Date: 10/12/10 03:48 pm Title: Fantasien
I read this a while ago but decided to review now !!
Is it possible for ANYONE to stay mad at Lyric for long amounts of time? Cuz I'm thinking its doubtful
Author's Response: Lyric: Course, not. *grins*
rnMisery: *snoooooooooorts*
rnLyric: *glares* Hush, you.
rnMisery: *snickers* What about the time yo-
rnLyric: *slaps his hand over her mouth* Thanks for your review! <3
Date: 09/16/10 11:13 am Title: Fantasien
Ahahahaha. I freakin' love the flirty banter, it makes me giggle. And I like how Lyr seems really innocent, but certain things suggest that he might not be /that/ innocent. And yeah. I dunno. ^^
Author's Response: *snorts* He totally wasn't all that innocent. He was a virgin by a loophole. XD But yeah... I dunno either. <3
Date: 09/16/10 10:54 am Title: A Fall From Grace
Hiiii! Ayup, 'm finally reviewing/raping/showering your writing with praise. XD I liked this a lot. At first, I figured that Bill was just an asshole who took the world for granted or something, but as I read on, the fact that he was in jail came as an awesome slap in the face. I mean, 's one thing to just be like, "Oh, look, Bill's locked up!" or go, "Look, he's all comfy and warm in his bed, and he's just angsting. PSYCH! He's totally a murderer." And yeah. God, I hope you know what I mean. *giggles* Mmkay, I'm not sure I have much else to say on this one, other than I'm kinda sad that it's only a one-shot. Awesome job, Miss Mis!!
Author's Response: *gigglefits* Hyped up much? <3 Yeah, I always wondered about making this into an actual story, but that would require actual thought and plotting and that's.. just too much work. *soaks in the laze* Maybe one da- *snorts* Nah, not gonna happen. XD Could toooootally consider making a muse, though.. *shifty eyes*
Date: 08/29/10 04:44 am Title: Fantasien
Loved it ^^
xx Chi :3
Author's Response: *eeeee's* Thank you, doll face! <3
Date: 03/25/10 09:56 pm Title: Atonal
Sleepovers? Blowing off hot girls? Alcohol and Dancing? I love It! Bastian seems really sweet!
I am so glad that Lyric was able to get away for a night, and be a teenager. To feel the desire, and strong attraction to someone else. I think this was a good night for Lyric :)
Thank You so much for the little view into Lyrics past before St. Hell..
Author's Response:
Lyric: Bastien IS a good guy, his mind was just corrupted by Bradyen an-
Misery: Lyric! *gives a look* I know you want to defend him, but it's best to leave the for the next one shot.
Lyric: O_O Oh GAWD! You're gonna write that one?!
Misery: *nods slowly* Gonna have to, babes. For people to fully understand you, they gotta see where you're coming from.
Lyric: *groans and collapses*Misery: *snickers* Drama queen... ANYWAYS! XD You're welcome, Anna. Keep your eyes peeled for the next one shot, and the next update to St. Hell!
Date: 03/25/10 09:24 pm Title: Atonal
Aww!! I hate argueing parents. Makes me just want to hug Lyric..
I like gettin an insight into his life. Gonna go read the next part now...
Thanks So Much!
Author's Response:
Lyric: *shifty eyes - sneak attack hug* HAI!
Misery: *giggles* He gives you luffles
Lyric: XD
Date: 03/25/10 04:00 pm Title: Atonal
*read both one shots*
I'm glad to see insight into Lyr's life *will EVENTUALLY get around to reading St. Hell* My only suggestion is to reread and check that you replaced Bastien's name with Jimmy. There were a few times you forgot >_-
Author's Response:
Lyric: O_o Wrong universe, Mis...
Misery: *groans* I know, I know... Blame Word for not replacing them when I told it to!! *stomps*
Lyric: *blinks* What are you, twelve?
Misery: *shifty eyes* Maybe? *grins* Ok, fit over! *nuzzles Anna* Danke liebling! I'm glad you caught those before another reader did and I ended up embarrassed as shit!
