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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/23 05:15 pm Title: A Different Kind of Proposal

Aw, these two are fun, glad they got a happy ever after (with some Bill-top action!)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/22/20 02:49 am Title: Summer Camp

this was a really good story!
you should do a sequel to this

Reviewer: Rion19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/24/20 08:49 pm Title: A Different Kind of Proposal

Bill topping, yay!

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/13/19 09:57 pm Title: Married Halloween

Yay! A Halloween story I somehow missed!!

Author's Response:

I didn't get one done this year since I was still getting back into posting but I will be trying to post a Christmas fic.

Reviewer: GhostQueen21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/17 03:20 am Title: David's Desire

ok so it's been a while but PLEASE finish it off, it'd be so fun to see bill and david's reaction to tom getting with georg

Reviewer: Kaulalii Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/23/16 02:10 pm Title: Married Halloween

FUCK! that was perfect! Huh... I'm amazed!... and need glass of wine now :D

Author's Response:

That's how I felt after writing it. I'm glad it was well received

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/16 05:04 am Title: Married Halloween

this was a good story!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/16 02:13 pm Title: Married Halloween

Motherfucker! At first I thought Tom was just a cynical yet normal guy. Then he turned into one of those "candy from the van kidnapper" type guys that he was complaining about. Then holy shit! Bill's his husband! That was crazy...but I liked it :) Great job!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I tried to make Tom as bad as I could think of. I wanted him to be redeemed by the end and the prompt gave me the perfect oppurtunity to do this. I am glad you liked ti and found it surprising.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/16 07:08 pm Title: Married Halloween

At first I really thought of Tom as a horrible man xD but then it turned out that Bill is his husband xD and I loved it, I loved the way you wrote it,and the sexual stuff, really amazing :)

Author's Response:

I love writing stuff like this. I wanted people to think Tom was horrible intially. I wanted people to realize that he wasn't horrible by the end of it. I am glad you liked it and the sexual stuff was fun to write.

Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/05/16 06:56 am Title: Married Halloween

This was really good! :-) I liked the build up. And how you didn't give it away that they were husbands until in the middle somewhere. Clever writing! I really did enjoy this, I have to say. (I wonder if that makes me twisted?) Mostly I love how you pointed out that if you trust one another, talking about kinks and living them out is not that hard to do. :-) I just overall liked it. ;-) I'll definitely rec this in the future at my community TokioHotelSlash.Livejournal.Com. THANKS for the read!

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I worked really hard on making it real but also making it what I wanted it to be. I have a rathe ecentric love life myself because I trust my partner absolutely. I am glad you enjoyed it enough to give me future recommendations. It does make you twisted that you enjoyed this but what does that make me since I wrote it. I think we're all twisted at least a little bit. We write stories about four people who we borderline stalk. Like I said I am glad you enjoyed it. I look forward to seeing you reviewing some of my future stories. I made a new series called kink were I put all of my risque stories.

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/16 08:35 pm Title: Married Halloween

You really used this prompt perfectly and turned it to an amazing story. Great job!

Author's Response:

I'm guessing you're the orginal poster. If so I am glad you liked this story. I have a couple more prompts saved on my computer that I am workng on. Most of them will turn out to be one shots. I am very bad about writing one-shots that are anything other than smut and fluff. So keep your eyes open for that.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/16 08:25 pm Title: Married Halloween

Thank you for making it turn out that way. Dominant aggressive Tom is hot.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it. I was a little worried that people wouldn't like it or I would be considered more twisted than I already am after the story Forced. I am glad some people are taking a liking to it. Look for more one-shots in the future.

Reviewer: BigHairMexican Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/23/13 03:15 pm Title: First Time

D'awwww!

Reviewer: Halona Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/13 05:04 am Title: Twin Connection

Finally found a Bill/Andi story :) And then I saw it is a very good one, You did a great job!

Reviewer: KSena Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/12 04:03 pm Title: First Time

Not enough Biorg around... :-) This was lovely! (Some spelling misstakes and odd sentances only). Still damn lovely! I enjoyed it throughly! And now some Tomstav, please? ;-)

Author's Response:

I am glad you think there is not enough Biorg I completely agree. I am glad you liked it. I wrote this between 3 and 5 am I was so tired it was a miracle that I remembered how to spell their names. Surprise visit is going slow but I will get it up eventually.

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/12 07:07 am Title: First Time

Very nice, Im not a fan of biorg but this one was so fine...
So I will sure read the sequel, if you decide to write one.

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it especially since you are not a fan or Biorg. The sequel is going slowly but should be up soon.

Reviewer: LuciferandEowyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/12 02:43 am Title: First Time

I loved it. Would like to see more Gustav/ Tom.

Author's Response:

It's not goign as fast as I would like but I'll get it done eventually.

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/11/12 09:59 am Title: First Time

Whatever you were smoking I'll have some please. I thoroughly enjoyed this little romp. Keep smoking so we can see what Tom and Gustav get up to. :)

Author's Response:

Well, I am glad you enjoyed it. I am glad you liked it despite the fact that I was dead exhuasted and and half asleep. I will try thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Lothirielwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/12 01:44 pm Title: A Different Kind of Proposal

Um, what's this a mini sequal to? Would like to read the first part of it. This was good, piqued my curiosity...

Author's Response:

It's a sequel to Twin Days. I am glad it piqued your curiosity. Enjoy the other story.

Reviewer: Hexy92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/26/12 12:11 am Title: A Different Kind of Proposal

omg, i so like it and if u will continue it, i can't wait to read more of it :)

Author's Response:

I think this will be the last story for this family. I do so enjoy writing them though so maybe a few more one-shots.

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