Date: 08/10/09 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1: What Happens in L.A. Doesn't Always Stay There
just because she knows things it doesn't prove anything...what to do?
Date: 08/10/09 03:28 am Title: Introduction: 3am Wake Up Call
hmmm...
Date: 08/09/09 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 7: Snooping
That manipulative little good for nothing....
Date: 08/09/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: Snooping
Oh sit. He should have been watching the time! Now she's gonna destroy all the evidence, and they'll be right back to square one. Geez.
Someone needs to step on that girls' neck. I would like to volunteer for the position.
Date: 08/09/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 7: Snooping
yep...i'm definitely going to write for this story in that series of yours xD Elizabeth is crazy and she needs her ass kicked xD
Date: 08/09/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Snooping
That scheming bitch!
Date: 08/08/09 03:53 am Title: Chapter 6: Watching
4 stars ;D
Date: 08/05/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
its a good story its just that girl is a creep-o and i hope the crew see that she is a evil bitch
Date: 08/03/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
Sorry I was M.I.A. for a couple days there. Problems with the internet.
I'm glad to see I'm not too far out of the loop on this. That dream was very creepy. And the door closing while they're in the shower just goes BEYOND creepy. Ick. Not that I would mind seeing them in the shower together, but I'm not a creepy stalker chick who's trying to off one of them...
Author's Response: LADY! -tackles- You're back! -snuggles- we missed you bunches and bunches. i've got to go eat now but i'll talk to you later mah sechsling!!!!
Date: 08/02/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
YES! Tom saw something! I was scared when Elizabeth offered to do food. That chick freaks the HELL out of me.
Date: 08/02/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
shes really really really scary...i still havent figured out whats happening...
Date: 08/02/09 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
Elizabeth is really starting to creep my out. This story reminds me of Orphan and The Ring. Great story!
Date: 08/02/09 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
I'm glad this only seems to be bringing the twins even closer together. But then again, that's only going to make 'her' angrier ...
*scared* lol
But slowly people are realising something is wrong, at least. Gusti and Saki, and surely Tom now too.
Tom, don't leave Bill on his own!!!
Loved this chapter. Even though there's some bad stuff going on, I'm really enjoying the relationship between Bill and Tom :)) Can't wait for more. x
Date: 08/02/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
THAT GIRL IS FREAKNG ME OUT SO MUCH OMG!!!
Date: 08/02/09 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 6: Watching
wow. she's creepy. can i just punch her now?
Date: 07/29/09 10:03 am Title: Chapter 5: On Fire
god, she freaks me the fuck out...*shudders*
And I'm not just saying that.
The overly cheerful attitude in the middle of a crisis freaks me out to no end, plus the constant staring. Ugh...
*shudders again*
Date: 07/27/09 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 5: On Fire
Thank you ma'am, may I have another? What can I say? I'm a glutton for punishment.
Larnarose's review for the "other one" was one of the sweetest most selfishlessness things ever. Actually, I don't really know if that's a word, but you know what I mean.
Date: 07/27/09 09:20 am Title: Chapter 5: On Fire
Gosh a dedication. Thank you so much :)
And what a fab chapter to have dedicated! This was so intense!
I'm pretty scared for Bill now. I really hope they believe him now and get shot of this crazy bitch! At least Gusti seems to be catching on. But I have a feeling, in true THF style - that things may get worse, before they get better!
*frets*
Once again, thank you so much for the dedication! And really loving this fic! x
Date: 07/27/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 5: On Fire
*giggles* Nice hack in the middle of the evil cackling.
Even though you sent me clips of this, I was still totes on edge. My breathing stopped for a few minutes too. This is turning out amazing, hun.
Author's Response: DANKE! -snuggles- i'm glad u liked it. n i had a hairball, gosh. wait, was? o.O no idea where THAT came from, but w/e. lol.
Date: 07/24/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 4: Placing the Blame
I really really like it so far. :)
Elizabeth kinda creeps me out though. lol.