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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/11 06:44 am Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

this was a good story!

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: ravenpan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 09:08 pm Title: Sand has Turned to Sea

That they always work as a team kind of made me think of Old-School A-Team, and made me love them so much more for it. Wonderful depiction of desperation on the other side of things!

Gustav kissing Georg into submission is a lovely image in my mind. Thank you for sharing it :)

That last bit, though. I really love the guardian spirits in this quadrilogy. It makes everything seem more real, funny enough. More viceral and important. It closed so beautifully.

Author's Response:

the set wasn't feeling finished to me...  not Until Tobi and Saki were able to tell me WHY they didn't think Gerog was nuts.. adn Why they were so stressed out about finding him again..

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thank you :)

Reviewer: ravenpan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 08:42 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

I KNEW IT... But it... Okay, not quite how I thought, but GAH. WOW. Just... Wow. My words are failing me for the wow. WOW.

Author's Response:

lol.. this was originally written for a Halloween challenge.. that something else was submitted for.. thus the ghost story bits..

Reviewer: ravenpan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 08:11 pm Title: On A Horse With No Name

*cheers wildly* HOLY COW and WOW and She's a *GUIDE* guide, and it's all... they.. he... AND GUSTAV FOUND HIM! *happyglee*

Author's Response:

tripped right over him...

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most of my OC's have a least a hint of a real person behind them.. and Bree is one with more than most...  but unless you go out adn have Las Crusis EMS pick you up you aren't likely to ever meet her inspiration

Reviewer: ravenpan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/11 08:00 pm Title: Been Through the Desert

Oh dear! *wibbles and pets him* Poor thing *SNiff*

Author's Response:

ghaa.. and me not getting notices..

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glad youliked things.. and things DO get better.. but I suspect you know that :)

Reviewer: Red Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/09 11:26 pm Title: Sand has Turned to Sea

Good. Well written.

Author's Response:

Thank you  :)

 

and thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: SkyblueAdvari Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 08:40 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

Aw, so pretty. I love the reactions of everyone, Tobi's... when Tom cried... Gustav not wanting to leave Georg's bedside. Very lovely and as descriptive as the others. I loved it!

-BRE

Author's Response:

security people develop an oddly close relationship with thier charges, even ones they can't stand personally... and in this case when you like your charge the sense of failure is even worse.  With Tom it was just everything letting go at last, he'd been the strong one, and now didn't have to be strong anymore.

 

I'm thrilled people are still reading and enjoying this :)

Reviewer: SkyblueAdvari Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/05/09 08:28 pm Title: On A Horse With No Name

I really love your style. And just the general plotline. Very original and very believable. I loved your original characters and the little things you added that made the situation seem more real. Like the dogs liking Gustav and other things like that. Very nice!

-BRE

Author's Response:

some of the details are from spending time inthat part of the world, and being good friends with EMS people... search dogs are a special breed regardless of what is on thier official papers and thier handlers thend to pay close attention to people they especially like or dislike...

 

GLad you enjoyued the read enough to review not once but twice :)

Reviewer: hott temper99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/22/09 02:51 pm Title: Sand has Turned to Sea

what can i say but wow?

Author's Response:

I felt that Saki's voice was needed to tie up teh loose ends and finish out the series.

Thankyou for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 06:54 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

Wow o_o
I loved this :D
so original, and very interesting.
Kind of mysterious, yet kind of cute and adventurous. ^_^
pleaseeeeee, more!!!!!

Author's Response: is in progress..just have to de-virus me computer...

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 10:46 am Title: On A Horse With No Name

:'O
holy crap.
this is so interesting.
I love it.

*hurries to read the next part*

Author's Response: glad you liked it :) will be more coming in a week or so

Reviewer: Nuttyclorox Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/08/08 10:09 am Title: Been Through the Desert

Aww... D:
I like this, it's interesting. :]

Author's Response: thank you :)

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/08 07:44 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

Oh yes please! I am very interested, please continue! All three were very good :D

Author's Response: once I get my second promised giftfic to a good endpoint I'll let Sakai and Tobi really talk to me, I'm getting some IN-terseting comments from them now (as to why they BOTH believe in ghosts...) Thank you for the encouraging words

Reviewer: shadowlev Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 09:37 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

I love it! It's so original, I've never read a fic like this

Author's Response: I'm going to take that as a really good thing then... Thank you

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 04:42 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

That nurse's got my name! Wicked!

Wow, I loved it! Great!

Author's Response: I'm not even going to calculate the odds of that... but neat anyway.rnrnThank you

Reviewer: Jodine16 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 04:25 pm Title: Been Through the Desert

Haha, I read this all backwards XD Now, we're making a little more sense. Poor boy, I read a CSI story like this, one time. Great plot!

Author's Response: reading it backwards I bet was confusing as hell... I don't think I left enough there in the backtracking for POV purposes for it to make sensernrnThank you

Reviewer: XxXHeilig9187XxX Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/08 04:23 pm Title: Good to be Out of the Rain

woah i love this!! its soooooo good!! pleasee update it soon! :)

Author's Response: My Georgmuse is being pretty insistent as are the ones for Tobi and Saki so some time in the next month I think I'll be able to get the last story I know is there out. After that it depends on the musernrnThank you!

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