Date: 04/02/23 12:46 am Title: Forced
OMFG I felt SO BAD for Bill through this whole story. I was so pissed when he was punished because of others screwing with him against the rules. I cheered when he escaped - I figured he'd tell the police and shut the place down. Definitely didn't expect him to just move on and keep quiet, and double-didn't expect that Tom would have been put back into slave status and be nearly on the brink of death by the end. Crazy! My guilty pleasure though is Bill's first time being, well, forced, with Tom.
Date: 04/02/23 12:31 am Title: Paying Customer
OMG. This was hot with a great little twist ending!
Date: 11/13/19 09:57 pm Title: Married Halloween
Yay! A Halloween story I somehow missed!!
Author's Response:
I didn't get one done this year since I was still getting back into posting but I will be trying to post a Christmas fic.
Date: 10/18/18 11:25 pm Title: Paying Customer
this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this
Date: 06/30/17 03:20 am Title: David's Desire
ok so it's been a while but PLEASE finish it off, it'd be so fun to see bill and david's reaction to tom getting with georg
Date: 10/23/16 02:10 pm Title: Married Halloween
FUCK! that was perfect! Huh... I'm amazed!... and need glass of wine now :D
Author's Response:
That's how I felt after writing it. I'm glad it was well received
Date: 09/28/16 05:04 am Title: Married Halloween
this was a good story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/07/16 03:45 am Title: Paying Customer
Well damn! Thank you for making my insomniac woes a little more entertaining. Nothing wrong with a little heavy kink now and then. ;) I really wasn't expecting the little twist at the end, but it actually made this little story all the more perfect. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, thanks so much for sharing!
Author's Response:
As an isomniac you are in good company. I enjoy writing stories like this occasionally. I have a hard time writing straight up noncon as I have seen the damage of rape so I always try to make it consenual. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/06/16 05:08 pm Title: Paying Customer
I'm so glad I made it through to the end. I was reluctantly finding it hot but feeling guilty. It was so relieving to read that last part. Definitely a favorite!
Author's Response:
I have a hard time writing non con so I always put in a twist that makes in cos play or something similar. At least most of the time. I am glad you like it enough to make it a favorite. I hope you will continue to read my stories. Thank you for takin the time to read and review.
Date: 06/06/16 05:00 pm Title: Paying Customer
I dont beta myself but my friend Zarlina does when she got time =) throw away a message to her
Author's Response:
I will do so thanks for the suggestion.
Date: 06/06/16 03:24 pm Title: Paying Customer
Oh! That was fun!
Author's Response:
I am very glad you had fun. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 01:33 pm Title: Paying Customer
This is good, but I really think you should try to get a beta. Maybe ask someone from the staff team or popular writers if they have time. The story is good but there are many things that a beta can help you with to make it go from good to amazing, because really, the idea is really really nice, the writing is... not bad but with quite a few mistakes and things that having someone read it through for you could easily fix.
Author's Response:
I have had a few betas over the years and most of them ended up no longer being able to do it. I am currently in the market. Could offer the job to you if you're interested? I am glad you liked the idea and felt the writing was at least decent. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the constructive critcism. If you would be interested in being my beta shoot me a message.
Date: 06/05/16 01:11 pm Title: Paying Customer
Uu! I really liked this! Though I would've wished for it to be longer :D More stuff like this! :D Good work!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like. I am worrking on a whole series of unconnected stories along the same lines so you should be seeing more stories like this from me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 12:10 pm Title: Paying Customer
ohmygod i need more stories like this
Author's Response:
I love writing stuff like this. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 11:55 am Title: Paying Customer
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response:
I don't know what I sequel would be. If you have any ideas I'd be willing to consider it. Shoot me a message. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 04:45 am Title: Paying Customer
Omg, that left me wanting even more?! Good job!
Author's Response:
I am glad I got you wanting even more. The sign of a good story it leaves you wanting. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 04:38 am Title: Paying Customer
Very interesting beginning! Have not seen this idea yet. Cannot wait to know what will happen next.
Author's Response:
It's a beginning and an ending. There is very little likliehood that I will revisit this idea anytime in the future. I am glad you found it interesting. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 02:34 am Title: Paying Customer
That was excellent! I didn't expect it :D
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/04/16 07:41 pm Title: Paying Customer
I liked it. It was dark and enchanting. The ending is very enjoyable to where it doesnt need any more..but as a reader, you definately want more. Two tumbs up yo.
Author's Response:
It was based on a SVU episode I recently saw about a female madame running female prositutes and she gets raped by an unsatisfied customer. It was terrible on the TV but it gave me a great idea. I am very glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/06/16 02:13 pm Title: Married Halloween
Motherfucker! At first I thought Tom was just a cynical yet normal guy. Then he turned into one of those "candy from the van kidnapper" type guys that he was complaining about. Then holy shit! Bill's his husband! That was crazy...but I liked it :) Great job!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I tried to make Tom as bad as I could think of. I wanted him to be redeemed by the end and the prompt gave me the perfect oppurtunity to do this. I am glad you liked ti and found it surprising.