Date: 03/30/13 07:36 pm Title: God
dont ya mean maximal power? and money? the boys are fuckin millionaires!!! anyway AMAZING story
Date: 08/24/12 09:31 pm Title: Satan
im scared and so on the edge of my fuckin seat plz keep writing
Date: 04/10/12 07:06 am Title: Satan
oooh I love where this iw going! I am going to check out "god" now:)
Date: 04/10/12 01:11 am Title: Satan
I am sooooo super glad you decided to write a prequel to 'God' as that one left me with a bit of a surprise, many questions and an intense desire for more of this story. I am definitely looking forward to the rest- Fantastic work!!
Date: 04/10/12 12:39 am Title: Satan
Oooh....tis interesting! I like it!
Date: 04/05/12 06:49 pm Title: God
Gruesome but really interesting.
Date: 04/05/12 06:37 pm Title: God
Oh, this is interesting. I like it for the surprising end, because Iīm kinda into this psychiatric/ insane/ crazy shit things (excuse my vocabulary), but without it I would be just disgusted (well, Iīm after all xD). Yes, but itīs not bad, great idea, good written, I think Iīll remember this for a while.
My personal opinion :)
Date: 04/05/12 06:18 pm Title: God
Wtf is this!? I canīt even read it all, word by word. Maybe itīs because itīs twins, but I canīt take this. Hell, now I hate my imagination.
Date: 04/05/12 12:02 am Title: God
Hmm, I've heard of chimerism before, infact I've joked about being because I have one leg that is freckled, and shorter with a significantly smaller foot than my other leg which gets a nice tan, but I didn't realize they could be two different genders. That was a really awesome ending! Keep up the wonderful work!
Date: 04/04/12 11:50 pm Title: God
oh dear. MY EYELIDS.
I feel i'm a little schizophrenic, hearing stuff but i don't know.. I thank all gods i don't suffer this way.
I loved the surprise in the end. Where did Bill go? Care to explain? I didn't understand :)
good job! :3
Author's Response: Bill and Tom were the same person all along, so Bill died with Tom :] thank you for reading.
Date: 04/04/12 05:41 pm Title: God
sick and twisted i love it :D
Date: 04/04/12 10:28 am Title: God
Hmm..interesting...but I liked it!
Date: 04/03/12 10:19 pm Title: God
“Where’s the D.B.?” She queried to her partner, David Jost, who smirked and chuckled lightly. -- Sorry, but I think it was in *extremely* bad taste for David to express the slightest bit of amusement in this situation. Finding a body is not funny. (With that, what does DB stand for? 'Dead body'...?)
I was completely blind-sided by this. Wow :/ This is a real condition? I'm familiar with dissociative disorder (being a psychiatrist-to-be), but with the blood changing? That's... crazy. I suppose the mind is able to do anything, under duress.
I'm impressed. Good call on the further explanation in the endnote. This truly makes one think.
Author's Response: Yes, DB stands for dead body. Common slang. Sorry if that is in bad taste for you, but one will grow accustomed and unbothered by events after spending enough time in the profession. He was more amused by Franz's confusion than the dead body. Chimeraism is something one is born with, it isn't developed. It occurs when the egg doesn't split fully, kind of like conjoined twins but not enough to the point where there are physical attributes of both twins (except, of course, the blood).
Date: 03/19/12 07:03 pm Title: God
Woah... Okay... Woah... Now this is twisted anmd sick and all over tough to read, but I really like the way youi strech the limits and even if I feel little bity sick with all of this, I think this is great job. Especially I enjoyed the part where Tom's mental submission was visible, before the physical part. I can only imagine what the last part will bring... :)
Date: 03/19/12 05:45 pm Title: God
I'm really really hoping that a major twist is that this was all a delusion or dream or something. God this is sick...why do I read shit like this?? But now I gotta find out how it ends. Can't wait to see the rest.
Date: 03/17/12 10:16 am Title: God
O_O Is there gonna be a sequel to this? It deserves one!
Author's Response: ... That's a good idea.. Hmmm...
Date: 03/16/12 07:22 pm Title: God
Please excuse my language...
That was fucked up!!!!!
OMG I don't use bad language often but that chapter was so hurtful to read.
I can't even imagine getting my eyelids cut off >.
Date: 03/16/12 12:12 pm Title: God
Lol "water sports"...! Ok that made me crack up.
Date: 03/16/12 03:28 am Title: God
Gah DX See, here is when death is sooo preferable.
Date: 03/12/12 10:22 pm Title: God
WoW! I never thought I would enjoy Tom's discomfort this much!! Muuuhaaaaa! More!!