Date: 03/17/25 12:17 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 10/01/14 09:09 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
I can't believe that I never left a review. What the hell is wrong with me?! This is like sooooo fucking hot stuff that I'm just gonna die! I've read this a hundred times already and each time I just love this more. Gosh!!
Date: 03/11/12 12:34 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
Dude...Wow. I think that was almost every fantasy I've ever had about the twins outlined in a fic (the only ones not there were botTom and three- to foursome (the other band members) XD) Awesome job on this, and I will most DEFINITELY be reading your other stuff.
Date: 11/23/11 10:46 pm Title: Banana Berry Cherry Smoothie
i love it!!! this makes me want to buy thoes boots so tom can do that to me XD super hot i love everthing you post
Author's Response:
Thanks! glad you liked it! -hugs-
Date: 11/22/11 11:59 am Title: Banana Berry Cherry Smoothie
Really hot. I loved it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! -hugs-
Date: 11/21/11 08:55 am Title: Banana Berry Cherry Smoothie
Oh god... Now I can't sleep. Dood Thank you so much!!! This is amazing. I'm not used to this kind of writing style but I got over it when the smutty part came. I love this! But now I'm hungry. -__-
Author's Response:
Now you get why I hate Tom so much right now. I never write like this and he insisted on doing it in his pov and have no dialogues. Stupid demanding Tomi.
rnThe first draft was written normally and I had to start over because of that fucker. >.<
rnYay! glad you liked it!
Date: 11/20/11 09:30 pm Title: Banana Berry Cherry Smoothie
yeah. this was hot. i can see why they're bills favourite boots. i really can. loved it!
Author's Response:
-nodnod- Ikr? Those boots will be the death of me. And Tom. XD glad you liked it! -hugs-
Date: 11/20/11 07:47 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
Wow I love this, really good story
Date: 11/20/11 05:57 pm Title: Banana Berry Cherry Smoothie
omfg, I just laughed my ass off, literally, that gif is just perfect xD
And the story too, hot ^_^
Author's Response:
I blame the gif for the story being incoherent. XD I was just sitting here trying to write and then THAT.
rnGlad you liked it!
Date: 03/17/11 01:42 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
That was so hot!
Date: 03/09/11 02:24 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
love the story now wheres the story of what happened in the video??
Date: 10/05/10 11:02 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
god.... I love those boots too...
Date: 08/10/10 11:53 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
ooohhh very nice. I would love to see what happened in the video. poor Tomi with his self hatred for hurting Bill.
Date: 06/09/10 01:22 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
Well, there are many spots where you abruptly change tenses. You switch from past tense to present, and it sounds off in some places because of this. If you want, I can read through and correct your tense errors so that the whole fic is the same throughout. Just let me know :)
Date: 06/09/10 12:53 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
I thoroughly enjoyed this. There were some grammatical errors that I noticed, but they weren't too bad.
Anyways, I love those damn boots! They seriously scream, "Fuck me!!" This was incredibly sexy and I loved how much Bill teased Tom!! Nice job. I'm looking foreward to a story about what happened in the video *wink* ;)
Author's Response: oh. could you point it out so I could fix them? and I'm working on it! -hugs- glad you liked it!!
Date: 06/07/10 09:14 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
Whoa! NOW YOU HAVE TO MAKE A STORY OF THE VIDEO!!!! =DDDDD This was umm...crazy?... hot?..okay i sound like a pervert now 0-o good one shot i'm leaving bye. XD
Author's Response: working on it dear! -hugs- glad you liked it! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06/07/10 03:44 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
lmao! those boots are amazing. i miss them as much as Bill! well...maybe not as much as Bill. lol, i dont think Tom taught him any lessons. super sexy!!
Author's Response: Bill never learns.. -scratches head- especially if teaching him a lesson consist of fucking him three ways to sunday... XD -hugs- thanks for reading!
Date: 06/07/10 02:21 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
It was me! ME! You forget our conversation so easily, darlen? why I'm shocked! Shocked I say! *pouts*
Eh, I'm being a whiny pouty bitch, don't mind me.
But seriously though, that was just... *drools* So hothothothot
(I think I'll go pour some chilled holy water over myself now)
Mmm... that was just tasty... I think I'll go read it again ;D
Author's Response: -tackleglomp-it was you!!!!!!!!!! dude... I had been looking for like a couple of days for who that person is!! omg.. now I know!! I am so glad you liked it! that was actually for you!
Date: 06/07/10 12:55 am Title: Strawberry Smoothie
I miss those boots something terrible!!! They scream SEXXXXXXX.
Thank you for writing a story about that delicious pair of F me boot's!
Author's Response: -hugs- you're welcome! and thank you for reading this!
Date: 06/06/10 11:20 pm Title: Strawberry Smoothie
What the hell, Mika?! I swear... You are a genius! Can I have your brain? Please? *begs* Nah, Im kidding. But seriously, this story is amazing. But now I want Bill's boots. Thanks a lot xD
Author's Response: it's okay franz! -gives you brain- I am so glad you like this! and me too.. I love those boots to bits.. -hugs- thanks for reading!