Date: 10/04/12 01:47 am Title: Try me... I dare you
Okay, so I know this fic is really old, and you'll probably never bother to go back and fix it...buuut I have to say it. Orry in advance. When we met Devin you called him Listing, then from the next chapter on until this last one you called him Schafer, and his son Gustav, and then this last one you jumped back to Listing and changed Gustav to Georg, but you maintained Georg through all the Polls. I just- I didn't know if anyone bothered to mention it because it wasn't too hard to follow regardless, but I just had to. Its a compulsion.
But omg I liked this fic so much. I actually was planning on reading the first chapter or two to see if I was interested in reading it all tomorrow, then going to bed. But before I knew it it was over! And 1:45 in the morning. I cannot wait to read the sequel, alas I need sleep more at the moment.
Date: 08/05/09 03:51 pm Title: Something New
They should or I will get out my bazooka and shoot somthing lol it did but it was kinda expected XD
Author's Response: hahah you goof
Date: 08/05/09 03:29 pm Title: Something New
xD those naughty naughty Children. I cant belive it. >.> It really needs a sequal now lol. But yeha I loved it it made me laugh and want to yell at the computer at the children. but I didnt because it was best for the sanity of my house hold XD
now ireally need to finish All A Mess I am so side tracked right now lol.
Author's Response: AHAH! I told you it would throw you for a loop! but yes, the children are naughty!!! Get it done lmao. readers want it!!! i think....
Date: 07/29/09 08:12 pm Title: Something New
Awe.. I cant belive the next chapter is the last. T.T
Wow that house seems to be understress make the last one a good one make Tom come back make BILL and the others happeh,
I want more so you WILL make another sequal that is an order and if you need help I WILL kick off ideas left and right. XDDD
Author's Response: well get those ideas coming then. Im not starting it for a long time though.
Date: 07/27/09 08:21 pm Title: Something New
wait tom is coming back in a week right! he can't just leave bill and take two of the kids.
Date: 07/27/09 08:19 pm Title: Something New
wait tom is coming back in a week right! he can't just leave bill and take two of the kids.
Author's Response: haha! you'll just have to wait and see!!! 2 chapters to find out!
Date: 07/27/09 07:39 pm Title: Something New
Awe awe awe awe awe awe. well i really dont know what to say . I love the Candy Cane part. Why is Tom leaving and taking only those two? and not Matt and Allan?
Author's Response: because its like a custody thing. kind of like what divorced parents normally do with their kids. so i made tom take the more struggling kids ^^
Date: 07/27/09 05:53 pm Title: Something New
Awe.... Awe....awe....awe...awe..awe... wow.. i dont know what to say so Why did Tom take only two and leave Allen Matthew? I loved the candy cane part XD but yeah.
Date: 07/27/09 04:36 pm Title: All A Mess
Wow, you had me terrified there for a while! i thought you were going to write it up as like, they purposly ignored their kids and tom left cause he blamed Bill for it or something. Very nice job. I am certainly proud =)
Author's Response: -pops collar- Its cause I am awesome like that lol naw. I am surpised I could do that.
Date: 07/27/09 01:50 am Title: Something New
Good chapter I dont know whats up with Olivia but shes being a snot... and Tom And Bill are okay right? and the boys are cute. why does everone have to be like that with Allan >.< makes me sad...
Date: 07/26/09 03:13 pm Title: Something New
aww poor Allen!!! I almost started crying =( I hope he gets better
Date: 07/25/09 02:04 am Title: Something New
Guess who made it home in one peice!!!!!!! :'D
Otay now lessee what did I think about this chapter Well kudos I loved it though there could have been a bit more about the kids day and yeah that is it... and I love Allan! >.< that kids just so cute. and yeah there is cant wait for the next on.
Author's Response: -SQUEALS- YAYAYAYAYAYAYAA
Date: 07/24/09 01:01 pm Title: Something New
awww i just want to hug bill poor boy he is having a really hard time...
Date: 07/23/09 02:24 am Title: Something New
BAHAHAHAHA Go G's
Date: 07/23/09 02:12 am Title: Something New
Awe lo0ve love love WOw Bill needs to get to know the children XD
Author's Response: haha i know right?
Date: 07/23/09 12:46 am Title: Something New
-giggles- I feel so loved i actiallu flutterclaped when i read my name. (yeah cuz i be a dork) Anyways Cute and Painfull Bill sounds like he has post pardum but slightly. The ending had me I dont know. but yeah continues. and Bill better start loving his kids.
Author's Response: and if he doesnt? haha
Date: 07/13/09 01:59 pm Title: Something New
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKay
Date: 07/13/09 12:32 am Title: Something New
Wait what SOMEONE IS GOING TO DIE ??? WHAT???
Author's Response: hahaha no no no no, im not going to kill anyone lol!!! i promise!! funny though...
Date: 07/12/09 10:01 am Title: Something New
Aw! I don't blame Bill for being afraid about losing one of their children, I'm really liking this story.