Date: 12/01/12 12:29 am Title: Behind Closed Doors
Um... SOOOOOOOOO OOC, and unrealistic, and... well, not bad smut, but still. Unrealistic in the extreme. But, the grammar and spelling and usage were all awesome ^-^
Date: 11/25/09 03:45 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
That was very detailed
Date: 08/26/09 09:59 am Title: Behind Closed Doors
I LOVE THIS! FUCK TRAIN! BETCH LOL
Date: 06/14/09 04:25 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
holy fucking shit! *swallows hard*
that was some of the hottest shit i've read in like.. FOREVER!! =0 totally amazing!! i mean.. u know.. like.. WOW!! *is lost for words*
u TOTALLY need to write a sequal to this!! =0 or maybe more than one.. maybe ALOT of sequals? (A) (A)
Date: 06/13/09 11:12 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
lol i loved espeicaly the fuck train part
Date: 06/13/09 09:38 pm Title: Behind Closed Doors
Okay... while the premise is good, the execution is rather poor. I'm sorry. I hate giving bad reviews maybe a bit more practice writing would help? Your spelling is good, though. Please keep writing. :) It's the only way to get better!
Author's Response: don't worry all is good thanks for the help!!! ^_^