Date: 03/23/11 11:30 am Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
I look forward to someday seeing more:)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 03/17/11 01:50 pm Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
Aw. That's okay - it works this length too. We know he's not alone, and that's the best part :)
Author's Response: Yeah maybe I should rewrite the last chapter to make it the end or something. XD Nah, I think I'll end up going back to it. :)
Date: 03/16/11 06:59 pm Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
I know it isn't the end - but since it's all there is for now - it's comment time! I really really really enjoyed this story. Poor Gustav! I love that Georg noticed something going on. Lovely tale!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! ^^ Sorry you had to read something that I haven't worked on in so long, and will probably never finish. XD I do think about it sometimes, but I have absolutely no idea what to do next...
Date: 03/16/11 06:55 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
I really loved reading this story. So funny at first, then so sad, and then just... yes. I'm grinning. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 04/12/10 12:36 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
"pieces of chicken sticking out from between his teeth" I couldn't stop laughing at that.
Author's Response: Hahah I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks for reviewing! ^^
Date: 04/11/10 07:40 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
Hey Koos, (this is Synne from the TH UK Forum.)
I remember this ff actually, and how funny it was. I had a lot of fun reading it over again, and I have to say that I like your fantasy in this story, and that you managed to make it funny, yet serious.
"Will NASA be pissed?"
"My hend abaf, like a daf, oover meee"
Haha.
Author's Response: Hi Synne! I'm glad you liked it! ^^ And thanks for your review. :D
Date: 08/13/09 07:12 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! So good! I loved it at yabbie, and I loved it now, though it was so sad about the nice(ish) alien it made me cry a bit. And poor Bill T.T
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm glad you liked it. :) And Bill will be ok. :P
Date: 04/07/09 02:10 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
‘He wants to know how much I’ve heard!’ Tom thinks, shocked, ‘If he finds out how much I know he might hurt me... or even kill me! I have to act normal!’ – awh that’s not funny!
He grins sheepishly at Bill. “Damn, you try going to the bathroom in the middle of the night, and this stupid side table is in the way! Sorry! I hope I didn’t wake you!” – good cover up…that’s what I was thinking.
Georg grumbles something that sounds like: “Insane, arschloch, wake me up,” and hangs up the phone. - *giggles and snorts*
“Sounds like you’ve had a nightmare, Tom!” Gustav says gingerly.
Then Tom starts crying. Gustav can’t believe his ears: Is Tom actually crying? He has never seen or heard Tom cry. “Ok Tom,” he says, “tell me the whole story.” – awh this isn’t funny either *sigh*
“Yeah, but uh.... we wanted to.....uh try out some new songs!” Tom says, relieved he could come up with a good excuse. How did they think out everything of the plan except what he would say to Bill! Tom just wants to smack himself. – that’s a pretty good excuse.
I’m just excited to start the new songs, and I’m looking at the clock to see when Gustav and Georg are finally coming.... and playing the tunes in my head!”
Luckily Bill seems to believe this. – yeah but it’s a pretty good cover.
When Bill sees this he frowns and starts: “What is that doing there? I thought...”
But then he staggers and falls to the ground. Tom stands behind him with a baseball bat. – nice!!!!
They pack Bill The Alien unconscious in a big bag and load him into a van. Then they drive to a big, luxurious house on a private road. When they get there, Bill opens the door. – what?!?!?!
Tom smiles and hugs Daddy, the scientist they had met a few years ago when he started cloning Bill for fans, making them a lot of profit as well. - *giggles* I want a whole set!!!!
Georg runs up to the pilot and slaps 20,000 Euros cash into his hands. “Get us to Houston, stat!”
Gustav raises one eyebrow. “Stat?”
“I’ve just always wanted to say that...” Georg grins sheepishly. – me too lol!!!
The plane flies on. – where are they going???
Author's Response: *sends over Bill clones* One cooks, one cleans, one massages and they all fulfill sexual needs. :)
Date: 04/07/09 01:56 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
The waiter says: “So you would like to start with fish soup, and then have the spaghetti, Sir?”
Bill frowns at the man. “Did you not hear me? I said spaghetti with fish soup. One dish, on the same plate. And don’t go too easy on the tomato sauce.” – eeeeeewwwwhhh!
Simone tries to chat with Bill a little bit, but all his answers are strange and distant. She can also feel that this person is nothing like her son anymore. Her face gets sadder and more worried with each word he speaks. – awh poor Simone and Tom and damn it AlienBill you are upsetting my characters!
It looks like a very futuristic little TV. On it there is the face (if you can call it that) of something horrible: a big green blob with several eye-like holes in what looks like its head and a gaping hole with sharp teeth that is moving and making weird guttural sounds. And Bill is responding to this ‘thing’ in the same sounds! They are talking!
Tom’s eyes get big and he steps back. but he knocks over the flowers on the table in the hall. The vase crashes to the floor and shatters into a million pieces. – uh oh he’s been caught!!! Eee!!!!
Author's Response: I loved all these cliffhangers XD And the plot thickens! :D
Date: 04/07/09 01:47 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
Backstage, Tom pulls Bill aside and whispers urgently: “Please act normal, ok? Just let me do the talking if you haven’t got anything useful to say.”
Bill doesn’t seem to notice. – that is more un-Bill-like then anything so far *frowns*
Tom tries to answer as many questions as possible, and he notices that when Bill answers, his answers sound normal. He relaxes even more. – this is Tom’s first mistake *grimaces*
Before Tom can open his mouth, Bill has replied: “Men are dogs.”
