilliant. well written. ^_^

Author's Response: lol. WOOT. i love praise xD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/29/09 08:32 am Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

I don't think I can ever write you the best top!Bill ever to make up for this beauty, but I can sure try!

Author's Response: awwww. listen babe, I ALWAYS love your smut, like ALWAYS as long as you give me my top!Bill we'll be fine xD i can keen in peace xD

Reviewer: XRealityUnknownX Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

*g* oh god... that was hot...
you left me wondering what the fic was going to be about when you showed the banner on msn...
but now i know... and i fucking loved.
because, i do love twc fucking.
*nods* *is happy*

Author's Response: hahah woot woot. I'm glad I could make it good enough for you xD and i'm really glad that you loved it. i heart this fic so much xD

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

Wow.. Just.. damn, girl! DomTom, rimming, nibble piercing and all my favorite stuff... Pure hotness! I knew I could count on you :). Bill surely got what he deserved.

This was interesting, because I can see how our minds are sometimes following the same roads. I'm seeing here some ideas I haven't even written yet, but I've been thinking about etc. Putting some pressures on me here :). Enjoyable to read and like I said before; DomTom and rimming in one fic makes me melt.

Very nice bedtime story for me! Liked it.. a lot :)

Author's Response: hahahah *grins stupidly* I'm glad that you approve of this. Everything in it was Rose's wants and needs xD I will generally write a fic for anyone to asks and add in anything they want AS LONG as it doesn't make me sick xD but i'm glad all of that worked for you. I was afraid i'd turn people off with it lol

and haha, I totally agree with you about our minds being on the same roads, and haha nah, no pressure, your work is always great ^_^ I'm really glad that you enjoyed it though xD

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

Loved rough Tom!

Author's Response: lol YAY. my DomiTomi loves me xD he loves spanking the shit outta Bill too xD

Reviewer: tokiMey8 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

i like it!!!!!!! no.... i love it!

Author's Response: lol. *wiggles in seat* I'm glad that you love it ^_^

Reviewer: more_than_dreams Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

*looks at you* gladly.

Author's Response: lol. hahahaha >.>

Reviewer: xxpoisonkissesxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

i seriously died like 60 times over...fuck like..really the spanking.....your gonna kill me..you really are...amazing story love ^^

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA you know you llove it when Tom spanks you xD

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

w00t! I likie the hot steamy smut in this fic ^_^

Author's Response: hahahaha i'm glad you did. it only took forever xD

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

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You know what that is?

 

THAT IS MY LIFELINE, BECAUSE IT HAS GONE FLAT.

 

YOU TOOK EVERYTHING, EVERYTHING I GAVE YOU AND TURNED IT INTO THIS DELICIOUS CLUSTER FUCK OF WANT, NEED, POSSESSION AND PUNISHMENT THAT HAS LEFT ME BRAIN DEAD.

 

OH GOD! *whines* Tom running his hands down Bill's back, kissing down his back so reverently and Bill responding oh so perfectly.

Tom's own torture is SO CLOSE TO MY OWN, AND I NEED NOT REITERATE THAT IF I HAD A DICK, IT WOULD HAVE BEEN STUCK IN A CONSTANT STATE OF AROUSAL JUST LIKE TOM'S OWN BECAUSE OF BILL FUCKING SEX ON LEGS KAULITZ'S OWN FUCKING BEAUTY.

JESUS, I wanted Tom to have another go at him AGAIN after Bill revealed why he did what he did to Tom.

BILL, YOU JUST GAVE YOURSELF ANOTHER FUCKING POUNDING SIX WAYS TO SUNDAY, FOR YOUR FUCKING CHEEK.

*dies*

 

THE SPANKING!!!! *squeals*

He SO totally deserved that and oh so much more!

I love how Tom gave Bill NO FUCKING CHANCE to back out, to protest, but made him TAKE IT, no mercy, until he fucking submitted and played the tune that Tom's oh so magical fingers could play so expertly like this.

 

Good on you, Tom, because I would have done the same fucking thing.

For his cheek.

For his fucking teasing.

GOOD ON YOU to make him blow you in the shower.

*Flails*

I NEED TO READ IT AGAIN OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!

I will love you forever for this. <3333333333333333333

 



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breathe woman xD i don't need you dying on me xD

but I am REALLY REALLY REALLY glad that you liked this. Like I feel SOOO accomplished because I made your wants reality...kinda xD

and I think if the fandom had dicks we're be in a perpetual state of blueballs with Bill being Bill xD Mp> and don't worry. Tom is tearing that ass UP right now xD

and hahaha I'm glad you enjoyed the spanking. IT was a surprise to you xD

And yea, Tom was gonna fuck him. THAT was me taking out my frustration from Unrequited, I SWEAR xD

But I'm still grinning like an idiot that you liked it and I'm glad that I could give you awesomeness ^_^

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: You Get What You Give...

fuck.. fuck you Bill-chen.. oh well you got fucked..

Bill ALWAYS gets what he wants.. insolent brat. but a gorgeous one at that..

A tramp stamp?-headdesk-



Author's Response: hahahahahah.

your reviews ALWAYS make me smile. and then laugh xD

and yea, Bill's a brat, but we end up getting to read amazing smut because of it right? xD

and yea, a tramp stamp. but Tom obviously liked it xD

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