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Reviewer: Mllsblls Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/23 05:44 pm Title: pure morning

It’s so amazing, I hope you write more than just another part altho I see this is a old fic.. I love it so much. The ruthlessness, sex crazed, dangerous but charming behaviour of Tom and being a “gangster leader” reminds so much of Muņeco / Doll - Tom and I love that… But you are truly unique in your writing and so amazing at it I must say! I wanna read your story’s forever haha!

Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/23 07:06 pm Title: pure morning

Of course I have to leave love on the 2nd one! SO GOOD!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/14 11:55 pm Title: uprising

And I'm here again. This story is bad for productivity, even the...fourth (?) time.

Reviewer: Mizuky Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/12 12:53 pm Title: uprising

OMG this series is really getting better. First I was so impressed that Bushido was the one trying to get Bill, but then they discovered there’re more attacks, so, another person behind Bill. You must know that I’ll continue reading the fics, and leaving a little review about them (sorry if my grammar is pooooorrr, English is not my language, but I understood everything, so thank you for writing so well >_

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Really glad you're enjoying it so much and regarding it so highly! Your grammar is just fine, and I really appreciate the review! :D

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/12 12:58 am Title: the hand that feeds

Ooooh, looking forward to some hot action!

Author's Response: I sure hope you'll find it hot!

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/12 04:13 pm Title: uprising

Sex! so hot :-)

Author's Response: Hot like these twins. ;)

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 01:56 am Title: closer

Who did Bill see outside the van door? This sounds very suspicious. And what lessons does Tom need? I'm a bit slow as I'm still recovering from dirty boysex on wheels.

Author's Response: Someone he knows. ;) It's suspicious indeed! Tom needs some lessons in acting a bit more human and I'm so, so glad you enjoyed that dirty boysex. ;D

Reviewer: puddin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/12 08:43 am Title: filthy mind

I love the creepy,predatory Bushido element you introduced here. Luckily Bill can hold his own but thanks to Tom he will never have to. ;)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoy it ;) And yes, Tom feels his job is to make sure Bill never has to.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/21/11 07:41 pm Title: uprising

uhh....so I did end up finishing this off before finishing my report...yikes. it's due in two hours, but it's okay, i am ALMOST done, at least...:x

Author's Response: Goodness me! Well, I appreciate your devotion. ;D Good luck on the paper!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 04:56 am Title: uprising

Nicely done. I really enjoyed this and can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm pleased to hear it. :D

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 04:26 am Title: running up that hill

Is it awful that I found all that so hot? The twins being powerful is just so insanely good. Leashed violence. *fans self*

Author's Response: ...no? :D I'm VERY pleased you enjoyed them, and the story!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 08:20 pm Title: somewhere a clock is ticking

In no state of mind to guess but i'm sure it'll be good ;-)

Author's Response: Sure do hope you think so! :D

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 07:42 pm Title: battle for the sun

Have I mentioned I really love this universe? Yes? Well, i'm mentioning it again! I love it!

Author's Response: Maybe a little bit but I'm always glad to hear it again! :D

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 07:32 pm Title: assassin

LOL!!!!!! OMG I actually think this is the first fic i've read that realistically portrays the um.. downside of public fun hahahahaha. Squelch indeed! *giggles while clients eye me in my office and think i'm nuts*

Author's Response: *coughs* Yes, most people seem to conveniently forget about that. Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 06:11 pm Title: the hand that feeds

Bad bad bad BAD BAD idea to read this in public. BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes. Yes it probably was. >_> Hey, at least you're not a boy?

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 05:43 am Title: uprising

ooh, this last chapter was great. now we have to depend on Bill to keep Tom in line. =)

Author's Response: Hurrah, I'm happy for that! ...And yes, he needs to at least try. ;)

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/11 02:21 am Title: uprising

Ohhh loved it all :D Now onto the third one!

Author's Response: Yay thank you! I hope you're enjoying the third installment. :)

Reviewer: mizu Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/24/10 03:26 am Title: uprising

All done and I'll be on to the next one in a few days! Excellent job, once again. The nuances of the characters make them so fun. I love Tom as a borderline animal, much closer to his demon soul than his human half. No compassion, no feelings for anyone but his Bill, that pure animal focus. And the way you show that through just a few glimpses here and there, like subtle flavorings in a haute cuisine meal - nothing heavy handed, making the characters sublime. Except maybe Bill, but his (I will NOT use the word diva! I won't!) center-of-attention personality requires that light-hearted touch you use. I had so much fun reading this. Poor Bushido. Why does everyone want to kill him?! I am looking forward to reading the next installment and then on to your other stories. Oh, you gave a character the name Arashi - does that mean you write JPop stories as well? Please keep up the long stories - I realize they require a lot of devotion, time, and obligation, but they are appreciated :)

Author's Response: Oh wow! You have no idea how happy I was to wake up and get this kind of review for this story. ♥ With Bill, I also try to avoid the word diva as much as possible. =_= Though he is quite the attention-grabber!

Very glad it was a fun read. As for poor Bushido, unfortunately for him he made a convenient villain. It's like his fate, or something.

The character Arashi was inspired by Squall from Final Fantasy 8 - no JPop, sorry! Though I do have a friend who's written some very good Arashi RPS. (*is biased*)

Thank you very much for your encouragement! I really appreciate it. ♥

Reviewer: TwinSwords1991 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/10 07:20 pm Title: uprising

YAY A THIRD ONE!!!!!!!! whoooooo!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: It's like you've read my mind! I have now posted the third installment. :D

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/10 01:56 pm Title: uprising

...they do get derailed by sex quitea bit don't they?...but its such good sex, who could possibly mind? I know they agreed to live a human lifetime in wall, but somehow I think that plan is going to change. it is isnt it? I think Daddy Dearest sent out s hit on his sons...at least its all I can assume, who else woul know about Bill?...I'm surprised from what you've told us previously about Twins, that a file wasnt immediately started when Tom petitioned and told them he was searching for his twin, I'd think they'd want to keep a very close eye on that from the beginning you know?...unless it IS someone from Orion going all off the books trying to nip a twin situation before it can be a situation...did that even make sense?...theres a word for it but I cant think of it right now damn it. This was really great. I can't wait to see where you take this next.

Author's Response: Yes, yes they do. But who can blame them? :D It's SUCH GOOD SEX. And...we'll have to see about that, I can't tell you too much! We'll find out more in the next installment. I think you mean pre-emptive measures? It's an interesting theory... Thanks so much for your review, glad you enjoyed this!

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