Date: 08/09/10 10:23 pm Title: Marionette
fuck i love it i always like reading this kind of Bill the character seems really interesting
Date: 07/13/10 11:49 pm Title: Erosion
WHAT THE FUCK what happens after this does bill get the recording?????
sooo many questions?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: lol, we'll see. in Marionette. if I ever get the true time to finish it. xD
Date: 02/27/10 03:06 pm Title: Marionette
i feel sorry for tom-bill is being quite an ass...i really like it
Date: 02/17/10 08:03 am Title: Marionette
YesYES please write moree :]
Date: 02/12/10 04:33 pm Title: Marionette
:O
:D
Bill is psychotic xD
ahhh lovely :L
Author's Response: Wow, didn't think anyone actually still read that. Guess that means I should update this soon, eh?
Date: 09/25/09 06:58 pm Title: Marionette
heheheh
what an actor....
i like where this is going!
keep it up!
Author's Response: lol. hahah yea. Evil!Bill is a sneaky little shit. xd i promise i'll update this soon. i've gotta start writing again lol.
Date: 08/31/09 12:17 pm Title: Marionette
ugh!!
spit out bill!!
he shud be more brutal, ain't he??
lol..update pliss..
i want to know more!! tq~~
Author's Response: lol. hahahaha. i'm glad to see you all fired up about this. it'll get more brutal in time i think. as soon as i can sit down long enough to write for this xD
Date: 08/07/09 12:38 am Title: Erosion
Totally awesome and damn well written -- *I'm* scared of what Tom's going to do now... I should probably read those other parts of the series now, shouldn't I?
Author's Response: haha. probably. although, this is considered to be a sequel for my story 'Marionette' rather than Misa Sugar's 'Victim', because even though they're in the same universe, the stories will probably end up WAY different xD
and THANK YOU ^^ I'm glad you liked it and thought it was well written, and I hope I didn't scare you too much ^^
Date: 07/26/09 12:36 am Title: Erosion
wow...you know, I truly envy the way you write. It's like unbelievable.
Honestly.
I really liked this, but srry about your friend. :( It's good to get things out tho.
xoxo
Author's Response: *blushes* thank for the praise. praise always makes me was to become an even better author for some reason.
and i'm glad that you really liked this. And yea >.> my friend is a douche, but it's whatever. i've gotta move on and be happy.
Date: 07/25/09 11:04 pm Title: Erosion
I feel like I should understand, and I do partially, but the I don't at all. XD
That was way angsty, and I liked it. I can totally see Bill listening to the recording, and just being annoyed, not guilty or sad at all. XD
I can't wait to see how this fleshes out in Marionette, you know?
Author's Response: LMFAO. hahahaha. xD it's alright. it's a mixture of my crap with Princess Jerkypants and then stuff btwn Bill and Tom in Marionette, SO it's bound to be all wtf xD
Date: 07/25/09 08:12 pm Title: Erosion
Hmm.. Actually this is quite interesting and not confusing at all. I tried to read this as a one-shot and not as a prequel and it made sense to me that way too. You know, somehow I can recognize Bill from here. Well, not like I think that he is like this, but he could be. I mean that he has a strong personality. Also I understand your feelings very well, unfortunately.
I hope that you're feeling better now and I give you a warm hug :). It's good to see, how fanfiction can be one way to get all those feelings out. Writing is a best way to handle them. At least I strongly believe so.
Author's Response: awww, thanks for finding this to be interesting and not confusing. i was a bit worried since when I wrote it i was so upset. and I'm glad that you could recognize Bill from this. I think that everyone has the ability to be 'evil' or 'good' as does Bill, and while he might play the innocent, childlike persona, it's actually possible that there could be something darker underneath. or something selfishly childlike underneath.
and yea, I'm feeling a bit better, I'm glad that I could pour everything into this story, yanno? anyways, thanks for being amazing and reviewing ^^
Date: 07/25/09 06:33 am Title: Erosion
So, he's going to kill Bill or did I misunderstood?
I loved it, it's really well-written.
