Date: 10/21/09 06:28 pm Title: A fairy tale
Wow, this is amazing.
At first I kind of skimmed it because it was written in block paragraph with no paragraph breaks and that kind of hurts my eyes. But then I saw the last sentence about Bill wanting to be called Sephia and so I read the entire thing and...
Wow is all I have to say to this. It's truly amazing and I love how you showed how insane Bill was to the real world but how completely normal it was to Bill.
...this inspired me. I don't know how. It gave me pictures :] Sunlight. Secret gardens. White, puffy clouds. I don't know. That's just the way my weird mind operates xD I build plot off of my pictures in my mind. But yeah, feel special because you may have inspired me big-time :]
Author's Response: Thank you :)rnrnI know about the block paragraph. I have several stories written like that. They are some of my first, my later projects are more easy on the eyes. I have been meaning to correct the old ones but I just never seem to have the time. Hopefully I will - soon!rnrnI am glad you read it though, and liked it. Insanity is in the eye of the beholder and well sane is just another form of insanity ;)rnrnNow I am really looking forward to reading that story. And actually I get the thing about pictures. I usually see an entire story in my head before I start writing. I once listened to a piece of music and while listening I just kept seeing this dancing girl, barefoot, dancing in the snow. The picture wouldn't leave my mind and I wrote a story. :D Looking forward to reading it.
Date: 07/29/08 11:11 am Title: A fairy tale
Your writing is very beautifully written. The only thing is I didn't "feel" Bill at all as I read along the lines.
Author's Response: Thank you. Well I am not sure you are supposed to feel Bill since he is not really there. that is the story, it is in his head and he no longer truly knows how he is. hope that made some kind of sense :S Thanks for your comment
Date: 07/23/08 01:10 am Title: A fairy tale
:( the last part is sad.
Author's Response: Yes I guess it is, or I know it is. But I like the ending, it gives me something to think about :D Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/04/08 04:46 pm Title: A fairy tale
It's so beautiful and deep! And it made me feel so many things! I'll never stop telling you what an amazing writer you are!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You know what it doesn't matter it means a lot to hear it once in a while :D
Date: 03/10/08 09:59 am Title: A fairy tale
Such a beautiful story; I liked the way you described the fairy and I love that you made her cry crystal! Really really good. The ending was really tragic, but I feel that if you'd have another ending, it wouldn't have fitted. Good job :D
Author's Response: I really need to read this one again. She cried crystal? Wow. Thanks by the way I am glad you like it. And I agree with you this is the ending that fit. I actually came up with the ending before the story so it was never a option for me to make it a happy one. Though in my opinion there is still hope since in his head Bill is still pushing himself towards normalcy.
Date: 01/16/08 09:56 am Title: A fairy tale
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this ending.
No really.
I just LOVE it when it's all in their heads.
Author's Response: Yeah Bill's head! Me too I love the surprising endings so I like to give them a twist. I am glad you like the story, it is the story which I wrote myself that I like most as well. :D Thanks for the comment.
Date: 12/09/07 07:02 am Title: A fairy tale
A really great story, and yes, i am going through all your stories! :D
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 09/15/07 06:55 pm Title: A fairy tale
OMG I LOVED IT! but it was so sad..the end was sad but i liked it..very cool story
Author's Response: thanks, this is my all time favorite one of my own actually
Date: 07/15/07 01:12 am Title: A fairy tale
this fairy tale. it knoked me out, babe! It is well written and it has a powerful impact on the reader, but i felt really down the whole day after reading it.
Author's Response: oh I am sorry about that but I guess I hoped that it somehow would have an impact o those who read it, so I am glad that it worked. Thanks for your comment. I appreciate it, especially with this story since it is a bit... well special, I guess!