Date: 05/27/12 07:38 pm Title: Getränke, Huren, und die Liebe.
You should put the english along with german in the fic, just because not everyone understands german, and having to use a translate program while reading takes away the enjoyment of the fic. Other than that, its great so far!
Author's Response: Oh, well I've decided to go about writing this and entire different way. This first chapter has been completely rewritten, and the second chapter is coming soon(: It's great to hear from the readers though, and I kindly thank you for letting me know about the German in my story. I will gladly remind myself to do that in later chapters. Thank You(: