THIS WAS A REALLY GOOD STORY!
I AM SAD THAT IT IS OVER!
U SHOULD DO A SEQUEL TO THIS!

Hey, I just found your story and finished reading it :D
And I have to say that with the devil popping up all over the place, the tornado, Tom dying, what Tom got to see in hell (and the warehouse even though it is the same place..) I mean.. you just blew my mind away with this story *_* (I can keep rambling about it for hours, you made me speechless O_O)
We already notice that something is up with the guy that Tom suddenly just walks up to, then he tries to find him, so he searches the entire club, and when he gave up and walked home and Bill showed up out of nowhere asking if Tom looked for him, that part made my heart stop..
And when Bill talks about himself and explain heaven and hell, you really got me longing for hell, which is quite disturbing considering that I've feared the place my enire life xD
No, really, you made me love something I've always hated, it was so freaking amazing :D I loved every single second while reading this

Author's Response: Hey I'm so sorry for the late response I haven't been here in a very long time. Your comment made me so happy! thank you so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed the story. omg I don't want you to wish to go to hell lol that was not my intention XD tbh I don't even believe in heaven or hell this is all just fiction for me (don't mean to insult anyones belief!) Again, thank you for reading and your sweet comment!

I love this story it's the best!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments!

i like it allright it's awesome!!!

Ahhh I'm so happy you finished this! It's wonderful! Oh my God, I love it so much! It's so beautifully written, I still find it hard to believe English is your second language, you're amazingly talented. Aw and you called me your little muse *hug you* Eee I love this, the ending is so sweet, I'm so happy you finished it Xx

Author's Response: thank you. I think I still have to work on my writing skills... yeah maybe it's quite good for someone who's first language isn't english but since I study it I rather compare myself to native speakers :P

Did Bill cause the tornado? And kill him for that matter?

AHHHH this is so good Janine! Hehe now I'm another person left wanting more, it's so good! Brilliantly written, I love it. (It's Emily btw) Xx

Author's Response: I know who you are hun XD thank you so much for the nice review^^rni hope it will inspire me to finally finish this fic

this is really good!
cant wait til the next chapter :)

tomi... tomi? NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Why'd you kill my tomi??????? My darling dreadlocked, sexed up german baby.
Damn it now i'm really depressed. Well, i guess it cant be that bad. He can live in hell with bill for the rest of... forever (and have really hot sex i hope)
Umpf... i still wish that tom could have lived. Anyway, the fic is great.
Would you be so kind as to post the next chappie up soon. i've been dying for what, almost 6 months to know what happens to the very strange relationship going on between the two hottest boys on earth.
pretty please?

You're awesome for writting this! and don't worry too much about Tom's death, I mean, I love him and all, but I guess he wouldn't be dead if he could still live in the after life (preferably with Bill....) so it's ok.
I'm not a native speaker either, so I cannot really tell if you're actually good since I may commit mistakes in my current speaking/writting. But as far as I know, you're pretty good at writting and I was glad I understood every single word written here.
I just hope you'll update soon, 'coz I'm so loving this!