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Reviewer: B-schafer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 04:09 am Title: Back home

LOL. this is toooo funny XD

Author's Response: thanks ^_^

Reviewer: B-schafer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 03:43 am Title: Family business

yaay! months ago I read this but could never remember what it was called, now I found it. Holy crap this is hot. Even better the second time II read it, good work ;)

Author's Response: *bows*rntoo kind

Reviewer: B-schafer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/26/12 02:43 am Title: Family bonds

ehehehe, I love schaf-cest. Its a guilty pleasure of mine, and you wrote it perfectly :D

Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: takemetotokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/09 01:01 pm Title: Family bonds

This was amazing. Glad I found the sequel!!

Author's Response: You can also read Feels like home. It's got the same pairing even though it's not the same setting I had in this one :)

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/24/09 07:52 am Title: Feels like home

So I'm a 99% twincester, and I hate Het, but I started reading this story cuz I'm into incest (yeah, i'm kinky like that), and it had a dash of the twins also, so yeah, I thought why not try Gustav/Franzi for once?
I actually read this when u first wrote it a few months ago now and I'm only reviewing it now.
I rem I liked the way you weaved the complixity and mystery of what happend to Franzi into the plot for so long, kept the reader guessing, instead of just telling what happened from the start. It made the story more interesting to keep reading to find out the truth. I rem I thought the love scenes were ok, but Het in general (in fanfic) turns me off a bit. Tho I rem I found the bathroom scene to be quite touching. I rem I loved when Bill would poke his nose into the plot and like picked out clothes for Franz to wear -cute plot addition that made it seem more realistic.
So yeah, not my fav story because its out of my genre-comfort-range, but I applaude you on making it interesting enough for me to read to the very end. Which makes this (probably, based on my memory right now) the first and only Het I've read from start to finish on this site! lol. So good job. :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm glad I made you read Het. I too am agaisnt it if it's not well written and if the characters are not beliavable (slash has more of a wiggle room with me on those points).rnrnI am also glad you liked it from start to finish! That means i made it interesting enough :P

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/09 02:01 pm Title: Feels like home

Thank you. I really liked this story from beginning to end!

Author's Response: i'm very glad to hear that. It was a lovely story to write ;)

Reviewer: takemetotokio Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/09 10:27 pm Title: Family business

You should right a sequel. What's gonna happen to Franziska?! Will there be a tiny Gustav?!

Author's Response: i wrote a sequel. It's called family bons. And a multichapter story called Feels like home.rn

Reviewer: goddesslala Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 05:02 pm Title: Feels like home

its good... real good

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 10:02 am Title: Feels like home

I feel so bad
for all of them

Author's Response: It's gonna get better. They'll pull each other through.

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 08:04 am Title: Feels like home

-skvishes- well u did a good job. it was amazing as always and i totally did NOT expect her story o.o xxAli

Author's Response: then that means i did real good, cause i wasn't expecting anyone to expect it :D

Reviewer: Schwarzendawn Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 09:46 pm Title: Feels like home

Oh fuck. I think I'm starting to get the picture, and it's...not so good.

I must say that I terribly like this story, it's got the right amounts of everything and it should totally be featured.

Author's Response: thank you for thinking so :)

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 04:42 pm Title: Feels like home

WOW O_O

Fucking AMAZING!!!

Author's Response: thank you :D

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/09 02:10 pm Title: Feels like home

awwwwww omg. -squishes- Sorry I didn't review the last chapter. I didn't realize it had updated. o.o But I'm reviewing now. This story is still amazing. I luv it! xxAli

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 12:53 pm Title: Feels like home

wow
this is inlike anything Ive ever read
and its beautiful
perfect
I need more
Really...Im amazed

Author's Response: thank you very much for thinking so :)

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/09 06:16 am Title: Feels like home

O_O

WOW


MORE

Author's Response: okay, thank you :)

Reviewer: lovesbeaux9189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/09 06:03 pm Title: Feels like home

ok. i didnt like the brevity of the chapter, because im loving the feel of this story. what you said in your chapter end notes about it being familiar and easy(obviously not trivial, its a great story), totally shows in the writing and i cant wait for the next update!

Author's Response: thank you very much :)

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/09 01:39 pm Title: Feels like home

Ooh. So kawaii. I love this story so as usual I was glad to see that it updated. -hugglesthemboth- I think this is progressing quite nicely. Can't wait for what happens next! xxAli

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm taking it at a moderate pace :)

Reviewer: LarnaRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 08:48 am Title: Feels like home

I wasn't sure about this at first. Normally a fic would need to be a Bill/Tom main, to interest me.

But I'm glad I decided to read it. So far I find it very endearing and tender, and it's extrememly well written.

Author's Response: thank you very much for thinking so :)

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 07:38 am Title: Feels like home

Aw. Poor Gusti. -petshim- You'll know what's going on when the time's right. -nods- :D Can't wait for more. I was glad to wake up and see an update. Made me very happy! -huggles- xxAli

Author's Response: thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: theyaylady Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/16/09 06:35 am Title: Feels like home

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: thank you :)

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