Author's Response: physically, no. he loves Bill to the point where he'd kill for him, but he definitely wouldn't kill him. i think that (and it's only think, since his plans for Bill haven't yet happened in Marionette), he's planning on doing to Bill, what Bill has done to him. Eroding, wearing him down until he his nothing. thank you for loving it however, and thanks for calling it really well-written and for reviewing ^_^
Date: 07/18/09 08:23 pm Title: Marionette
lmao. Wow. Bill is a conniving crazy bitch *grins* And he's playing Tom like a fiddle. This is insane, but I love it!
Author's Response: hahaha yea, he's crazy, but don't assume things about either him or Tom when I'm the author ^^
Date: 07/18/09 03:24 am Title: Marionette
Wow. I'm confused, but in a good way, I think. (Can one be confused in a good way?)
Doesn't matter, though. I can already tell that I'm going to love this. =)
Author's Response: hahaha. i'm sure you can be confused in a good way, i ALWAYS am xD and yay *squees* I'm soooo happy that you can already tell that you're going to love my baby ^_^
Date: 07/16/09 09:39 am Title: Marionette
Haha bill's a psychotic freak. :)
Author's Response: hahahaha. yea. he totes is xD
Date: 07/14/09 05:51 pm Title: Marionette
That's a really interesting twist. *nods* I liked it, hope the new chappie is up soon! :D
Author's Response: *grins* danke. i'm glad that you likes the twist and thought it was interesting ^_^
Date: 07/13/09 07:13 pm Title: Marionette
Wow, okay... Second chapter surpriced me totally since I wasn't actually expecting Bill to fake everything. I don't know, if I just ignored unintentionally all chapter- and story notes, I just desided to starrt this from the clean table. So yeah, It was interesting twist there.
Bill manipulating is so cruel image, but he MUST know the power of his natural charm. I don't mean that he is manipulative in real life, but I'm sure he knows how easily he can make people do whatever he wants. Interesting starting point, so we'll see what's going to happen next here... I assume that it's not going to be that simple?
I noticed that you use a lot of dialogue here and it's kind of a basic element for the whole (?) fic, so my hint is to pay attention to it (as I know you are doing). I've seen many fics where the story is great, but there is something unnatural in the dialogue. But you're doing fine there :).
So, waiting for Bill's plans about the payment :P
Author's Response: *grins* well, yay for surprises, because even though I had hidden clues to Bill's insanity in the first chapter, I was hoping that the second chapter would come across as a complete surprise ^^ I'm glad that you found the twist interesting though.
and, I don't find Bill manipulating to be cruel, because I feel like everyone manipulates people, whether it be by using their beauty, strength, intelligence etc, etc, it just happens that Bill's manipulation is brought towards the front so that everyone can see it, well at least the readers and Jost can see it.
And thank you for noticing my dialogue hun. Even though their actions are truly what's important to me, since they give off clues towards everyone's thoughts, motives and such, the dialogue is important because it's such a stark contrast to what's going inside of everyone's heads.
Date: 07/12/09 12:28 am Title: Marionette
LOL, I love EvilBill. He warms my heart. XD This is so fuuuuuuuuuuuuuun!!!
Author's Response: hahaha. i know, i know. EvilBill is amazing. I LOVE the way I write him, btw xD and yep it is soooo much fun ^^
Date: 07/11/09 04:28 pm Title: Marionette
Woah, i like this story.
Tom cares for Bill so much i'm literally going "aw" in my head. lol.
Author's Response: awwww. i'm glad that you like this story ^^ and yea...Tom cares for Bill like A LOT lol.
Date: 07/11/09 12:34 pm Title: Marionette
Story Notes:
So, as Misa Sugar stated in her fic Victim, we saw this really cool video that made us want to start fics about them. ^^
We're writing to see how two videos can spawn two different stories even if the inspiration is the same. ^ that (btw, i am tascha, i just changed my username >:D )
Author's Response: ahhhh, okay ^^ and er, like Misa said in her story notes for Victim, we're not gonna show the videos for the story until the end of the story, because then there'd be no purpose in us writing the stories since you'd already get the plot line.