Date: 05/16/15 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a good little story, though the plot is perhaps kind of used already, but it never seems to get old and it's always fun to read these kind of one-shots. Though, what bothered me the most, was that you kept mentioning "he said in German". I think it is pointless to mention that, since I would assume that when the twins are hanging out just the two of them, without cameras around, they would, in fact speak their native language. And also the ending was quite rushed and changed it's course very quickly. At one moment Tom was completely into Bill, touching and kissing him and the next, he's feeling guilty, saying he's sorry and leaving. I mean, the guilt would be completely justified, but you could've built it up towards it. It kinda changed too fast and too suddenly. But all in all, this was very enjoyable and well written!! :)
Date: 04/18/12 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
How sweet! I loved it
Date: 08/03/11 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's cool to see a fic written by a man, it's not so often that we see one! And I must say, he has quite a talent to write slash, the way he describes Bill giving pleasure to himself is hot!
Also, very-well written considered that English is not you two's first language. But I must say, my first language is French too :)
Date: 02/02/11 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
if you wouldnt have told me i could have never guessed english wasnt your first language! :)
Date: 11/10/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved!!! & I want more!
Date: 11/04/10 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's very good, and well written. Your husband is quite a good author, thank you for allowing your wife to post this. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 10/19/09 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
very well written!
Date: 08/08/09 08:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh dear god... I love it! *loves*
Date: 06/12/09 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's good! Doesn't quite feel like an ending, but it's really nice.
Author's Response: I know, several people have requested a sequel. I'm pestering him now.
Date: 06/12/09 12:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Your fiance is a very good author! heehee I loved this. The description was beautiful! He should definitely write more :)
Author's Response: He really is a good author. *grins* I'm really glad you like it and I'll definitely do my best to get him to write more.
Date: 06/11/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
yep
Author's Response: *smiles*
Date: 06/11/09 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story, great pwp. ^_^
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 06/11/09 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Iīm completely in tears.
WHY did he have to GOOOOOO ???? "Cries"
This was one of the best fics i have ever read honestly.
But i didnīt want it to end that way.
Author's Response: Awww don't cry! I think Tom ran off because Pierre felt awkward writing gay fanfic. Maybe we'll write more.
Date: 06/10/09 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was interesting to say the least.
Author's Response: Thanks? I think?
Date: 06/10/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMFG!! *tackles you and Pierre*
First of all, reading this a second time was SO much better than the first. Perhaps it has something to do with it not being sent paragraph by paragraph through an IM while trying to make sure nosey kids don't read. Hmm? :0P
It was lovely ma'am, no doubt. Make sure Pierre reads this because I am NOT going to review this thing AGAIN unless he FINALLY writes MORE. *deep breath*
Although, Schwarzendawn is right. When writing a TH fic, it's kind of assumed that the characters are speaking in German. I'll send you a link for something next time you're on AIM.
And yes, you left a GREAT opening for another chapter or something. Consider chasing that, because you have a regretfull Tom and a confused but sated Bill. Talks will ensue, followed by rabid fucking. *beams* We hope...
*smooches*
Author's Response: Umph. *recovers from said tackle* rnrnLol that might be the reason. *thinks*rnrnlol thanks for the compliment. I'll definitely pester him to write more.rnrn*nods* I know that now, but considering this was his first fanfic period... and I was/am a newbie to the TH world, I didn't catch the slight error.rnrnPerhaps I can write Chapter 2. Pierre and I will co-write. *grins*rnrn*smooches back*
Date: 06/10/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
awe... poor Billa.:).
Author's Response: Hey, he got a blow job... it's not like Tom left him hanging... lol
Date: 06/10/09 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is really good,
if you could continue it, it would be awsome :D
i dont normally read short fics, but i am so glad i read this one, its amazing.. and beautifully described :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'll pester him to write more but I can't guarantee anything. I'm glad you took the time to read. Thanks again for the lovely comments and encouragement.
Date: 06/10/09 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your fiance is awesome =]
I liked it ;)
Author's Response: He really is awesome. I feel honored to have him!
Date: 06/10/09 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it.
good job
Author's Response: Thanks so much.