Date: 03/30/19 05:24 am Title: Amor e Morte
this was a good story!
Date: 03/30/19 04:59 am Title: Nymphetamine
this was a really good story!!
i hope that you did a sequel to this
Date: 08/30/12 09:18 pm Title: Amor e Morte
What did Gustav do to make his appearance change??? 'Cause I would certainly recognize Gustav's face/body almost no matter what he was wearing... I mean, if he was wearing a hat, sunglasses, and a hoodie I would recognize him XD ...Kinda the same with all of them, actually. I really wanna know what Gustav did to change his looks... obviously, Bill's wearing skirts and shit, and Tom probably changed his hair and how he dresses... and Georg cut his hair XD Good job on this, by the way ^-^
Date: 08/30/12 09:08 pm Title: Temptation
I like Gustav's origins. It seems kinda... right, in a way XD Well done, Saera-san ^-^
Date: 08/30/12 08:57 pm Title: Nymphetamine
This was pretty good. I don't know the exact history of when gypsies became known to the western world, but that doesn't matter too much for this story XD Oh, and one thing: The dresses the servant girls were wearing at Folkert's house? Yeah, no self-respecting noble would have allowed his servants to walk about in rags. Patched clothes, yes. But raggedy dressed? Never. Apart from that, I really liked this ^-^ It was a good story, and I can't wait to read the Gusti one and the Georg one XD
Date: 08/30/12 08:13 pm Title: Nymphetamine
As a history geek, I just have to say this: First, one would NEVER had inquired after the "restroom" in high society for two reasons: One, they didn't exist. There were outhouses, and chamber pots in bedrooms. Two, it was simply rude, for many years (and still is in some places) to ask where the bathroom is. For a long time it was the fashion to excuse oneself as going on a walk to disguise it, and I expect that's what Tom would have done, since he didn't care about being rude (one would not have left the table for anything but a messenger, probably, in those days, if one wanted to be polite XD)
Date: 11/18/10 01:59 pm Title: Nymphetamine
wow So cool and interesting I realy enjoyed reading...
Date: 10/07/10 08:03 am Title: Nymphetamine
I loved this chapter =) Poor Bill though =(
Date: 03/16/10 09:04 pm Title: Nymphetamine
That was so cool! Having the past and the present. :) I'll be looking for your sequel!!
Date: 12/02/09 04:32 pm Title: Nymphetamine
*flutter claps* awesome! I love the image of Bill bellydancing OMG so hot! I like how the story is progressing. So far seems fairly organic. I could see this being the case. Bill's only survival. And Tom being intersted. But now he has to choose a girl to marry.
Date: 12/02/09 04:31 pm Title: Nymphetamine
The world you set up seems that women and servents aren't supposed to have power but Tom's wife throws a fit and Tom says he won't enslave servents. Both allowing Lara to throw a fit and Tom to care for people of a lower station takes away from the logic you set up.
Tom is too nice to Bill. And who does Tom expect to clean up the house if he doesn't hire servants and Bill doesn't do it?
The violin would be out of tune in a few days with weather changes. And where did Tom's amazing musical skills come from? We haven't heard about them before ever.
Date: 12/02/09 04:23 pm Title: Nymphetamine
The writing is great the story is starting to loose favor with me. The logic is kind of shakey. Bill being found out quickly after Tom discovered is kind of suspect. And the servent asking a question out of turn doesn't follow with servent logic. Still good but losing it's edge.
Date: 12/02/09 04:16 pm Title: Nymphetamine
ok unexpected twist. I though for a very long moment that I had some how switched stories. Ok I can go with vampires but I don't think it was necessary for the story. I think they could have just been in the middleages and been ok.
Date: 12/02/09 04:05 pm Title: Nymphetamine
This is very interesting. I'm hooked. Awesome! Nice to see a well written story, they tend to be few and far between.
Date: 03/26/09 03:58 pm Title: Nymphetamine
Like the sudden twist in the story!!
I know the song so I kinda had the idea they were..
you know..
Yeah!
Keep on rocking!
Date: 01/20/09 08:05 pm Title: Nymphetamine
OMG I LOVE IT!
YOUR IDEA OF VAMPIRES IS AWESOME!
i LOVE IT SO FUCKINīMUCH!
Date: 01/19/09 01:37 am Title: Nymphetamine
Lol i just started this story and i'm determind to get to the end even though its like 1:35am haha and i have school tomorrow =[
but LOL when i saw "Bilhelmina" i THOUGHT it said "Bulhemia" haha i was sooooooo confused for like 5minutes till it clicked! Wow i'm dumb =[
But i love this story so far! Kinda confusing but GOOD!
Date: 10/14/08 09:24 am Title: Nymphetamine
Kawaii!! Wow, definatly luffed it. Theres was sumit almost cute about it...
I can sorta see how you extended this from Nymphetamine (that song is amazin)
~jumps about nd goes 2 read the sequal~
~Luv~
Date: 08/29/08 07:21 am Title: Nymphetamine
hmmm. very interesting. very intriguing.
Date: 07/20/08 03:55 am Title: Amor e Morte
i no its kinda late but that was 1 fucking amazin story!! i read the hole thing nite. again i say FUCKING AMAZING!!!