Date: 03/27/12 11:08 pm Title: Double Trouble
Um... I think that ending begs another one... where Bill perhaps tricks Tom into using another of the little toys he bought at that store...XD The next one doesn't have to be with the guys from Star Trek, though. It could just be at another hotel...XD ANYWAY, well done...although, since it's rated NC17, not R, you really should've included the sex... You might wanna change the rating =)
Date: 03/27/12 10:50 pm Title: Commiseration
Lols XD TREKKIES!!!! XD Sorry, couldn't resist XD I'm not a trekkie (not NEARLY that obsessed with Star Trek to be called that, and by the way, my computer accepted "trekkie" as a word. FUCK yeah XD), but I know Star Trek, and the the thought of them being together...XD It just makes me wanna laugh at the cliche-ness of it XD ANYWAY! Well done, and I'll be interested to see what you write AFTER this series. Can't wait to see the next fic in this series, either, but still. WRITE SOME MORE PLEASE!!!!
Date: 03/30/10 08:49 pm Title: Double Trouble
That was wonderful! I was overjoyed when I saw that you wrote a sequel! I enjoyed reading this. :]] Nice job, and I look forward to reading more of your work. ^^
Date: 01/29/10 06:27 pm Title: Double Trouble
I cant help but wonder what Bill bought- you should write more in this series...
Author's Response: ^_^ I'm definitely considering it. There will probably be another one written once I get used to my new schedule. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/25/10 06:42 pm Title: Double Trouble
that was cute and fun and sexy all rolled into one. i adored it xD
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. <3
Date: 01/20/10 06:39 pm Title: Commiseration
I absolutley love it. :]
You pretty much wrote the characters on the spot. I look forward to reading your other stories, and perhaps a sequal? ;]]
Author's Response: So glad to hear that! It's my first RPF, so I was a bit nervous about it. The sequel is being written right now actually. ^_~ Should be out in a day or two. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01/17/10 06:28 pm Title: Commiseration
cute
sequel? please?
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I'm writing the sequel right now. It should be up in a day or two!
Date: 01/17/10 05:47 pm Title: Commiseration
Hey I really enjoyed this! Liked the characters and your way of writing. : ) hope you'll write more fiction soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! I was really nervous about writing it. I've never dabbled in RPF before, but I'm glad I did! At the moment, I'm working on this one's sequel. There's also a beginning!relationship Tom/Bill story. I'm debating whether it will be a long one-shot or if I should give in and just write chapters. Thanks so much for reviewing!