Date: 05/02/13 03:44 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Hey, its been nearly a year!! You gonna post?
Author's Response: Oh god, has it really been that long? Sorry about that, stuff happened and I haven't felt like writing in a really long time... I am going to start updating this again though, pretty soon...maybe tonight if I get around to it :) rnI'm glad you enjoyed this so far though :) and thanks for your other comment too :)
Date: 05/02/13 01:56 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Hey, I read the first story I Will Find You and I loved it, and so far, I'm enjoying this WAY more than my schoolwork. One question, how old are the twins in this series? 15? 16?
Date: 08/01/12 05:42 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
i hope they can work it out ^-^ keep up the good work i really like this series want tp see how it ends ^^
Date: 05/28/12 04:20 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Oh, I hope they can make up. I'm not surprised though. Bill had lived such a different life before he came back to his family that it must be difficult for him to fit back in. He's been through things that no child should have to suffer so in a way he's much more experienced than Tom, much more adult, and yet he's still just a child who has to go to school. He likely resents Tom trying to tell him what to do when he's lived on the streets and is much more mature in many ways than his brother. Still, I hope they can work things out because Tom's been there for Bill ever since he returned home and has faced up to bullies for him.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. It might work out, it might not. The next chapter just needs to be validated so you can find out soon. Thanks again for the review it means a lot.
Date: 05/27/12 05:23 am Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Poor Andi, so scared to trust anyone. Can't blame him though. Even though Tom's advice was probably good about allowing him time to settle in, he must've felt abandoned by Bill not visiting him. And he's grieving for Sarah and missing all his other friends. I hope he can make a home with Alexis and they don't let him down. This was a good catch up on how things are going with Andi, and I'm really happy you updated.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it, I really appreciate the review and sorry for not updating sooner. The next chapter should be up later on tonight :) Thanks again.
Date: 05/09/12 05:53 am Title: I Will Not Be Broken
I liked it!!! It was emotional and I am happy that Andy, Gustav and Mat have found homes!!! I can't wait to read the rest!
Date: 04/26/12 12:21 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
I loved the way you had Bill visit Derek in prison and so we find out why he's like he is. Like Tom, I almost feel sorry for him. I wonder how the other kids, especially Andreas will get on in his foster home. After being abused like Bill when he lived with other people you can understand his trust issues. So sad the twins standing on the bridge and Bill crying over Sarah. Here's hoping he can settle in to living back at home better now that he's not being bullied. I suspect there will be more problems for him though. So glad you updated.
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad that you liked this chapter, and again I am really sorry that I didnt update sooner. We will see how the others are getting on in the next chapter. That should be up soon, I just need to finish and edit it. Thanks again for the review :)
Date: 04/25/12 01:59 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Awesome!!! Just read the last parts that i've lost!!!!! You know how much I like I don't need to repeat it :)
Author's Response: Haha thanks :D I am just about to post the next chapter, I have had it written for a while but just kept forgetting to post it, sorry. Anyway I am glad yopu still like this :D
Date: 04/23/12 10:24 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
MOAR PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh okay I shall update very soon, I have it written but kept forget to post...woops
Date: 03/18/12 06:40 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
I knew Derek was an asshole but I didn't expect him to kill anyone
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I am going to go into detail about that in the next chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I am going to go into detail about that in the next chapter
Date: 03/17/12 03:59 am Title: I Will Find You
ah, interesting, this reminds me a lot of the beginning of my first story, Rescue Me From Hell (on hiatus, but I am in the process of finishing it...:/), different plot, but similar take on abuse. take a look if you're interested in the comparison (just cuz they could seriously be cousins :)) i really let mine get out of hand though...45 chapters and I still haven't wrapped it up...I have a couple chapters on my hard drive, but I want to finish it before I post again to avoid another hiatus.
anyway, interesting. I've always had a thing for Bill being used, abused, and loved back to life...:3
Author's Response: Haha yeah I shall definately go and take a look at that, sounds pretty cool :)
Date: 03/17/12 02:05 am Title: I Will Not Be Broken
ROFL
i would have laughed too...they are identical twins LOL
Date: 03/14/12 11:12 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
i always find it hard to write
Date: 03/14/12 05:18 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
poor Bill
please update soon
Date: 03/14/12 04:51 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Oh, that last sentence was so sad. Just about said it all about how shitty Bill's life had been. He must've thought when he found his family that all his worries were over but he just swapped one set of problems for another. I loved how Tom refused to leave Bill and how Bill wanted Tom to stay. They are so sweet. I feel sorry for Simone too, she lost her little boy and now he's back he's still suffering. This might have been a short chapter but it was very emotional and powerful. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you thought so :)
Date: 03/08/12 07:50 am Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Aww nein! At least Bill showed he can pack a punch eh? haha, awesome work, can't wait for more:)
Author's Response: Haha yeah. Thankyou, I shall update tonight, promise :)
Date: 03/08/12 04:30 am Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Great fight. Happy Bill slugged Derek, the fucker deserved a lot more. I love how all the guys look out for each other. Just hope that Derek doesn't cause more trouble for Bill's friends now he knows where they're at. And I'm guessing that Simone probably saw Bill's bandaged arms with him not having his jacket. Poor Bill, shit at school and now having to face more shit at home. Can't wait to find out what happens.
Author's Response: Haha thanks, yeah I know Derek deserved a hell of a lot more, he will get what's coming to him eventually though dont worry. I am going to update tonight, I'm sorry this hasnt been updated for a while but there will be a new chapter really soon :)
Date: 03/07/12 09:46 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
please update soon?
Author's Response: I will update tonight, I promise. Im so sorry I havent updated in a while, some stuff has happened and I have found it difficult to think of anything to write.
Date: 03/06/12 06:41 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
ROFL
looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: Haha glad this made lugh. Next chapter should be up soon, just need it to be validated :)
Date: 03/06/12 04:56 pm Title: I Will Not Be Broken
Aw that was a sweet chapter! maybe... Simone and Gordon find out!? :O can't wait for more work from you! :)
Author's Response: Haha glad you liked it. That is a very good idea haha I have already written the next chap but this is definately a possibility. Thank You :D x