this was a good story!

Wow, this was intense even if it was a short story ! I really like how you describe their connection! Great plot idea :)

The vampire community would pursue their own, but it was little comfort knowing that she had virtually sentenced Tom to death. – what kind of death? An afterlife or dead like a door nail?

Turning a human being into a vampire was not a simple process, not if they were to come out the other side sane. Bill had learnt a lot about such things over the last two days. Candidates were chosen specially and spent months preparing for the change. The only exceptions to that were a few very rare cases of terminal illness, where the vampire nation chose to preserve a life and the person was willing to risk death for the chance at a second existence. Even with the preparations there was a thirty percent mortality rate. – good to know!

Tom was what they called an Accidental, which basically meant he was a poor bastard who had been infected without authorisation. Rogue vampires were rare, but accidental infection did occur occasionally and the vampire nation ignored them. The official line was that there was nothing that could be done so it was pointless to waste resources, either the person would turn successfully (only about a ten percent chance) and seek out others of their kind, or they would die. - *nods* sucks lol lame 10% chance of life?

He was not dead yet, which had surprised the hospital experts, but Bill could tell Tom was getting weaker. – but close to changing to either die or change into a beautiful butterfly, lolz

When Tom finally moved and looked up at him, locking eyes to his gaze, his heart began beating madly. For the first time he thought Tom saw him. - yea!!!!!!!!!

When he was small, Bill had gone through a phase of being fascinated by vampires. They were part reality, part myth with their secretive ways and long lives, but Bill remembered that fascination at that moment. - *smiles*

"I can feel you, Bill," Tom's voice whispered in his mind. "For a long time I couldn't, but I've found you."
It was then that Bill felt something at the back of his head, something that was familiar and yet completely alien.
"We've always been one, Bill," Tom told him, totally motionless against the glass, "we just didn't realise it. I need you, Bill, I can't do this alone." – O_O is this the one that came before the one I read.

His mother looked shocked and actually shied away and he knew he was looking at her with eyes that mirrored Tom's. He had not been infected by blood, but everyone knew that becoming a vampire was a metaphysical change as well as a physical one, and Bill had let Tom's power in. They might still die, he could feel that Tom's change was not complete, but he didn't care. In this they were one, they had to be to survive. – so cool!!!!!

As he watched, Tom opened his mouth and pierced his lip with one long fang, letting the blood dip down and over his chin. Bill couldn't look away, didn't even want to try and he closed the final distance between them like a dying man looking for water. Tom opened his arms and welcomed him and Bill embraced his twin in return and then needle sharp fangs were sliding into his neck and vampire infected blood was mixing with human blood as Tom drank from him. - *grins* hot!

There was one more thing he needed to do, and, curled round Tom like they would never let each other go, he sank his new fangs into Tom's waiting neck. It completely blew his mind as the blood hit his tongue. It was food, it was sex, it was completion, it was everything. – very hot!

His mind was not functioning enough to consider what came next or what any of this meant, but he knew he was where he was supposed to be. Of once accord they lay down on the floor, and, as they curled together, Bill let sleep overcome him. – awh like little vampire puppies!!!

O_O I'm just stunned. I'm a some sorta vampireholic and twincest-maniac and then you put those two together and HELL EVEN THROW THE SEX IN IT...I'm so gone. My mind flew far away...

I liked this one better that the second one, probably b/c it clears up my confusion but also because I like the plot line, the universe, it's really cool.