Reviews For Epilepsy Awareness
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Reviewer: isab2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/22 10:01 pm Title: Aftershocks (Bill)

Beautiful history, very sad for the people with epilepsy.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/17 06:16 am Title: Just Like You

Just found this in the random stories. Gonna go through your page with a fine tooth comb on Saturday to make sure I've read everything!!! It's cute that there was someone there with epilepsy to benefit from him speech.

Reviewer: Kvitka Heo Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/16 01:44 am Title: Pathways

Oh its really interesting, i wonder what is going to happen now. Please continue!!

Author's Response: writing the next one I hope you enjoy it once it's posted :) Kari

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/16 07:58 pm Title: Pathways

Omg it's like going the a revolving door. He can't catch a break.

Author's Response: I feel you might enjoy the final part

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/16 05:29 am Title: A Missed Step

One more thing. The dog isn't to blame though. What if Tom told him to stay and look at the baby... that could be true. Geo seemed to be blaming the dog a bit. That's what I got from the tone.

Author's Response: Geo was thinking of the first time Hunter didn't alert him. The stress of the situation plus his memories of that first time made him frustrated. This was just two times too many.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/30/16 05:29 am Title: A Missed Step

One more thing. The dog isn't to blame though. What if Tom told him to stay and look at the baby... that could be true. Geo seemed to be blaming the dog a bit. That's what I got from the tone.

Author's Response: Part two is up BTW

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/16 04:58 am Title: A Missed Step

Part 2 please asap :)
Although it's uncomfortable to read I love these stories.

Author's Response: Sorry it's uncomfortable. I try to make it as non triggery as possible but unfortunately with a subject like this it will always have an underlying uncomfortable nature to it. I am glad that you enjoy reading them despite that though. Thanks so much. I am currently writing part 2 and it should be up soon. :)

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/16 02:14 pm Title: Strange Behavior

Good job!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/16 07:22 pm Title: Afraid

That was sweet. Nice job.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/16 07:22 pm Title: Afraid

That was sweet. Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you :)rn

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/16 07:51 am Title: Afraid

I was terrified to read this but I'm glad I did

Author's Response: I am glad you did too. Sorry the title might've made you nervous.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/16 09:16 pm Title: Afraid

Being witness to a a seizure is so awkward and cringy. You never know how to act after :(

Author's Response: Never have I agreed with a statement so much before. Thank you so much for reading.

Reviewer: whoopwhoopxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/16 12:18 pm Title: Afraid

Awww this was painfully cute. Tom was really adorable, just how you would imagine a 8 year old. I felt a bit sorry for Bill though. He didn't mean to scare his little brother off, but fortunately he got over it in the end :)

Author's Response: I always wanted to write a child!Tom and teen!Bill fic and just couldn't think of a good way to do it. I'm glad this was good and that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/01/16 06:56 pm Title: I'm Sorry

That store scene sounded like a store sureveillance video i saw once. This one got me in the heart. Good work!

Author's Response: thats what inspired it, I saw that scene in my first aid class and this was born

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/16 12:08 pm Title: Together Forever

Such a cute, sad story. Bill is so protective of his twin, he's such a lovely caring brother.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading first off. Second, I like the idea of how protective the twins are of each other in real life. Like you can see it in their behavior, mostly from Tom to Bill but I like flipping the script. For the sake of this story, Tomi needs a protective brother and that's what Bill is for Tom.

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/16 12:32 pm Title: Together Forever

Sad story, but cute too.

P.S. You call the boys toddlers, but then in one place you said that Bill is 6 years old.

Author's Response: I consider 6 year olds to be toddlers to me, I don't know why, I guess because my mother called me a toddler until I was like 7 years old

Reviewer: ForeverFabray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/16 06:09 pm Title: World Behind My Wall

I really like this 💞💕💞

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Date: 10/23/16 06:04 pm Title: The High Road

Love it

Reviewer: ForeverFabray Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/16 06:00 pm Title: The High Road

I was a little sceptical about reading this. I haven't really read a story about epilepsy on here and I was kind of nervous. I must say that I really like what your doing, as an epileptic can relate to some of how Bills feeling and shit that's happened, the scene with the mother and doctor sounds very similar to ones I've had. I think it's really well written so thanks 💞

Author's Response: I try to be very conscious when I write my Epilepsy Awareness fics because my brother and mother both have it and I hate it when something offends them. I usually show the chapters to my brother before posting them since most of this is actually based off of his own teen years. I honestly am more nervous about people with epilepsy reading this and calling me out on something I got inaccurate that my brother may have missed while reading it. If you continue to read this, then please don't hesitate to correct me in the future during reviews and it can quickly be fixed. I wouldn't want to offend anyone or trigger anyone.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/16 05:24 pm Title: The Vlogger

Awh, glad that it's okay again :) Great chapter :)

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