I was looking for something different. A bit more rare a pairing. And stumbled over this series of yours. And not only was it a rare pairing, holy hell it was hot! :-D I loved it! So good, all of them in this series (sorry I only write one review!).

Tom is just such a classic dominate guy, I kinda love it all over the place, even if that is the classical role he usually get to play in fic. You do it great though, so I don't mind at all. And the fact he lets both Kristoffer and Bill at him at times, just makes it more believable, so that was great!

Bill is just the bottom among bottoms in this fic, also a role he plays quite frequently in fic, but again... you do it great so it works. :-D And he really isn't the only bottom in this polyamorous relationship, is he?

Kristoffer is definitely giving Bill a run for his money when it comes to being the bottom among bottoms. *lol* They do take turns in this. Kristoffer is really sweet in this, and I love how it was him that first said the L-word. ;-) It fit great. And Bill's comment to that had me chuckle. And with that in mind, it also fit that he was the one asking the other two to marry him (and let's not get into the legal side of things about that, because then I'll end up with a headache).

As a polyamorous trio they work great together, not only sexual even if that is the focus on the fic, but I can read between the (very sexy hot) lines. I like that. And even though Tom is the tough harsh Dom, he loves them. And he shows it clearly. I was almost worried when Bill snuck off alone to Kristoffer there, but it worked out great in the end. :-)

It's interesting to see where you take this fic right now. Adding a forth to the mix? A look a like to Bill? (Hey, why didn't you go with Adam Lambert? I would have loved that! Love that guy!)

I wonder though how a forth will affect the relationship since they have such a good thing going? It worries me a little, since I really like how they work at the moment. But maybe I have no reason to worry, who knows?

I really do hope you'll finish this! It really is wonderfully written, and there's a need for more rare pairings out there. :-D I'll put up a rec for this fic on TokioHotelSlash.Livejournal.Com for this fic tonight. I hope it will get you new readers!!!

Author's Response: Omigoodness thank you! The original story I wrote to this series was between 3-5 years old so I wasn't sure how to go further ahead with it! At the time I had come up with this little plotsie, I had Mike Muller (who actually used to do his best to LOOK like Bill) in mind the whole time, and as Adam Lambert has gotten quite a bit of attention regarding his attraction to Bill it never even crossed my mind to use him.rnrnThe whole idea when I first discussed this with my original beta (who is no longer reading to give me input)was to pair them up with such out-of-the-norm (yet similar looking to them) people and it was before I even knew who Adam Lambert was (yet if you Google him, you can still find Mike Muller which I did verify before I wrote the most recent chapter).rnrnAlso, Bill may have accepted Mike, but that doesn't mean Tom's out of the woods yet. (I really wish I had my beta to help me re-read my works before I post them)

Kristoffer stood in Toms own clothes, oversized and all. His hair was pulled back in the style of the elder boy, hat and all. He even wore a fake piercing, and slouched in the same manner. – lol awesome!

"Tom, if Kristoffer's you...does that mean you're going to dominate yourself?" - *cracks up*

Their tongues fought for dominance, hands clenching at clothes and trying to gain the upperhand. It seemed that when the usually submissive boy cosplayed, he didn't miss a detail. – lol awesome!

Bill fell to his knees and crawled around his twin, licking at his boxers until Tom let go of Kristoffer and dropped his hands to Bill's head. – lol such a whore for Bill!

"I can't believe it. In a month we'll be married." – weird, why? Who is going to do it? I can’t think of anyplace that would allow three guys(two realated) to get married. Who else is coming? Are their moms going to come? ok fine I’ll go with it but it confuses me greatly.

Kristoffer pulled Bill up and kissed him. Bill moaned and pulled his brothers dick free from his boxers, massaging it as he lifted himself to lower onto Kristoffers freed erection, and watched Tom walk around behind Kristoffer, kissing his shoulder. – this is super confusing.

"A month...is a long wait." – only if you don’t have anything to plan!

Bill kissed his twin over Kristoffers' shoulder, groaning happily as his twins look-a-like pushed him against the wall to brace him for Tom's chosen rhythm. – hot!

That is, until he saw the glint in Tom's eye. – how is this physically possible is Bill facing Kris and Tom?

There was no forewarning as Tom slammed home, keeping up the deep, hard rhythm until he saw his twins face as orgasm struck. – must be facing him, HOT!

They collapsed on the floor, too lazy to crawl to their bed. Tom grabbed a blanket and wrapped it around them – awh so cute

Author's Response: It's been quite a long time but I finally returned. To answer your questions I was just going with whatever went on in my head at the time (and possibly go with an online priest or something. Nobody said it had to be real XD.) Also, the idea at the time actually worked with the drama I was originally hoping to put into the story. Speaking of, a new chapter has been put up after oh-so-long and it has some drama...but I'm not good with just drama so I may have thrown in a teensy bit of smuttiness but that doesn't mean everything will end the way they expect. (Yay?)