Date: 02/11/13 03:44 am Title: Danger Line
this was a really good story!
when will u post the rest?
Date: 09/15/11 11:00 am Title: Danger Line
Sequal! I want to see how Bill reacts when he gets home :D Soon!
Author's Response: I've had the sequal half started forever...I'm not sure when I will get around to finishing it, but I will get to it eventually. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)rnrn
Date: 02/11/11 12:12 pm Title: Danger Line
*sniff sniff* *grabs a kleenex* so touching and emotional.
Author's Response: *hands you more kleenex* I'm touched that you felt that way about this. Thank you for the review <3
Date: 09/12/10 03:23 am Title: Danger Line
That was really sweet. Oh, if you don't mind me saying, you may want to do another proofread again or so~ Toward the middle, there's a few grammatical slip ups, and you have a couple fragments hanging around. They're tricky. XD
Anyhow, it's really nice that you went there for this fic, because this is a touchy subject. However, I think we can all agree, the soldiers giving up their lives for their country are the bravest of us all. The emotion was well thought out, and as injured as Tom was, it's indubitably relieving he'll return home to the love of his life - something many won't get the chance to ever do. Great shot, mate. ^^
Author's Response: Yeah, I'll probably have to re-read it again, I have a tendency to read my stories over only one time and then just posting it, I just get to excited to wait! XD...and when I'm re-reading it at like two in the morning or something, a lot of things get missed, lol.rnrnAnd thank you so much! I am very flattered by your review, and agree with everything you said! Even though I may not always agree with the reasons behind wars, the people that put their lives on the line are truly the bravest people out there. Thanks again <3
Date: 09/11/10 10:32 pm Title: Danger Line
Well, I enjoyed the story.
I was in the military, U.S. Navy Seabees. I never actually saw anything like that personally, but I've heard some major horror stories about it. I think you did a swell job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 09/11/10 10:01 pm Title: Danger Line
I wanna see a reunion one-shot!! I think that would be the sweetest thing on the planet. This one was already really sweet. I love it.
Author's Response: I will try and not keep you waiting for the reunion one-shot, I already have most of it planned! Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 09/11/10 07:34 pm Title: Danger Line
AWWWWW!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! XD
Date: 09/11/10 04:33 pm Title: Danger Line
Awwww :') That was absolutely beautiful <3 I'm so happy Tom's OK and that he's going home to Bill <3
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 09/11/10 03:40 pm Title: Danger Line
I would love to see Bill's side of this. If he found out Tom was missing and then the reunion between them. =)
Author's Response: It's like you took the plot for the next story right out of my head! XD
Date: 09/11/10 02:22 pm Title: Danger Line
This was so sad but really good.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 09/11/10 01:42 pm Title: Danger Line
oh i hooe you make a one shot soon aqbout tom coming home, it would be super awesome if Tom surprised him . . .but thats just an idea, anywho, good job, i liked it :D
Author's Response: Tom and Bill's reunion is definitely going to be the main concept of the next part of the series. Thanks fore reviewing!!! :D
Date: 09/11/10 12:57 pm Title: Danger Line
OH LAWD SO SWEET. God, this entire concept is just so... Loverly. And amazing. And I loved it.
Your writing is always fantastic, and I cannot wait for more from you!! (:
Author's Response: Thank you kindly! You're making me blush! lol. I have a million ideas floating around in my head, so hopefully I can put them down into words soon and start posting more :)
Date: 09/11/10 12:52 pm Title: Danger Line
I LOVED it! But it seemed ever-so-slightly rushed. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! And this was my first attempt at a one shot, I tried not to rush it, but reading it over again I can kind of see what you mean. I'll try to slow it down for the next part :D
Date: 09/11/10 10:14 am Title: Danger Line
omfg. sorry if this is out of whack, im reviewing via cell. anyways, my heart just broke into a million peices....much love, dear. when i get home, this is going in the faves...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am very flattered <3
Date: 09/11/10 05:35 am Title: Danger Line
Beautiful. Thats all i can say, it was truly beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 09/11/10 04:30 am Title: Danger Line
It's remind me to a song: Green Day - Wake Me Up When September end
Author's Response: You're right, the part where Bill is all pissed at Tom for signing up to the army is kind of similar to the part in the Green Day video. I didn't even think about that. I love Green Day <3
Date: 09/11/10 04:02 am Title: Danger Line
This was good. I love the way Tom thought of Bill which made him keep strong and stay alive. I would love to read more, especially about their reunion.
xx
Author's Response: Thanks! The next story in the series will most definitely involve a reunion :D
Date: 09/11/10 03:43 am Title: Danger Line
Such a great story I just hope that the Isreali solider that was kidnepped too while serving the army will have the same ending as Tom.
Author's Response: Thank you :D And I too wish any soldier put in such a situation a safe return home.