“They are just after balls,” Bill replies, and sits back, as if that says everything that needs to be said.
As the interviewer starts laughing and agreeing with Bill, trying to get out even more, Tom leans forward and puts his face in his hands. He is no longer relaxed. - *snorts* OMG lol
Does Bill finally remember that he is his brother and that he loves him and tells him everything? Is Bill finally back to normal?
But as Tom walks after Dr. Moon, he looks back at Bill and sees that ‘thing’ in his eyes again. For a split second, Bill looks like n insane killer. - *grimaces* oops
“Now, now, Tom. Please sit down again. I thought you’d be happy to know your brother is completely fine.” – ha ha Tom’s screwed!
“How dare you talk to the Head like that!” the Head roars, “if you blow our mission, ‘Bill’,” he spits out the name sarcastically, “you will be executed. You must do a perfect job, or your head will roll.”
Then the screen of his communication device goes black. Bill smirks at the screen and lays on his bed. – what does AlienBill want?
Author's Response: Aww thanks for another review :) I'm glad you liked it enough to keep reading after chapter 1! :P And it gives me a nice break from marking tests to receive the e-mails: You've got a new review!
Date: 04/07/09 01:37 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
The opening is funny! And over the top….can’t wait to see where it goes next.
But as he tries to take the milk, which is on Bill’s table, Bill growls angrily at him, pieces of chicken sticking out from between his teeth. - *snorts*
But Bill slowly stands up and hits Tom hard.
Tom’s eyes get big as he feels the blood running down his face from his eyebrow. “You’re insane!” he yells panicky, before running out of the room.
Bill sits down again and continues eating. - *giggles* oh no!
“Well,” the Head continues, “remember in Human Behaviour Studies we talked about ‘Shearing’? That is what they do on planet Earth. They ‘Shear’ their food. You must ‘Apollygais’ to Tom.” – I love the way they mess up the language lol
And what is with the way he is speaking? Why all the quotes? And the weird facial expression? Bill is grinning like he is insane. – I love the confusion.
Tooo meee you’ll bee foriver Seeecraaaaad!
Aim daying but ai noooow are looovee will liiiivee
Your hend abaf, laik a daf, oover meeeee
End wan deee, ze see will gaid you beck to meee - *snorts*
Bill stalks off his chair and crawls over the floor to Tom. The boys watch him with big eyes. When Bill reaches Tom, he starts to untie his shoe and takes it off. - *snorts and covers face* what the hell?
“just give it a few more days.” – it’s just going to get worse isn’t it? lol
Author's Response: Hehe I'm glad you liked it. I unfortunately had to rewrite part of this story, because I didn't have it all saved and the forum it was on originally crashed, so a lot of funny moments were lost. But I really love this story myself, so... I hope you enjoy the rest as well! :D
Date: 03/21/09 08:29 am Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
ure a real good author, make the next chapter quick :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! But I think it will be a while... I have really lost inspiration for this story and I don't really know how to continue. But I'll try to think about it!rnrnSorry to everyone waiting for updates. :/
Date: 12/07/08 03:57 am Title: Bill Phone Home
I really liked it. It was a great story. Your a good writer. keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 12/06/08 01:58 pm Title: Bill Phone Home
i wouldnt have forgiven tom for taking so long lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Not sure what you mean though... :P But thanks anyway. :D
Date: 09/26/08 09:22 pm Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
It's awesome so far! :D I've just started reading this, and finished chapter six. :) I hope to see more of this fanfic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There will be more soon, I'm just a little slow in updating this fic... But I always do my best! :D I hope you'll keep reading.
Date: 09/15/08 05:02 pm Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
:o
I love this. So update it before I shoot you. *cork pops out of toy-gun*
kaythanksbye. :]
Author's Response: LMAO! I'll try to update faster! Please don't shoot me! Don't bring a water gun next time either... ;)
Date: 09/14/08 12:35 pm Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
great stuff keep up the good work. i am waiting on the edge of my chair for the next chappie
Author's Response: Aww thanks Guem! I am sure the next one will come soon(er)! XD
Date: 09/14/08 10:19 am Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
Aww, it's so sad that Gustav doesn't understand the truth yet. But, maybe it's better that way for now. You said you don't have much of a plot developed, so I have a question for you: Is Gustav always going to be a werewolf at those times, or do you believe he could learn how to control himself?
Author's Response: I'm not sure if Gustav really doesn't know what's going on yet, or if he just doesn't want to let anything on to Georg. I want to answer that question in the next chapter. I am also not sure yet if Gustav will always be a werewolf or if there may be a cure or something. Maybe Daddy the scientist will make another appearance, but I feel if I do that I have to do it in the other 2 FFs I have coming up in this series as well. You'll find out as I do! XD
Date: 09/14/08 10:15 am Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
Oh my goodness! :O I hope Georg is going to be okay and that Gustav the Werewolf won't hurt any of the band members...
Author's Response: I hope so too.... XD Thanks for this review again! :D
Date: 09/14/08 10:13 am Title: A German Werewolf In Paris
A few lines in this story really lightened up the exciting intensity of the story for a brief moment. This is very well-written with potent emotions and concerns. I wonder what Georg is going to do now...
Author's Response: Yeyy thanks so much! That is one of the best things any writer can hear! :D