Date: 05/08/23 09:03 am Title: Breathe
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 03/07/18 07:07 am Title: Blown
Ohh so sweet my heart melted
Date: 09/09/16 03:48 pm Title: Breathe
I loved how original the beginning was. Something about the way you described everything they did and the feelings they had made it special. Kind of mesmerizing! Definitely differs from most NC17 oneshots I've come across.
THE smut part was hot, and the ending.. I had my suspicions about someone finding out about them, but at that point I figured it wouldn't happen anymore so near the ending but OMG it did. :D Poor guys, all three of them
Thanks for this!
Date: 09/09/16 09:54 am Title: Breathe
I loved how original the beginning was. Something about the way you described everything they did and the feelings they had made it special. Kind of mesmerizing! Definitely differs from most NC17 oneshots I've come across.
THE smut part was hot, and the ending.. I had my suspicions about someone finding out about them, but at that point I figured it wouldn't happen anymore so near the ending but OMG it did. :D Poor guys, all three of them
Thanks for this!
Date: 06/21/12 01:21 am Title: Blown
Please continue this series. I read the other one first (whoops XD), and I REALLY wanna know what happens with Jost. I can't take the thought of not knowing!! Please, please, PLEASE continue this series!!
Date: 05/14/12 06:06 pm Title: Breathe
*tries to gasp. cant*
Date: 11/29/11 05:04 am Title: Breathe
I don't review stories usually. But shiesse I loved this. :D
Date: 05/08/11 06:31 pm Title: Breathe
HAHAHA OMG XD last sentence... HAHAHA XD do nooot wanna read the sequel to this if there is any xD HAHAHA too awkward xD
Date: 02/02/11 11:57 pm Title: Breathe
awwwwwwwwww my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01/19/11 07:40 am Title: Breathe
ENDING WAS SURPRISING. NOW I CAN'T BREATHE. XD this is really amazing :)
Date: 06/19/10 12:37 am Title: Breathe
FINALLY a story without a happy ending. I love it
Date: 04/22/10 12:52 pm Title: Blown
im kinda speechless xo
WOW!!
I love it!
its just brilliant and
Date: 12/13/09 01:23 am Title: Breathe
I really enjoyed this. I loved how Bill became addicted and how he had the modd issues and everything.
Really great read. And how the whole forgetting how to breathe is mentioned here and there, nice.
Bad ending tho(not literally). I dont know who to feel worse for. Jost...or Bill? Or even Tom, cause I dont think he knows. :P
Hugs,
Date: 11/19/09 12:13 am Title: Breathe
Haha I love the ending when Jost came in. You could make this a good story. ;)
Date: 10/21/09 12:49 am Title: Breathe
I adored it!
Its hilarious how they got caught though XD
when i read that part i almost peed mein self, because i could just tottaly picture their faces.
Date: 09/12/09 03:16 pm Title: Blown
wow.. really thats all i can say, you have so much more to add than someof the others, your story here is like absolut perfection... i dont think this can get anymore perfect than it already is. Fantastic Job!-Keep it up- :)