Date: 02/05/09 01:29 am Title: Fangs
hey thanx for the dedication and you called me my nickname. that's cool most don't notice my username is part of a nickname a special friend calls me.
well the georg part was cool and even throw in gustav very nice.
the whole chapter filled in some questions and made even more. keeping us readers on the edge of our seats.
like that there's a big backstory to make things very interesting. and can't wait tell we find out what bill meant and how the plot thickens with strify killing everyone including janelle. so anyone close to bill dies. so not only bill has to worry about death but also tom being one of the closest person to bill. lets say a "mate". and wonder how bill gets the files must be close to someone in force. ok waiting for more drama from humans to vampires. I guess grudges never die. show down with strify and bill later I hope to the death.
Date: 02/02/09 08:15 pm Title: Fangs
wow thanx for the heads up before the chapter that was thoughtful.
I feel bad for tom I would have never thought he was being abused at home for being with bill.
after this chapter I realized that there's nothing that tom wouldn't do for bill. that's so sweet.
I didn't see that bill would not only have to worry about georg but also other vampire's that want him dead. wow I was surpise with everything you put in thr chapter. very pleasantly surpised and can't wait for georg's reapperance in the story.
Author's Response: this review made me smile and motivated me to write chapter four ASAP!(:
Date: 02/02/09 05:51 pm Title: Fangs
Mmm cookies... it was wonderful! I love all the angstyness :) and you know, kick ass tom was pretty cool too :P Keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response: mmm everyone loves a Bill cookie! xDrnand thank youuu!! more will be up very soon<33
Date: 02/02/09 03:26 pm Title: Fangs
i actaully am interested in this story, i dont really get into vampire stories so this is unusual...i cant wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: well im glad i can hold your intrest! (: rnchapter three is coming veryy very soon!!<33
Date: 01/31/09 08:40 pm Title: Fangs
ok your stories getting more intriguing. a vampire with ties to his human life that's different. bill wants to keep tom safe from himself. I like it so bill still goes out during the day or just at night when he gets a girlfriend or visits with tom. and what about georg the vampire hunter. ok your getting good write more.
Author's Response: oOohhh i believe georg is coming in towards the next chapter(: and thank you! i'll def write more!(: