Date: 01/22/09 03:03 pm Title: Poker Face
And even as I stood there, trying not to stare, his tongue ring mesmerized me. – lip ring?!
“You know… I wouldn’t so that if I were you.” – do not so
Lol it’s cute. You got the poker thing close enough. You left out game details which was a great way to gloss over not knowing the game or the rules. The song mixed into the story was cute! It was funny hearing the lyrics spoken as lines. *grins* I would have liked more seduction from her, more power play and teasing. And I was a bit disappointed to not have the sex but *shrugs* that is more then fine. It was all the way around just *pinches cheeks* cute!
Date: 12/21/08 07:10 pm Title: Poker Face
Oh my goodness, this is hilarious! I was just thinking about how that Lady Gaga song was SO written about Tom! I don't know, but I can just picture a groupie singing that about him! Is that weird?
Author's Response: It's so true. Everytime I hear the song I think of tom :P Haha, it's not weird