Date: 01/02/25 07:50 am Title: January
I like this, cute little story
Date: 06/24/14 06:16 am Title: August
I love your stories and the translations at the end even more. :)
Date: 02/17/14 10:04 am Title: April
I think you iced my bro!?Hahahahahahaha!!
Date: 04/04/13 04:03 am Title: April
the grammar is horrible >.
Author's Response: well yes.. That was sort of the intention
Date: 10/21/12 01:45 pm Title: October
I think that I scared the entire house because I laughed extremely loud! This was way too funny; I loved it and I adored the way Tom acted and talked. Great story.
Date: 07/28/12 08:08 am Title: July
Tom doesnt talk that way
Author's Response: Believe it or not I'm aware of that.. Sometimes things are written just for laughs
Date: 04/05/12 12:52 am Title: December
Sorry, I just can't deal with "ghetto Tom." Part of it is that I go to a school where there actually ARE people from "the ghetto" and they don't sound anything like that. They mostly sound normal, and use normal words - probably because we all watch TV (except for me XD), so we're all used to hearing the same things, and mostly, that's the kind of language people use. I do have to say one thing that has nothing to do with the fic, though: WHOOT FOR CATS THAT LOOK LIKE HITLER XD My cat's got a black spot RIGHT on that little spot between his nostrils, and my mom's always joking that he looks like Hitler XD (Which would be TOTALLY ironic if he actually did, since we're technically Jewish...XD) ANYWAY! Except for the "ghetto"-speech that Tom was using, this was actually really good =)
Date: 10/23/11 10:17 am Title: April
this was a good story!
Date: 07/25/11 11:44 pm Title: December
I am a bit sad to see this story end... i enjoyed it. comander bunbun is what im naming my bunny.. that or bill...idk which. anyways, all of this was sweet, and someof it smut, but i enjoy that sort of thing.
keep writing.
-Simonne
Date: 07/25/11 10:46 pm Title: May
the songs totaly killed me
Date: 07/25/11 10:33 pm Title: April
welp
1. PRINCE FTW!!
2. comander bunbun :3
Date: 07/13/11 01:06 am Title: February
okay.... i love it:D but jw, why is tom sincerly like... southern united states Gettoh?
~all my love
Simonne
Author's Response: I can't speak ghetto for the life of me. I had two translators. One from Ohio, one from Pennsylvania. Not sure why it sounded southern u.s tho...
Date: 07/08/11 11:35 am Title: December
This is one of the best series by far!
Date: 05/16/11 11:10 pm Title: April
eeek! i luvs me dad ghetto tom!
Date: 04/19/11 06:51 pm Title: October
love the translations. and love this series! ghetto tom is just too fun!
Date: 03/22/11 10:46 pm Title: July
LMFAO I loved the last translation.
Tom thinking porn=Filith O.o
AH! A flock of flying pigs just took off!
Lmfao I loved this though :]
Date: 02/12/11 03:14 pm Title: December
this was an awesome series. very well-rounded with the sweetness, silliness, and smut. loooooove iiiiiiit!