Lyric: You're already embarrassing yourself.
Misery: *death glare*
Lyric: Uhm... But I still love you? *smiles meekly, offering hugs*
Misery: *nods and hugs* Damn straight you do.
Date: 03/25/10 03:30 pm Title: Atonal
Tom: -groans, covering his eyes- Now this part I could've lived without reading. Well, he first half of it was fine... but god... -groans again- I do not wanna know about my brother... doing that kind of stuff with someone. I think I'mma lose my lunch.
Axel: -smiles a little and pats his head- so over dramatic... -smiles a little at Lyr before hugging him again-
Alcie: -stops groping Mis and looks around- Hmmm...? Oh, -shifty eyes- Hi. ^^
Author's Response:
Lyric: *gigglefit* Oh please, Tom! It's not like there was anything graphic! It was very tasteful and sweet. My first kiss with a guy. *flushes*
Misery: *fondles and nuzzles Nony*
Lyric: O_O And yet you're ok watching that!? *clings to Axel and buries face in his neck* Blind me! Please, blind me!
Date: 03/25/10 03:25 pm Title: Atonal
Tom: ... ... -blinks slowly- I... I dunno what to say.
Axel: -hugs Lyric with a small, sad smile-
Alcie: Well since these two fail with words, I'll just say it's nice to see some of Lyr's happy memories. ^^ It sucks about his parents fighting, for sure. But at least he had a good friend. :D
Author's Response:
Misery: Well Bastien wasn't ALWAYS bad.
Lyric: *nodnod* He was very good to me, up until... well, you know. *looks away*
Misery: *pets him* It's good to hold onto the fond memories.
Lyric: *tackles Tom and Axel* No sad smiles. The past is in the past.
Misery: *beams and nuzzles Nony* So proud of our boys. They've come such a long way...
Date: 03/02/10 06:37 am Title: Fantasien
gah loved... -loves all over-eth- so gla di got to actually meet you tonight, though i do hope alice doesnt' feel i'm stealing you, -huggles loves and gives good sex to alcie- -gives mistress submisive sex to misery- YES MISTResss
now for some random osmsawce SKITTLES ! FTW!!
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love mistress zwei
Author's Response:
Misery: *blinks and whines* But yooooou're the dom!! *flails*
Lyric: Oh for fucks sake.. I'll be the dom! *cracks whip*
Misery: *shifty eyes* ...that could work. XD
Date: 02/25/10 02:33 am Title: Fantasien
Thoughts? Well mine include HOW DOES LYRIC GO FROM THIS 'Innocent' BOY TO THE THING PERSON HE IS IN St. Hell...
Ughh, this was good, but I need to know what happened to him!!! lol..
Thanks So Much!! :)
Author's Response:
Lyric: *blinks* "Thing person" *arches a curious brow*
Misery: *pets* Shuddup, Lyr. She thought you were innocent
Lyric: But I am was innocent!
Misery: 'was' being the operative word.
Lyric: *huffs and folds arms with a pout* 'M still innocent...
Misery: *eyes* Yeah, uh huh... ANYWAYS! *beams* Thank you for your thoughts! I'm beginning to understand how helpful reviews really are when it comes to inspiring writing and keeping the urge to update alive. The transition from 'innocent' to well, 'bitter' will be answered soon enough. Trust me, I'm as excited to write it as you are to read it! *MUAH* Thanks again!!
Date: 02/24/10 12:05 am Title: Fantasien
Alcie: Aw, sup- o.o
Tom: -shoves apple in Alcie's mouth- You shut up. WTF happened to this guy? This guy is cool. -nods-
Axel: -blinks and nods slightly, can't get past first meeting- o.o -hugs Lyr tightly-
Author's Response:
Misery: *giggles* omg, you guys are so adorkable!
Lyric: *blinks back tears*
Misery: *pulls Lyric close and coddles him* It'll be ok, liebchen. You and I still have the memories and, while they're bitter sweet, they're better than none at all
Lyric: *whimpers and hides away*