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Reviewer: emogurl1306 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

WHAT THE FUCK what happens after this does bill get the recording?????
sooo many questions?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: lol, we'll see. in Marionette. if I ever get the true time to finish it. xD

Reviewer: himisoko Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

Totally awesome and damn well written -- *I'm* scared of what Tom's going to do now... I should probably read those other parts of the series now, shouldn't I?

Author's Response: haha. probably. although, this is considered to be a sequel for my story 'Marionette' rather than Misa Sugar's 'Victim', because even though they're in the same universe, the stories will probably end up WAY different xD

and THANK YOU ^^ I'm glad you liked it and thought it was well written, and I hope I didn't scare you too much ^^

Reviewer: SarahCupcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

wow...you know, I truly envy the way you write. It's like unbelievable.
Honestly.

I really liked this, but srry about your friend. :( It's good to get things out tho.

xoxo

Author's Response: *blushes* thank for the praise. praise always makes me was to become an even better author for some reason.

and i'm glad that you really liked this. And yea >.> my friend is a douche, but it's whatever. i've gotta move on and be happy.

Reviewer: Misa Sugar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/09 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

I feel like I should understand, and I do partially, but the I don't at all. XD

That was way angsty, and I liked it. I can totally see Bill listening to the recording, and just being annoyed, not guilty or sad at all. XD

I can't wait to see how this fleshes out in Marionette, you know?

Author's Response: LMFAO. hahahaha. xD it's alright. it's a mixture of my crap with Princess Jerkypants and then stuff btwn Bill and Tom in Marionette, SO it's bound to be all wtf xD and i can't wait to see how it fleshes out either xD damn me for not planning anything xD

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/25/09 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

Hmm.. Actually this is quite interesting and not confusing at all. I tried to read this as a one-shot and not as a prequel and it made sense to me that way too. You know, somehow I can recognize Bill from here. Well, not like I think that he is like this, but he could be. I mean that he has a strong personality. Also I understand your feelings very well, unfortunately.

I hope that you're feeling better now and I give you a warm hug :). It's good to see, how fanfiction can be one way to get all those feelings out. Writing is a best way to handle them. At least I strongly believe so.

Author's Response: awww, thanks for finding this to be interesting and not confusing. i was a bit worried since when I wrote it i was so upset. and I'm glad that you could recognize Bill from this. I think that everyone has the ability to be 'evil' or 'good' as does Bill, and while he might play the innocent, childlike persona, it's actually possible that there could be something darker underneath. or something selfishly childlike underneath.

and yea, I'm feeling a bit better, I'm glad that I could pour everything into this story, yanno? anyways, thanks for being amazing and reviewing ^^

Reviewer: deedee2413 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/09 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1: I Want To Be A Wreck For You...

So, he's going to kill Bill or did I misunderstood?
I loved it, it's really well-written.

Author's Response: physically, no. he loves Bill to the point where he'd kill for him, but he definitely wouldn't kill him. i think that (and it's only think, since his plans for Bill haven't yet happened in Marionette), he's planning on doing to Bill, what Bill has done to him. Eroding, wearing him down until he his nothing. thank you for loving it however, and thanks for calling it really well-written and for reviewing ^_^

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