Date: 03/03/13 02:18 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
yay, is there more
Date: 10/05/12 11:29 am Title: Masters Of The House
me likes it very, very much 8D
Author's Response: Thank you! =:D
Date: 02/10/12 06:21 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
i dont think he finished gustavs room or georgs. but oh well that really doesnt matter. i thot the whole part with tom was just unbelievably cute. it was so sweet! your writing truly is amazing
Author's Response: No, he didn't finish the rooms. I got too caught up in writing. Thanks for the compliments!
Date: 02/09/12 11:07 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
okay i have to say that was insanely cute. all of it. just the whole freakin thing. do i have a twisted idea of cuteness? perhaps. do i care if people think im psychotic? hell no. i loved this. i really love this so far. you're an amazing writer. truly. keep up the amazing work darlin.
Author's Response: Very twisted idea of cuteness, but apparently I have the same idea! Thank you so much!
Date: 02/06/12 07:44 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
WILL DO ^-^
Date: 12/26/11 11:28 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
It's very, VERY wrong of me to like this as much as I do...But I can't help it XD Goddess, it started with plain yaoi but morphed into this...*shakes head* I need help XD Very, very well done, Victoria-san. And if you still need a beta reader, I'll beta for you ^-^
Author's Response: It's not wrong to like it at all! I'm so proud of this story and I love to hear that you enjoyed it! Unfortunately this one is done for now, but if you want to beta another of my stories e-mail me at sharkey15@aol.com!
Date: 07/16/11 02:14 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
Lolol, I don't know how I missed this last update.
An amazing ending to the story :D
I was kinda lost with the flashback, however. Maybe put it in italics, separate from the "current" story.
Author's Response: I centered it and put it in italics for you! I'm so happy you liked it!
Date: 06/16/11 02:31 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
That was Haaawwwwwttt :Q__ I love it!
Author's Response: Aaw thanks so much!
Date: 06/15/11 10:42 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
*raises hands in surrender* Fantastich work. You are a goddess at smutty sexy times. Please never stop them? *pouts*
Author's Response: I love this review! I won't stop! My dirty mind is bottomless! (no pun intended)
Date: 06/15/11 06:21 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
Hehe, well I’m being threatened by a water-gun – I’m real scared now^^ I’m more scared that if people don’t write a comment you stop writing. That would be a real threat!
So first of I don’t see why you aren’t happy with this chapter. But if you want to rewrite it that’s your thing – I will gladly reread it – but I’ll do that even if you don’t change a thing. I just am addicted to your BDSM/Tokio Hotel-Fantasy-World.
I really liked your interpretation of the meaning of Bills tattoo. Because frankly I don’t really like that tattoo and it never made much sense to me. Haha, I’m glad though that he doesn’t have one on his forehead^^
Well, the rest of the chapter was HOT as always. Your writing style is still amazing – the best English one I know. I’m not telling you something new when I say: I LOVE your stories. Almost as much as I like Bill^^
btw: Toms suggestion about taping Bill while having an orgasm, well he should defiantly do that – and then he should download it on YouTube – or if Bill doesn’t like that idea, he should just send it to me directly^^ Very HOT line too.
Seeing forward to the new story! Thanks for writing. =)
Author's Response: I would never stop writing just because people won't review me! I know a couple stories that authors gave up on and I wouldn't want to do that to others. Eh I donno I just wasn't feeling this chapter for some reason. Aaww I think "I just am addicted to your BDSM/Tokio Hotel-Fantasy-World" is the sweetest line anyone has ever written to me! I would love to imagine my explanation is the real meaning of Bill's tattoo. You love my stories almost as much as you like Bill?! Wow! After seeing Bill's candygasm video I can't even imagine his face when he cums. . .I just. . .no. . .it's too hot. . .I would. . .*fans self*. . .oh god. . .*runs to take a cold shower*
Date: 06/15/11 05:55 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
omg.....so friken intense and hot!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/15/11 03:41 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
oh hold up! it's over? but...but...i want more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Yeah unfortunately this story has come to a close, but this isn't the end of the Masters of the House series. I'm working on a story right now about the first time Tom topped Bill! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 06/15/11 03:39 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
daaaayum!
Author's Response: =]
Date: 06/14/11 09:58 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
arrrgh!!!! i hate that its a total cliffhanger! this was sooo good its insane. i love how dominant tom is. keep writing!!
Author's Response: I just submitted the last chapter! Enjoy!
Date: 06/06/11 10:56 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
How narcissistic would it be to tell you I like the new banner? hihi... After reading this story for like a thounand times I actually had an excuse for doing it today - getting insperation^^ Seing forward to the final chapter - now that I now it's not the last story about sweet little Billa^^ I shouldn't call him little though... he's like 25 cm higher. Actually I am the same size as you^^
Author's Response: Not narcissistic at all just proud! It's amazing! Yeah he's not actually little, but he is the youngest so...it's okay!
Date: 06/06/11 06:08 pm Title: Masters Of The House
I adore your writing with submissive!Bill *heart eyes*
when are you finally posting the next chapter to this?
please please update!?
Author's Response: There actually is no next chapter to this story actually, but there is a sequel called "Service, Submission, and Sentiments". There's also my new story called "The Weekend" that features submissive!Bill and Dominant!Tom.
Date: 06/03/11 11:52 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
WHAT??? Did I just read final chapter? NOOOO! You can't do that to me! I'm a addicted to your stories, the three masters and little Billa. You can't stop - EVER at least not until someone makes me the present of a submissive Bill!
Author's Response: Nope, there's one more chapter coming! I promise! And I have another story that is already finished called "The Weekend". It's actually a rework of a story I wrote for another fandom, but I reworked it for Tom/Bill. It's BDSM and so amazingly sexy. Even I can't handle some of it! It's too hot! I just requested a banner so if that comes through it should be up next week. Should I just make a never ending story for you? It would just go on and on and on!
Date: 06/03/11 11:44 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
Well, this was another breathtaking chapter of (as you'd probably call it) pain-filled love. And as usual I loved it. It's written so beautifully. You paint a picture of such a delicate and pure Bill. I already told my friend that it's this Bill I want as birthday present^^ I have no idea how you do it because most of BDSM stories and videos are just dirty but yours isn't - it's so pure and perfect. It seems so natural and I'd like to show it to all the people I know because I can't imagine anybody not liking this story - but then I guess not everybody likes Bill or Tokio Hotel AND BDSM. So sadly I can't show most people which is a shame because your writting style is really exspecially beautiful.
Author's Response: Why thank you! I tried to e-mail you, but it didn't go through! =[ I'm so happy you loved it! It means a lot to me. You can have this Bill for a present next year because this year he's mine! All mine! *insert evil laughter here* I do it with a lot of work and a bit of personal experience. *blush* I've dabbled a couple times and this Bill is actually a bit like me in real life. I really love to hear that it's not too dirty. That makes me all fuzzy inside! How could anybody dislike Tokio Hotel mixed with BDSM!? Unacceptable! Thank you for the review! I always love it when you write back to me!
Date: 06/03/11 01:27 am Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
Still absolutely love this story :) More soon :)
Author's Response: The final chapter will be up soon!
Date: 06/01/11 06:38 pm Title: Service, Submission, and Sentiments
Yay for Tom'a chapter! I've been waiting for this. :)
Love to see twins spanking and getting spanked. And how much gentle love there was in Tom's words, yet the obvious dominance. Greatgreatgreat... :P
Author's Response: Aaw thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. I love seeing Tom spank Bill too! Now if only he would actually do it. I can see Tom being that strict yet loving Dom type. =) Thanks for the review!