Date: 08/11/10 03:39 am Title: 30 Minutes...
yummy I've always loved gummi bears. yes I would love to see more of this series. Seeing as we have one of Bill's dream and one of Tom's is the third going to be a dream that they both have? this is a really great series so far I canot wait for more.
Date: 02/07/09 06:37 pm Title: All The Things He Said...
Poor Bill, he must have horrible nightmares. Dx
I would hate to be in his position.
Actually i wouldn't.
I love this story because it shows how people are soooo closed minded and never want to accept things that are different.
Great Story. D;
Date: 07/06/08 08:41 pm Title: 30 Minutes...
damn I was scared that Tom actually killed Bill so I'm glad that you put the last part in cause now I'm happy, and this is nicely written.~_~
Author's Response: 10x for your feedback =]rnIt's something I can't do without...rnI'm glad you like =DrnStay tuned for the last part xD
Date: 06/18/08 11:55 am Title: 30 Minutes...
Oh I like it! I'm not sure how to tell you I like it, which makes me feel bad since I like to leave reviews! Although maybe the fact I'm at a loss for words is good feedback? I don't know, nice job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like...thrid part got really delayed O.o still isn't up...lost everything "_"...but I'll put it up ASAP...and i guess yes it is good feedback =D
Date: 06/16/08 02:16 pm Title: 30 Minutes...
It is very difficult for me to believe that Bill and whoever the other guy was/is, would do such things in public, even though it was only a dream. Also, you've yet again only retold the video of the song. I have noticed that in this story as well as in the previous one, you say "supposedly God". You opinion on religion truly is of no matter in the stories, and is not necessary.
On the other hand, the ending was cute again, and I like the idea of switching from first person, to third.
Author's Response: As you said, it is a dream...it's Tom's mind playing with him...when the last one of this series will come out everything will be explained...rnrnAbout the video, I dunno but if you didn't look at the story notes, it said clearly that it is based on the song and the VIDEO so yeah...there was a warning if you didn't want to replay the whole video on your mind...rnrnThe "supposedly God" issue is once again, Tom's thoughts/dreams...I'm not implying he's like that in reality... it's just for the fanfic...This was put in, because Tom and Bill are worried they will be taken from each other, and when they see hatred about these kind of relationship, they can't help but wonder about it...rnrnLong response ever xD...anyway I like that you like those things...but i think you completely misunderstood some things in the fanfic...i dunno =/