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Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/15 08:08 pm Title: No Strings Attached

oh. my. god. this was so horrible in such a good way! not that bill was there for conversation, but basically no talking whatsoever, just bend over and take it. no indication if bill even enjoyed it, not that he had much time to. and the sudden appearance of a condom, and tom's complete apathy about the whole encounter...all of it. good for bill! closure rocks! it's no fun hoping for more when more just isn't there.

i really liked this.

Reviewer: em_rose483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/15 07:47 pm Title: No Strings Attached

Oh I'm happy Bill is free :) It was so lovely to read this! I will always adore your stories.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 06:45 pm Title: No Strings Attached

So many better things. :)

This was wonderful. I've missed your writing so much! I'm so glad you decided to tie this up for Bill. Thank you for posting this!

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 05:41 pm Title: No Strings Attached

Well... can't say that I didn't see that coming. It sucks but it's realistic. And ah, I see now how Aufgeweckt_Engel's piece wouldn't have fit in here anymore.

Hmm, I'm assuming Tom guessed Bill's feelings, to suddenly act this way. Or was he always like this underneath, and Bill didn't notice? Maybe I'll have to read that part again.

*slow deep breath* At least now, as you put, Bill can move on to better and healthier things.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 05:36 pm Title: Fine Line

Dear Lord... Yeah, I'd get frustrated too. I thank my lucky stars that I'm blunt enough to just straight up ask what the status is. I'd probably ask if they had found someone else or if they just don't want me anymore. Not in an accusatory way, just matter of fact. But... yeah. Methinks Tom doesn't want him that way T.T

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 05:00 pm Title: Strangers

I miss Aufgeweckt_Engel's companion piece to this :(

Reading this whole story again since I see you posted a third part ^^ Love it so much. Oh, the unexpressed feelings, it hurts... But in a good way, lol

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 04:55 pm Title: No Strings Attached

Awh ;'(

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 12:10 pm Title: No Strings Attached

A sad ending, but the perfect ending.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 11:43 am Title: No Strings Attached

I'm so sad they weren't able to work out but at least Bill got his answer. It's the worst when someone leaves you dangling for forever.

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 11:26 am Title: No Strings Attached

Thank you for giving Bill closure, and I'm glad you didn't just go for a happy ending where Tom realises the error of his ways and falls hopelessly in love. Your ending was much more realistic and I'm so relieved Bill has finally wised up and realised Tom isn't worth his time. A great conclusion.

Reviewer: Jamie625 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 10:43 am Title: No Strings Attached

Wow is this really happening or am I seeing things? LOL I love this series! Thank you very much for sharing!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/15 08:41 am Title: No Strings Attached

Sad story, but great!

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/14 04:05 am Title: Fine Line

Aaah, please, sequel!? This is sooo good!

Reviewer: Fighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/15/14 04:01 am Title: Strangers

You HAVE to make a sequel of this!! It's too darn good!

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/17/13 12:27 pm Title: Strangers In The Night

Where is the third?

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/13 02:35 pm Title: Fine Line

This was SO FRUSTRATING to read. My heart hurts for Bill. Will there be a sequel? Because this story is brilliant, you know.

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/19/13 02:01 pm Title: Strangers

I love this story. I just read it again after some time and it's even better than I remembered.

Reviewer: AshesPashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/12 11:23 pm Title: Fine Line

OMG that broke my heart. I don't even know what to say? I feel bad for Bill, but at the same time I want to slap him and tell him to block Tom's number and try his best to move on, that he's only hurting himself with this. Even though we are only getting Bill's POV I think that Tom wants more but doesn't know how to transition. When he first wanted to meet Bill out somewhere I thought, "Oh they are going to go somewhere and talk, get to really know one another" not that they were going to meet in a parking lot and have a quick fuck. This last meeting was so pitiful. I really hope that you write a third to this series even if it doesn't have a happy ending. I just need some closure. haha. I need. Anyway. I didn't realize that I had missed this sequel till I was scrolling through all of your stories. I really hope you can find the time and motivation to add more to this series.

Author's Response: Wow, late response is laaaaaate. However, this response took me right back to this story, and I understand exactly what you're saying, but at the same time, sometimes things are easier said than done. I would love to find the motivation to write more to this series, but these are tied very tightly to a specific event in my life that's since sputtered out, so I feel like it might compromise the integrity of the series if I try to write from a place farther removed from the situation than I was when I first wrote them. But now that they're back in my head again, I might give it a shot. We shall see. ;)

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 10:21 pm Title: Fine Line

(reply) Oh, yes, I meant with the first one of this series. That's a real pity. Her writing was very poignant :( But her reasons for leaving are her own.

Author's Response: Yes, that is true.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/12 03:16 am Title: Fine Line

I only just noticed this sequel.

This was incredibly tragic :'( But beautiful in a messed up way. Probably because reading things that make one cry is cathartic. I'm just sorry it stems from personal experience for you.

I'm also extra sad because AufgewecktEngel has disappeared and I really, truly wanted to read her complementary piece to this series. I don't suppose you have it on file..?

Author's Response: She never actually wrote a complementary piece to this second one. And I'm not sure I have a copy of the first one. =(

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