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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/14/25 05:43 am Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

So cute, so sweet

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/13 02:47 am Title: Confessing the Morning After.

Awww, so sweet. This fic is super predicable, and cliche, but that's ok. It's mushy and adorable and it still put a smile on my face. I like your twins, especially Bill drinking mainly to have an excuse to be clingy on Tom, very cute. Well done. Next time, develope your stories more, you have lots of potential. Keep writing twincest!!! I want to read it! :)

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 03:49 pm Title: Confessing the Morning After.

Awww, this was so romantic sequel. Eventually thyey finally got eachj other the way they were always meant to have. Really sweet. That kind of lazy mornings are the best. :)

Author's Response: I agree :) The third part will be out soon!

Reviewer: Muffins Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/12 01:25 am Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

Awe! I was smiling the whole way through! What a delicious story. I want more, for some reason. I really think you should consider making another chapter, a something smutty about this.

It would be great. Annnd, I have no clue why, but just in this short piece, I really like your writing, and it makes me want to co author something with you.

That would be absolutely uh-mazing. >:D -Huggles-

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much this is the sweetest review i ever had :) And i would absolutely love co authoring with you. I'm so bad at updating i need someone to kick me in the butt and get me going. But there is a sequel i just put up! Its called Confessing the Morning After :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/10/12 11:46 am Title: Confessing the Morning After.

A lovely ending to a lovely story. I'm so happy they professed their love for each other. I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. :)

Author's Response: I am too :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 09:28 pm Title: Confessing the Morning After.

aww, so lovely and sweet story! that's exactly what I needed right now!
hope you will write sequel to sequel :D

Author's Response: Aw i'm so glad! I'm thinking of something for another sequel :)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 09:26 pm Title: Confessing the Morning After.

YAY FOR LOVE

This was so adorable that I'm just a blubbering happy mess inside. :)

Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm glad i can do that for ya :)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 09:23 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

Aww, how sweet! They take security in that fact that they're both falling asleep, and those late night confessions can send them off to a lovely dreamland together. :3

Author's Response: Its exactly how i imagine them being :)

Reviewer: Ewa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 09:22 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

very good story, I really liked it!

Author's Response: Thanks you!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 12:32 pm Title: Confessing the Morning After.

nice story!
u should do a sequel to this on to!

Author's Response: I think i just might :)

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 07:44 am Title: Confessing the Morning After.

Aw, so sweet. I love the tentative touches and kisses that eventually lead to the twins kissing properly and confessing their love for each other. Very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I worked really hard on making it seem like it could actually be happening between them now.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 12:57 am Title: Confessing the Morning After.

Love love love it!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad!

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/12 10:25 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

Awww, this was cute. Sleepy Bill replying was adorable, I can totally imagine all this. Well done on this cute little fic. I'm excited for part 2!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks you x) I love writing fluff. Part two will be up today!

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/06/12 05:39 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

Aww, so cte. I hope he finds the courage, because wouldn't it kill a person to be so close and yet not be able to... anything? They are so adorable together. This is how I like to imagine them being. :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much :) and yes, i can tell you first hand that it does kill a person to be so close and not able to say or do anything about it. Been there, done that! But things may get better in the sequel, you'll have to stay tuned ;)

Reviewer: rose_levres Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 09:37 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

*-* Cute!

Author's Response: Thanks you :)

Reviewer: Ms Maril Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 07:20 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

This was a really cute story. I'm looking forward to see what these two get up to in the next part. :)

Author's Response: I'm working on it now :)

Reviewer: canadagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 02:05 pm Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

thats a cute story .maybe chapter 2 is Tom expressing his feelings?

Author's Response: I shall neever tell ;) until its posted...

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 09:54 am Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

nice story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 09:54 am Title: Playing with the Edge of Sleep.

nice story!

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