Date: 04/25/18 11:54 pm Title: Rent
this is a really good story!!
u should really do a squeal to this!!
Date: 10/11/14 06:26 pm Title: Rent
I've eyed this for a long time, but never wanted to read it 'cause honestly speaking, I'm not a fan of watersport, I find it kinda gross. But still, my curiosity got the best of me and I decided to check this out. And (minus the peeing part) everything was amazing! I really do like this! It's nice and kinky and there is nearly not enough kinky stuff on this site :D The only part that bothered me was the watersport though, but that's just my problem, 'cause it was in the warnings, but my curiosity wouldn't let me rest, so I read this. And I don't have anything else to say, except that this was totally hot!! :D
Date: 01/17/13 02:38 pm Title: Road Trip
Omg you're baaaack!!! *bounces and flutterclaps*
Hmm...okay...I guess car sex is not my kink...no offense to your writing or anything. But after we got out of that car? Amazing. Can't wait to see more.
Date: 01/15/13 07:44 am Title: Road Trip
I like this.
Date: 01/14/13 08:34 pm Title: Road Trip
wow. that was so hot. finally the have their trip and can spend so time together, but that their "game" is kinda sick but if they're enjoy it, good for them then hehehe
Date: 01/14/13 04:33 pm Title: Rent
I'm dead. My brain has turned to mush.
SO HOT!
Date: 01/14/13 04:14 pm Title: Road Trip
I love how sweet Tom is, despite the fact that he is so rough with Bill.
Update soon!
Date: 01/14/13 04:10 pm Title: Road Trip
That was really sexy! I love dominate Tom!
Date: 12/19/12 09:04 pm Title: Rent
I was so right!!! I knew he wasn't the manager, good twist!!
Date: 12/19/12 09:02 pm Title: Rent
Arg!! This is the MOST frustrating end ever!!! You HAVE to continue this story which is great by the way
Date: 11/16/12 09:20 am Title: Road Trip
Ahhhhhhahahahahhaa!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!! SO HOT!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!! MMMMMMMMOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!1 :dddddddddDDDDDD AAHHHH!!!
Author's Response: Here let me get you a fan to cool you down ;D haha. Thanks for the review and hopefully the admin will approve and get my next chapter uploaded within a couple hours <3
Date: 11/07/12 12:12 am Title: Road Trip
*GAAAAASSSP* Holy hell, how did I miss a sequel coming out?! Oh my gad, it was an amazing chapter. But, refresh my memory, where does Bill work? He was an aspiring dancer before, right? Well anyway, it probably doesn't really matter, i'm just curious about random ass stuff.
Amazing beginning. I was sad when I realized its been, like, a month since it came out. So I really hope more comes out soon. And I hope whatever Life's been throwing at you isnt anything too terrible, and that it all gets sorted out. Keep up the amazing work!
Date: 11/07/12 12:12 am Title: Road Trip
*GAAAAASSSP* Holy hell, how did I miss a sequel coming out?! Oh my gad, it was an amazing chapter. But, refresh my memory, where does Bill work? He was an aspiring dancer before, right? Well anyway, it probably doesn't really matter, i'm just curious about random ass stuff.
Amazing beginning. I was sad when I realized its been, like, a month since it came out. So I really hope more comes out soon. And I hope whatever Life's been throwing at you isnt anything too terrible, and that it all gets sorted out. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: haha, god I love your reactions!! They definitely make writing for this story all the much better! But eh, sorta close, haha, Bill's a stripper. No worries though, I'm the same way lol.rnrnLuckily life wasn't too much of a bitch to me, but thanks for the concern! It's just been busy with school, work, and then my flat out laziness (the biggest problem I faced). But I finally got the next one uploaded, waiting approval, and hopefully wont take nearly as long with the next one!rnTake care <3
Date: 10/05/12 12:26 am Title: Road Trip
that was amazing and i can't wait for more :)
Date: 10/05/12 12:26 am Title: Road Trip
that was amazing and i can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Just posted the next chapter, just waiting for admin approval now <3
Date: 10/01/12 05:42 pm Title: Road Trip
omo! a sequel... and itīs chaptered...
I... I love you
Author's Response: XD I love you too!
Date: 10/01/12 02:08 pm Title: Road Trip
-drools-
Author's Response: I'll take that as a good thing, haha.
Date: 04/07/12 05:27 pm Title: Rent
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oh-my-god...
so fucking hot and awsome!
you have to keep writte like this!!
bill, the little cum whore begs you (?)
i hope read you later *-*
byee
Author's Response: Hahaha don't worry Cum whore is going to receive more awesome sexy time! I've already started the next part. Hope you both will be please ;D <3
Date: 04/06/12 04:43 pm Title: Rent
LOL. Busted! :D
I was suspicious in the first chapter that some kind of misunderstanding might have taken a place, but then I just forgot it. Ha, I should have known!
And please, continue! It could be fun. :)
Author's Response: Lol Nope not a misunderstanding just me being sneaky :D There will be more! I've already started working on it :D
Date: 04/06/12 04:37 pm Title: Rent
Hotness, dear god! Haha, I liked this a lot. Tiis was so obscene, straightforward and deliciously kinky. Oh, I really need top read the last chapter right now! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much <3 Cum whore is too ;D