Date: 08/24/11 11:57 am Title: Chapter 3
So I like that this isn't the usual twincest plot, and there were a bunch of sexy parts in there that appealed to my kinky side, hehe.
I just felt some parts were slightly unrealistic (like the fact that they cum so much, lol). I think a beta will work wonders on this story. Also, OMG, switching 1st person POV's all the time was the worst- it's just unprofessional.
Ok, so I know I just gave you a bunch of criticism, but I actually did enjoy reading this. Well done. :)
Date: 12/06/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first part. I enjoyed it. Tom - Sex god of Germany - or so he thinks! On to the next chapter.
Date: 12/06/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
I want to read about it really badly too. This was awesome and now I'm off to happily read the next chapter.
Date: 12/06/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
To quote Tom "That was fucking amazing." Loved it. 'Nuff said.
Date: 12/06/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
I want to read about it really badly too. This was awesome and now I'm off to happily read the next chapter.
Date: 12/06/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first part. I enjoyed it. Tom - Sex god of Germany - or so he thinks! On to the next chapter.
Date: 01/07/10 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD This was the first twincestfic ever to be completed on THF... 8D
Date: 10/27/09 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
i cant even focus on anything else now. that was amazing and hot
thank you for posting
Date: 09/04/09 10:16 am Title: Chapter 2
haha, boobs talks
Date: 06/01/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amazing PWP. :) Probably the most descriptive one I've read... and maybe the hottest, too. ^_^
Date: 01/01/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 3
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/01/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 2
yes u do billa, yes u do
Date: 12/18/07 09:44 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh,please tell me how can I concentrate on my homework now?! After reading this...this incredible exciting FF! All my compliments!
Date: 10/28/07 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
that is soooo hot! i love it! =] x
Date: 05/13/07 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
RAWR!
Fxcking hot. :|
That turned me on.
You better write more.
Ty.
Date: 04/22/07 08:14 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh my.
^_^
Probably one of the most realistic fics I've ever read.
Srsly.
I'm amazed :D
Date: 04/15/07 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
danke, think chocolate thoughts. :D