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Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/17 11:59 pm Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

Loved this sooo much!

Author's Response: awe thank you! I'm glad that some of my stories are still being read ^^

Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/14 05:43 pm Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

Now this. Was absolutly brilliant. Alice in Wunderland and Through the Lookingglass has always been favorite stories of mine, since even though they are cute and childish, there's this sinister feel to them as well that I really love. You caught that here, molded it and made it your own. Brilliant work. I will be pimping this out at TokioHotelSlash on LiveJournal in the future, mark me. :-D

Author's Response: *Deep blush* Wow um thanks. I'm a huge Wonderland fan myself so I tend to make a lot of allusions to it. After reading Through the Mirror, I just decided to have my own spin off of the whole 'madness caused by drugs' and this was it. I have another ending where Bill ends up mad but I dunno if I want to write it out. It may ruin the whole story.rnrnOmg, wow! Thanks! Now I'm flattered. Mind if I add you as a friend on livejournal? Thank you for the critique and please read the rest of my stories if you get the chance! (I could really use something a little more substantial then 'great' and 'more please' although those are excellent as well) Hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/14 01:16 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Omg noooooo this can't be the end .......there has to be more ....CAN you make a sequel to this ......this was freaking awesome

Author's Response: No darling, this was always meant to be a three chapter tale. Don't you worry though... I have another version or two stuck up my sleeve somewhere... ;)

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/14 07:55 am Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Great story, great end - I really liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks, doll! Glad you enjoied reading! ^^

Reviewer: OfSaturn49 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/14 06:37 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

What, this cant be over! I wanted more D:

Author's Response: Sorry doll, that's it. Will be version 2 though ^^

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/14 06:31 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

What a sad story. I cannot help but feel pity for this Bill.

Author's Response: Why? He's a murderer and he's happy.

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/14 06:56 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

That was so hot. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! ^^

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/14 04:23 am Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Whoops! I'm so sorry, I read this chapter and loved it and then forgot to review! So here I am reviewing late.

Bill is adorably naive, and Tom is definitely about to do some corrupting. I could ask a million questions right now because you've made me so curious but I'll be patient and wait and just enjoy the next chapter for now! I'll be creepily checking the page to see if it's posted soon while procrastinating homework...

Author's Response: xD I'm WRITING it to procrastinate homework! Yeah, can't do that anymore since I'm finished... :/ Any hoo, will attempt updatage tomorrow!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/26/14 12:13 am Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Amazing Amazing .......I love it update soon baby girl

Author's Response: Will try to! I have everything written, just need to post.rnrnP.S. You do realize I'm a guy right? 0.0

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/14 09:41 am Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

OS = One Shot :)

Author's Response: Oh ok xD

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/14 10:13 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Me gusta mucho :-)

Author's Response: Je ne parle pas espanol. :/

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/14 08:11 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

sounds intriguing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Glad you enjoied!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/14 10:05 am Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

Oh, really cool Idea. Even there is a sad and, it was a nice story. In a OS i can accept a sad/bad end xD

You have wonderful fantasy! I like that so much!

Author's Response: OS? 0.0 Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/14 01:51 am Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

O.o OMG.......!!!!! If you don't update tomorrow I'M GONNA DIEEEEEEEEEE........!!!!!!! This is absolutely fabulous ...... I loved it and it was barely the first chappie ..........definitely going in my favorites

Author's Response: hahaha lol dear! Don't worry, I'm working on it ^^ Should have it up later this afternoon :D

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 06:57 pm Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

That was really good. And those cards are perfect for the story. Very well written! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to go into tarot card reading and those where the ones I get the sense I'd pull out for him so... Thanks!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 04:33 pm Title: Alice im Wunderland-Weißes Kaninchen, Wütender Hutmacher

sad...

Author's Response: I thought so too. Don't worry! My next Alice in Wonderland!fic! will be much happier... :)

Reviewer: tbgirlie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 03:51 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Omg this is so good. I feel like my heart stopped at the end of the first chapter. Amazing job, and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks and I should have it up after I finish answering all my reviews!

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 03:31 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

You're welcome :) I'm happy that I can help ^^
The chaptertitle is also not correct, but if you want it to sound old and poetic, like the story in the link you postet (http://germanstories.vcu.edu/grimm/rot_dual.html) then it's okay (with a biiiit fantasy)

Just 3 chapters? awww :( But I take what ever you give ;D As long the ending is a happy one (Oh please, please please!?)

Okay,I don't understand the Wolf vs Red Riding Hood-thing, but it's okay.

Yeah, say them they did their job really really well! (I love the fullsize Cover!)

Author's Response: It's meant to ja.rnWell, it's a horror story so unless you like happy endings with sadists then not really happy endings herernTom's a wolf instead of Bill being infected with a demonrnThey say thanks ^^

Reviewer: AryaStark Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 02:42 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

hey there (another german girl^^)
I think the beginning is interesting and I really want to read more. But be careful with the german expressions. The cover of the series is wrong,as welll as the chapter title.... I could help you out a bit, if you want me to.

Author's Response: Yes please >////< Not really German speaking so...

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/14 01:05 pm Title: Rotkäppchen- Ein Umhang aus Blut

Wow ... I love it! I like storys like this! do you know how many chapters the story will have?

just two things ...

First: The german title doesnt make sense. I think you mean: Ein Umhang aus Blut, ( A cape of blood ).

Second: Where do you have the traditionell fairy tale version (the last in the summary)? Because it isn't the traditionall german fairy tale but I like it xD

Sorry for my bad english, I'm from germany but I try my best to write the comments understandable.

Ps.: The cover is really cool!

Author's Response: Probably about three. I only have titles for two but I got an idea for the title for chapter twornSHOOT! Thanks for correcting me! xOrnWhen I put traditional, I meant that it's the wolf vs. Red Riding Hood. When I write the next version I have planned, it'll make sense.rnIt's fine and your English is pretty good!rnrnMy friends say thank you and that they'll have to fix that subtitle ^^"

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